三年（2023-2025）中考英语真题分类汇编（全国）专题45 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类（解析版）

专题45书面表达考点4叙事描写类(2025中考真题）（2025·吉林·中考真题）善意的话语犹如寒夜中的暖炉，正应了那句话：“良言一句三冬暖。”请以“KindWordsMakeaDifference”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：（1）表达善意的话语在生活中的重要性；（2）叙述一件你经历的与善意的话语有关的事；（3）谈谈善意的话语给你或他人带来的影响；（4）倡议对他人说善意的话语。写作要求：（1）层次清晰，语言流畅；（2）词数在90～100之间，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。KindWordsMakeaDifferenceWecanhearkindwordseverywhereinourlife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考例文：KindWordsMakeaDifferenceWecanhearkindwordseverywhereinourlife.Theybringuswarmthandcouragetokeepfightingon.BackinGrade7,theminuteIgottheresultoftheEnglishexam,Ifeltsad.Ifailedagain.Ms.Hucameuptomeandsaidsoftly,“Iknowyouarehard-working.Pleasegoontrying.”Herkindwordsmovedmedeeply.Iwentonstudyinghardandmygradesgotbetter.NowwheneverImeettrouble,IthinkofMs.Hu’skindwords.Theymakeadifferencetome.Kindwordshavetemperature,sosaykindwordsandbecomeawarmperson.KindWordsMakeaDifferenceWecanhearkindwordseverywhereinourlife.Kindwordsmakeusrelaxedandencourageustobecomebetterpersons.Lastyear,Ifeltnervousbeforeaspeechcompetition.Icouldn’teatwellorsleepwell.Mymomfoundthatandsaid,“Mydear,Iknowthecompetitionisimportanttoyou,butyouaremoreimportanttome.Nomatterwhatprizeyouget,youarestillmyonlyone.”HerwordsmadememoveddeeplyandIrelaxedalot.Fromthenon,Iknewmymother’slovewouldbealwayswithme.Sopleasesaykindwordstoeachother,anditcanhelpusgetbetterandbetter.KindWordsMakeaDifferenceWecanhearkindwordseverywhereinourlife.Theycanbringpeoplecouragetofacedifficulties.Lastsummer,myfriendandIlearnedtoridehorses.Soafraidwashethathewasn’tbraveenoughtogetclosetothehorse.Iencouragedhim,“Bebraveandyoucandoit.”Mykindwordsmadehimtrusthimself.Heclimbedontothehorseslowly.Itwasmykindwordsthatmademyfriendtrywithcourageinsteadoffear.Remembertosaykindwordstoothers.Itisworthmakingevenalittledifference.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：一般现在时、一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意保证要点齐全，无单词和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步，首先引入文章话题：表达善意的话语在生活中的重要性；第二步，具体叙述一件经历的与善意的话语有关的事并介绍对自己的影响；最后一步，提出倡议，倡议对他人说善意的话语。[亮点词汇]①goon继续②makeadifference有影响，起作用③encouragesbtodosth鼓励某人做某事④remembertodosth.记得做某事⑤beworthdoingsth值得做某事[高分句型]①BackinGrade7,theminuteIgottheresultoftheEnglishexam,Ifeltsad.（theminute引导时间状语从句）②Nomatterwhatprizeyouget,youarestillmyonlyone.（Nomatterwhat+从句）③Soafraidwashethathewasn’tbraveenoughtogetclosetothehorse.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）（2025·天津·中考真题）请你根据以下内容提示，以“ASpecialExperienceofLiHua”为题，为校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。（1）去年暑假，李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。（2）李华为孩子们讲解科学知识，让他们对科学更感兴趣。（3）当孩子们提出问题时，李华认真解答。（4）李华告诉孩子们参观时注意安全。（5）你认为……参考词汇：天津科学技术馆TianjinScienceandTechnologyMuseum

