2026届新高考英语三轮冲刺复习玫瑰花的救赎读后续写

2026届新高考英语三轮冲刺复习玫瑰花的救赎读后续写ThecarturnedontothefamiliarroadthatledtoGrandma’sfarm.“Jude,thissummerholidaywillbeagreatchanceforyoutostaywithyourgrandma,”Dadsaidashedrove.Everymoment,weweremovingfartherawayfromthecity,theplacewhereIknewhowtodothingsright.Thecarenginewasn’toffbeforeGrandmahuggedme.Islowlydraggedmyselfoutofthecar.“Jude,youlookunhappy.Why?”Grandmaasked.Sheactedlikenothingbadhadhappenedlasttime.CouldIaskhowmuchmoneyherneighborMr.Jacksonhadlostbecauseofmymistake?Washestillupsetwithme?“I’mfine,”Ianswered.“I’mjustmissingmycomputercamp.ComputersaresomethingI’mgoodat.”“Thatsoundsdisappointing.”Grandmanodded.Ifeltunhappyaboutmypastmistakesandmissedmycomputercamp.AnalysethetextItraveledtothefarmwithmydadandmissedmylifeinthecity.IlikedvisitingthefarmduringbreaksbeforeImessedthingsuplastsummer.Grandmalivedalone,andMr.Jacksonwaslikefamilytoher.ThenonedayIforgottolockthegateandletthegoatsintohisflowerbeds.Helostalmostallhisrosesforthefarmers’market.Now,backatthefarm,Ifeltnervous.IwastryingtohideintheroomwhenIsawMr.Jackson!HewasopeningthedoorandcallingGrandma.“Ineedhelp!”heyelledtoher.“Justasecondforthefreshlyharvestedroses!”Thatwaswhenhesawme.Ifeltmyhearttightenandwasreadyforhiscriticism.Ideservedit.Hehadprobablybeenwaitingforthismomentsincelastsummer.IforgottolockthegateandgoatsruinedJackson’srosesMrJacksonaskedforhelpandIfearedthecriticismHowever,Mr.Jacksongreetedmehappily,“Great,Judeishere!Yourgrandmaalwaystellsusyouareawonderfullycompetent(有能力的)computerprogrammer.”Ishookmyhead.“Iamnotcompetent.IamsorryImessedthingsup.”Hewassurprisedandcomfortedme,“Itwasanaccident.Beingcompetentdoesn’tmeanyounevermakemistakes.”Ilookedoutofthewindow.Therewerepilesofroseswaitingtobesold.“Jude,canyouhelpus?Wewanttosellrosesonline.Wehaveacomputerandalltheparts(零件)forourinternetconnection,butwejustcan’tsetitup,”Grandmaasked.Nointernet.Theyseemedtoliveinthetwentiethcentury.Mr.Jacksongreetedmehappilyandcomfortedme.Mr.Jacksonaskedmeforhelp:Conflict&Theme外部冲突内部冲突卖玫瑰花Wehaveacomputerandalltheparts(零件)forourinternetconnection,butwejustcan’tsetitup,”Grandmaasked.Nointernet.Theyseemedtoliveinthetwentiethcentury.【How】如何解决问题？Jude用自己的计算机能力协助Mr.Jackson&Grandma完成网络连接和线上销售工作，使农村进入21世纪，成功弥补之前的错误，销售玫瑰花我逃避我之前犯下的错误我认为有能力等于不犯错误，陷入自我怀疑直面错误，利用计算机能力解决之前犯下的错误我意识到有能力不等于不犯错误，重拾自信Conflict&Theme善良？（Itiskindnessthatmakestheworldgoesaround）科技改变生活？（Technologychangesourlife）人物自我成长（敢于面对错误，意识到有能力并不等于不犯错误）“Itwasanaccident.Beingcompetentdoesn’tmeanyounevermakemistakes.”MrJacksonsaid.MaybeIcouldbesomeonewhowasreallycompetent.Withinafewhours,ordersforrosesfloodedin.Picturetheplot我是否同意帮忙？我点头同意，表示会全力以赴。我接下来的行动？走进屋内，拿工具组建网络。从P2首句来看，P1应以什么结尾？给我带来什么心理转变？网店创建好，开始接单。增强信心，渐渐驱散了去年夏天犯错的阴霾。Withinafewhours,ordersforrosesfloodedin.Picturetheplot衔接过渡总结/升华看到这些订单，Mr.Jackson和Grandma的反应？俩人脸上绽开惊讶又自豪的笑容，纷纷称赞我的能力。我们几人接下来的行动？忙完后我们的互动？整个下午都忙于售卖工作：Grandma包装玫瑰，Mr.Jackson为花束贴上标签，我则回复顾客的咨询。玫瑰售罄后，奶奶再次肯定了我。这件事给我的感悟？能力不在于规避错误，而在于直面错误，用自己的才能去疗愈与成长。写作存在问题情节脱节：忽略原文伏笔（如农场有电脑和网络零件），凭空添加不合理情节（如Jude外出购买新设备），导致与原文逻辑断裂；心理描写缺失：Jude从不安到自信的转变过程未体现，仅单纯叙述事件，人物形象不丰满。谦辞造句1.见到祖母和杰克逊先生鼓励的眼神，我鼓起勇气，摆脱了挥之不去的自我怀疑，并决心帮助他们，弥补我去年的错误。【句式一:Atthesightof/At

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