冀教八下英语Unit 1《单元写作》课件

单元写作描写春天/介绍最喜欢的季节Unit1Springiscoming!写作维度本单元的写作项目是“描写春天/介绍最喜欢的季节”，相关内容包含以下几个方面：(1)描写春天/介绍最喜欢的季节(2)描述该季节的天气和景象，喜欢的活动等(3)介绍二十四节气及相应的活动等。写作支架/模板描写春天/介绍最喜欢的季节开门见山，引出要写的季节具体阐述该季节的情况及活动等升华主题黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)开头段①Ofalltheseasons,Ilike...best.②Ilike...bestofall.③...ismyfavouriteseason.中间段①Theweatherisbecomingwarmerandwarmer.②Thewindblowsgentlyeveryday.③Autumniswhenthedaysgetshorterandthenightsgetlonger.④Itookadeepbreathandenjoyedthefreshair.⑤Thetreesturngreen.⑥Istayedinsideandwatchedtherainthroughthewindow.⑦Theflowersbloomonebyone.⑧Weoftenhave...holidays/festivalsinthe...days.结尾段①Springisthebeginningoftheyear.②Autumnisaseasonofgoldenfieldsandclearskies.③Springgivesmeafeelingofhope.经典例题(从经典例题学会审题)以“Spring—MyFavouriteSeason”为题写一篇有关春天的短文。提示：1.What’stheweatherlikeinspringinyourhometown?2.Whatscenerydoyouoftenseeinspring?3.Whatdoyouoftendoinspring?审人称：第一人称审体裁：说明文审时态：一般现在时审要点：天气、景色及活动写作要求：1.语句通顺，语言规范，可适当发挥；2.短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Spring—MyFavouriteSeasonOfalltheseasons,Ilikespringbest._________________________________________________________________________________精彩范文展示Spring—MyFavouriteSeasonOfalltheseasons,Ilikespringbest.Whenspringcomes,thedaysaregettinglonger.Theweatherbecomeswarmerandwarmer.Allthetreesturngreenandflowersbloom.Theymaketheworldmorebeautiful.Animalsalsobegintogooutforfood.①Thedaysaregettinglonger,andspringiscoming.(教材P2)Wedon’tneedtowearwinterclothes.Intheopenair,wecandolotsofactivities,likewalking,cyclingandflyingkites.Asthesayinggoes,“Ayear’splanstartswithspring.”Springisthebeginningoftheyear.Ilikespringbecauseitmeanshopeanditgivesthemotivationtokeepgoing.②Ilikespringbecausetherearelotsofactivitiestodo,likecycling,havingpicnics,andhiking.(教材P8)【亮点词块】gooutforfood外出觅食intheopenair在户外lotsof许多flykites放风筝【高分句子】Whenspringcomes,thedaysaregettinglonger.(When引导的时间状语从句)当春天来临的时候，白天变得越来越长了。Ayear'splanstartswithspring.(谚语)一年之计在于春。实战演练假如你是李华，你的英国好友Tom发来邮件，说非常想了解你家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动，请根据表格中的相关信息回复Tom。Theweathertemperature,warmandrainy...Spring

activities(任选两个即可)playTaiChispecialclothes,health,getonwellwithnature...flykitescolourful,differentshapes,goodluck...drinkspringteagreentea,goodforeyesandteeth,clearheat(清热)fromthebody...注意：1.回复邮件中须包括表格中的信息，活动任选两个即可，可适当发挥。2.回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。HiTom,I’mhappytoknowthatyouareinterestedinthespringinmyhometown.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.____________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua范文参考HiTom,I’mhappytoknowthatyouareinterestedinthespringinmyhometown.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.Inspring,thetemperatureisaround15-20°C.It’swarmbutoftenrainy.Peoplehereenjoytwospecialactivities.First,manypeopleweartraditionalsilkclothesandpracticeTaiChiinparks.Ithelpskeephealthyandconnectsuswithnature.Second,flyingkitesispopular.Wemakecolourfulonesindifferentshapeslikedragonsorbutterflies.Webelievetheycanbringgoodluck.Sometimesfamiliesd