小讲解员littleguide要求：（1）词数：80~100个。（2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。ASpecialExperienceofLiHuaLastsummerholiday,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ASpecialExperienceofLiHuaLastsummerholiday,LiHuahadaspecialexperienceasalittleguideatTianjinScienceandTechnologyMuseum.Firstofall,heexplainedscienceknowledgetochildreninsimpleEnglish,makingthembecomemoreinterestedinscience.Also,whenchildrenaskedquestions,heansweredthempatientlywithasmile.Heevenremindedeveryonetowatchtheirstepandstaysafewhilevisiting.IthinkLiHuareallydidagreatjob.Thisexperiencenotonlyhelpedothersbutalsomadehimmoreconfident.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体介绍这次经历；第三步，表达感受。[亮点词汇]①answerthempatiently耐心回答它们②remindsbtodosth提醒某人做某事③staysafe保证安全[高分句型]①Also,whenchildrenaskedquestions,heansweredthempatientlywithasmile.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Thisexperiencenotonlyhelpedothersbutalsomadehimmoreconfident.（notonly...butalso...并列结构）（2025·河北·中考真题）假定你是校英文报记者冀方，外国学生Alice上周五在你校体验了一节体育课，请根据你对她的采访记录写一篇英语短文发给校报。WhatAlicedid:·learnaboutping-pong·practiceping-pong·…Alice’sfeelings:·aboutthePEteacher·…注意：（1）短文须包括记录中所有信息（含需要补充的两处内容），可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Alice,astudentfromabroad,hadaPEclassinourschoollastFriday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Alice,astudentfromabroad,hadaPEclassinourschoollastFriday.Shelearnedmanythingsaboutping-pong,forexample,thehistoryandrulesofthegame.Alicetriedherbesttolearnskillsandshepracticedping-pongfornearly20minutes.Andthenshesharedherschoollife.Atlast,shesaidthePEteacherwasverypatientandsheexpressedherthankstotheteacher.Shealsosaidthestudentswereverylovelyandfriendly.“I’msoluckytohavethechancetotakethePEclass,”shesaidexcitedly.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：以一般过去时为主；③提示：作文需包含采访记录中所有信息（含两处需补充内容），适当添加细节，保持逻辑连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，描述Alice的课堂活动；第二步，描写Alice的感受；第三步，结尾引用Alice的总结性话语。[亮点词汇]①forexample比如②patient耐心的③havethechancetodosth做某事的机会[高分句型]Shealsosaidthestudentswereverylovelyandfriendly.（宾语从句）（2025·云南·中考真题）你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“AnUnforgettableClass”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述令你难忘的一节课，并谈谈你从中获得的感受或受到的启发。要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableClassLastFriday,wehadanunforgettableEnglishclass.Ourteacher,Mr.Wang,startedtheclasswithafungamecalled“GuesstheWord”.WeweredividedintotwoteamsandhadtoguessEnglishwordsfromourteammates’drawings.Everyonewasexcitedandlaughedalot.Afterthegame,Mr.Wangtaughtussomenewwords.Heusedinterestingstoriestohelpusrememberthem.Ilearnedmanynewwordseasily.ThisclasswassointerestingthatIdidn’twantittoend.IrealizedthatlearningEnglishcanbefunandexciting.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为一般过去时；③提示：本文主要是介绍令你难忘的一节课，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，详细叙述令你难忘的一节课；第二步，谈谈你从中获得的感受。[亮点词汇]①bedividedinto被分成②usesth.todosth.使用某物做某事[高分句型]①ThisclasswassointerestingthatIdidn’twantittoend.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)②IrealizedthatlearningEnglishcanbefunandexciting.(that引导的宾语从句)（2025·陕西·中考真题）同学们，随着你们综合体育运动时间的增加，大家一定会有更多不同的收获和感受。本次的写作任务是以“Sports”为主题，写一篇英语小短文。请你从以下两个方面任选其一，根据写作要求，简单描述在体育活动中对你帮助最大的人，或者你克服困难的经历，认真完成写作任务。选择1:●Whohelpedyoumostinsports?(teacher/friend/…)●Howdidhe/shehelpyou?(train,show,encourage,haveaninfluenceon,…)●Whatprogresshaveyoumade?(……)选择2：●Whatproblem(s)didyoufacewhiledoingsports?(couldn’t,beweakin,…)●Howdidyousolveit/them?(ask...forhelp,learnsomeskills,practicehard,nevergiveup,…)●Whatchangeshaveyougotorhowdidyoufeel?(…)要求：1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；2.语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr.Liu/Ms.Wang/MaLi/WangGang;4.词数：不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)Thesedays,wehavemoretimetodosports.Weexperiencedmoreandsurelymadeprogress.Asforme,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Thesedayswehavemoretimetodosports.Weexperiencedmoreandsurelymadeprogress.Asforme,Ican’tforgetmyfriendWangGang.WangGangisgoodatplayingbasketball,butIwasn’t.WangGangsawthisandcametohelpme.Heshowedmehowtomovetheballandtrainedmehowtopassorcatchtheball.Afterthat,heencouragedmetoplayitwithothers.Hehadagreatinfluenceonme.Istartedtoplaybetterandbetter.ThemoreIplayedit,themoreIlikeit.Nowwe’rebothintheclassteam.IwillneverforgethishelpandIwillhelpotherslikehim!【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；

③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要遗漏要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍谁在运动中帮助自己最多；

第二步，具体介绍王刚是如何帮助自己的；

第三步，介绍自己取得的进步，并表达自己不会忘记王刚的帮助，以及自己也将像他那样帮助别人。

[亮点词汇]

①begoodat擅长②encouragesbtodosth鼓励某人做某事[高分句型]

ThemoreIplayedit,themoreIlikeit.（“the+比较级...，the+比较级...”句型）（2025·贵州·中考真题）英语老师Lucy为激发同学们学习英语的兴趣，鼓励大家记录课堂故事、班级活动、师生趣事等校园生活点滴，共同编写班级故事集OurStories。请参考图文信息，以“A(n)________Story”为题，写下你（们）的故事。写作要求：1.请补全标题；2.记录真实故事，表达个人情感；3.词数为80左右；4.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AFunnyEnglishClassStoryLastweek,ourEnglishteacherLucymadeusplayawordgame.Sheaskedustodescribeobjectswithoutsayingtheirnames.Whenitwasmyturn,Itriedtodescribean“apple”bysaying,“It’sred,round,andyoucaneatit.”Butmyclassmateshouted,“Atomato!”Everyonelaughed,includingLucy.ThoughIfailed,itwassofunny!Thisgamenotonlymadetheclasslivelybutalsohelpedusremembernewwordsbetter.Ifelthappyandexcited.NowIlookforwardtoeveryEnglishclassbecauselearningcanbefullofjoy!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：以一般过去时为主；③提示：根据所给提示和话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，补全标题；第二步，具体描述这个故事；第三步，表达感想和总结。[亮点词汇]①asksbtodosth要求某人做某事②helpsbdosth帮助某人做某事③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]ThoughIfailed,itwassofunny!（though引导让步状语从句）（2025·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李华。校英文报“STORY”专栏正在征集稿件，请你根据下面表格中的信息，以第一人称，用英语写一个故事投稿。WhenLastFridaymorningWhereSchoolsportsgroundWhoI,myclassmateWhatTakepartin,help,feelproud注意：1.短文须包含表格中的关键词，请增加细节以使故事完整；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数80~100。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AmemorablestoryLifeisfullofunforgettablemoments,whetherthey’reaboutsuccess,challengesorkindness.OnestorythathappenedlastFridayleftadeepimpressiononme.Itwasabrightmorningontheschoolsportsground,filledwithcheers.Duringthe100-meterrace,aclassmatesuddenlyfell.AsIwasresponsibleforfirstaidcoordination,Iquicklyrushedtogethelpandbroughtwater.Otherclassmatescomfortedhimwhilewewaitedforthestafftoarrive.Fortunately,hewasfineafterreceivingtreatment.However,Imissedmyowneventintheprocess.Atfirst,Ifeltalittledisappointed,butthatemotionsoonturnedintopride.Irealizedthatgivingupasmallpersonalhonortohelpsomeoneinneedwastrulymeaningful.Sometimes,thegreatestvictoriesaren’twononthetrack,butfeltintheheart.【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开头引出本文主题；

第二步，讲述故事发生的地点，时间和经过；第三步，从这个故事中得到的哲理感悟。

[亮点词汇]

①befullof充满

②leaveadeepimpressiononsb给某人留下深刻印象

③waitfor等待[高分句型]

①AsIwasresponsibleforfirstaidcoordination,Iquicklyrushedtogethelpandbroughtwater.（as引导原因状语从句）

②Irealizedthatgivingupasmallpersonalhonortohelpsomeoneinneedwastrulymeaningful.（that引导宾语从句）（2025·黑龙江·中考真题）图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.图示作文。2.词数：80-100之间。3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ItwasLily’smom’sbirthday.Lilywentbackhomehappilybecauseshewantedtogiveasurprisetohermom.Shepreparedtomakelongnoodlesformom.Itisasymboloflonglife.Shewishedhermomtolivehappilyandhealthily.Meanwhile,sheaddedeggstothenoodles.Shethoughteggsmeanlifeandgoodluck.AssoonasLilyfinishedthedeliciousnoodles,hermomcameback.Lilysaid,“Happybirthday,mom!”Hermomwassomovedthatshealmostcried.WhatagoodgirlLilyis!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：根据图示和要求书写内容，注意不要遗漏图片上的信息，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，根据最后一张图片上的文字提示，交代事件起因；第二步，根据图片内容展示，合理想象，描述做饭的过程和妈妈的感受；第三步，总结对图片中女孩的评价。[亮点词汇]①preparetodosth.准备做某事②wishsb.todosth.希望某人做某事③meanwhile同时[高分句型]①Lilywentbackhomehappilybecauseshewantedtogiveasurprisetohermom.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Hermomwassomovedthatshealmostcried.(so…that引导的结果状语从句)③WhatagoodgirlLilyis!(感叹句)（2025·贵州·中考真题）每一天都是生活的馈赠，用心感受，你会发现凡事皆为宝藏。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行主题为“ASpecialDaytoRemember”的征文活动。请参考图文信息，积极投稿。求：1．短文需包括所给要点，可适当发挥；2．内容积极向上，不少于80词；3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。1.Whatmadethedayspecial?：When，Who，Whathappened?2.Howdidyoufeelonthatday?ASpecialDaytoRememberLifeislikeaboxofchocolates.Youneverknowwhatyou’regonnaget._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ASpecialDaytoRememberLifeislikeaboxofchocolates.Youneverknowwhatyou’regonnaget.Lastwinter,Iexperiencedanunforgettableday.Itwasmy14thbirthday,andIthoughtitwouldbeordinary.However,myclassmatessurprisedmewithasecretpartyduringlunchbreak.Theydecoratedtheclassroomwithballoonsandgavemehandmadecards.Evenmyteacherjoinedin,bringingacake!Ifeltoverjoyedanddeeplytouched.TheirkindnessmademerealizehowluckyIwastohavesuchwarmfriendships.Thatdaytaughtmethatsmallactsoflovecanturnordinarymomentsintotreasures.Now,wheneverIfeeldown,Irecallthatspecialdayandsmile.Life’ssweetnessoftenhidesinsimplesurprises!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，辅以“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍那天的时间、人物以及发生了什么；第二步，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①overjoyed欣喜若狂的②makesbdosth使某人做某事③feeldown感到沮丧[高分句型]TheirkindnessmademerealizehowluckyIwastohavesuchwarmfriendships.（宾语从句）（2025·山西·中考真题）生活中总有很多爱包围着我们，父母的付出，老师的鼓励，朋友的支持，陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feellove,learntolove”的演讲比赛，请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。内容包括：·showwhatloveisinyoureyes·telloneofyourstoriesofbeingloved·sharetheinfluencethatthisstoryhasonyou要求：1.词数不少于80词；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Lovemeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Itcanbesupport,encouragementortrust.Inmyview,loveisunderstandingandrespect.Lastsummervacation,myfamilytalkedaboutwheretogoforourtrip.Iknewtheypreferrededucationalones,butIreallywantedsomethingrelaxing.Thinkingtwice,IsaidIhopedtogotothebeach.Tomysurprise,theyagreedhappily.Filledwithwarmth,Irealizedhowmuchtheylovedme.Loveisaboutcaringaboutothers’feelings.Justasmyparentsunderstandmeandrespectmychoice,IpromiseI’lldothesameforthem【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍你眼中的爱是什么；第二步，讲述一个你被爱的故事；第三步，分享这个故事对你的影响。[亮点词汇]①talkabout谈论②tomysurprise令我惊讶的是③filledwith充满[高分句型]Thinkingtwice,IsaidIhopedtogotothebeach.(现在分词作状语，宾语从句)（2025·江苏连云港·中考真题）假如你是李华，初中毕业在即，你校英文报“We’reGraduating”栏目正在征集毕业感言，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：(1)回顾一次难忘的经历；(2)表达一份感恩的心情；(3)展望一下未来的人生。注意：(1)词数90左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。Howtimeflies!Thethreeyearshasbeenfilledwithsomanymemories.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Howtimeflies!Thethreeyearshasbeenfilledwithsomanymemories.WheninGrade7,Iwastooshytospeakinclass.MyEnglishteacherMsMunoticedmeandkeptencouragingme.Littlebylittle,Icouldspeakinfrontofthewholeclass.I’mthankfultoMsMu.Withoutherhelp,Icouldn’tmakesomuchprogress.Ifeelsoluckytohavemetsomanyexcellentteacherslikeherduringmygrowth.Inthefuture,IhopetobeapersonlikeMsMu.Iwilldomyjobtothefullestandhelppeopleinneed.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，使作文内容意思完整。[写作步骤]第一步，回顾一次难忘的经历；第二步，表达一份感恩的心情；第三步，展望一下未来的人生。[亮点词汇]①too...to...太……而不能②infrontof在……之前③makeprogress取得进步[高分句型]Ifeelsoluckytohavemetsomanyexcellentteacherslikeherduringmygrowth.(动词不定式作原因状语)(2024中考真题）（2024·山西·中考真题）随着全球互联互通，青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youthisatimeforfighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行，你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括：·yourideaaboutwhatyoungpeopleshouldbelike·oneofyourstoriesaboutfighting·themeaningoffighting要求：1．词数不少于80词；2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Asyoungpeople,weshouldbebrave,confidentandcreative,butthemostimportantthingistobewillingtofight.Lastyear,IoftenmademistakeswhenIdidEnglishreadingexercises.Rememberingtheteacherhadevertoldusthemoreweread,thehigherourreadingabilitywouldbe,Idecidedtotry.IspentallmyfreetimeonEnglishreading.WheneverIread,Imadeeveryefforttounderstandthearticlesthoroughlyandwrotedownmyownunderstandingofthem.Gradually,Imadegreatprogressinreadingcomprehension.It’sfightingthatmakesusbetterandbetter.Fightingisthebrightestcolorofyouth.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，多种时态综合运用；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当补充细节。[写作步骤]第一步，阐述个人观点，认为青少年应该是什么样子的，具备什么样的品质；第二步，具体介绍个人的经历，阐述自己是如何奋斗的；第三步，表达个人感悟，阐述奋斗的意义。[亮点词汇]①bewillingtodosth愿意做某事②makemistakes犯错误③decidetodosth.决定做某事④spendsometimeonsth.花费时间做某事⑤makegreatprogressinsth.在某方面取得巨大进步[高分句型]①Lastyear,IoftenmademistakeswhenIdidEnglishreadingexercises.（when引导时间状语从句）②Rememberingtheteacherhadevertoldusthemoreweread,thehigherourreadingabilitywouldbe,Idecidedtotry.（the+比较级，the+比较级）③WheneverIread,Imadeeveryefforttounderstandthearticlesthoroughlyandwrotedownmyownunderstandingofthem.（whenever引导让步状语从句）（2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校EnglishReadingClub正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’sStory（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。选择一：以Sometimespeoplesurpriseus为题，内容包括：1．你对这句话的理解；2．结合实际生活举例说明；3．你得到的启发。选择二：以Troubleisafriend为题，内容包括：1．你对这句话的理解；2．结合实际生活举例说明；3．你得到的启发。注意：1．词数：100左右；2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Title:____________AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Title:Troubleisafriend AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.AndIthinktroubleisafriend.Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.InmyEnglishstudylastyear,mygrammarwasverybad.Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.Butthankstothehelpofmydeskmate,shehelpedmemakeagrammarstudyscheduleandhelpedmewithgrammareveryweek.AndIspentanhourstudyinggrammareveryday.Intheend,mygrammarimprovedgreatly.Inmyopinion,troubleisbad,butitsometimesmakesusbetter.Itremindsusnottogiveupwhenfacingdifficultiesandtofacethembravely.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。[亮点词汇]①thanksto多亏②helpsbdosth帮助某人做某事③inmyopinion在我看来[高分句型]①Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）②Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.（原因状语从句）（2024·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。（1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。（2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。（3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。（4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。（5）你认为……参考词汇：盲人

blindman

徘徊

wander要求：（1）词数：80~100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearPeter,Itistwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,Itistwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,WangHongsawanelderlyblindmanwanderingaroundthestreetcorneronherwayhome.WangHongofferedtohelphimcrosstheroadaftercommunicatingwiththeoldman.Whentheycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroadstoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.WangHongtooktheoldmanacrosstheroadandsaidgoodbyetohim.IthinkWangHongisreallyaverywarm-heartedandkindgirl.Ishouldlearnfromherandtrymybesttohelpothers.Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①onherwayhome在她回家的路上②offertodosth主动提出做某事③communicatewith沟通④learnfrom向某人学习[高分句型]①Whentheycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroadstoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.（when引导的时间状语从句）②IthinkWangHongisreallyaverywarm-heartedandkindgirl.（省略that的宾语从句