Unit1Helpingthoseinneed（Writing）课件沪教版英语八年级下册

KaridaUnit1HelpingthoseinneedPeriod4WritingContentsLearningobjectivesLeadinPre-writingWhile-writingPost-writingSummaryAssessmentHomeworkBytheendofthelesson,Iwillbeableto...1234knowthestepsofwritingalettertoaskpermission;useaspidergramtoconceptualizewritingcontent;masterthewritingformatofthelettertoaskpermission；writealettertoaskpermission.00LearningobjectivesLeadin01bookfair(书籍义卖)fleamarket(跳蚤市场)charityshow(慈善义演)Ifyouwanttoorganizeavoluntaryactivity,whatshouldyoudo?ThinkWhatkindsofvoluntaryactivitiesdoyouknow?Callonyourclassmatestotakepartinit.AttendthisvolunteeractivityontimeChooseatypeofvolunteeractivity.voluntaryactivityPre-writingHowtoorganizeavoluntaryactivity?Askforpermissionformyourheadteacherorheadmaster.Preparealltheitemsneededfortheactivity.Pre-writing02二一教育Makeanoralstatement(当面陈述)?Writeane-mail?Generallyspeaking,sendinganemailtoaskforpermissionisamoreformalwayanditwillalsohelptheheadteacherbetterunderstandyourplan.Howtoaskforpermission?Pre-writing02二一教育Readthesampleemailandseehowitisorganized.P12IntroductionBodyConclusionHowtowriteanemailtoaskforpermission?Pre-writing02Howtowriteanemailtoaskforpermission?√√√√√√Pre-writing02BodyHowWhatWhyWhoHowdoesWangYao’sgroupplantohelpchildreninneed?WhyisWangYaoaskingforpermissionforavoluntaryactivity?WhatdoesWangYao’sgroupplantodoatthechildren’shome?Whohasofferedtohelp?LanguageUsepoliteexpressions(e.g.Couldyouplease…?)UsecompletesentencesHowtowriteanemailtoaskforpermission?Pre-writingHowtowriteanemailtoaskforpermission?Discussingroupsandlistthekeypointsoftheemail.Purposeoftheemail:Purposeofactivities:Activity:123Peopleinvolved:Time&Place:Requestforapproval:Toaskforpermissiontoorganizeavoluntaryactivity.(Activityname:______________)Tohelp____________Couldyoupleasegiveuspermissiontoorganizetheactivity?______________________________________________________________________________Ourclassvolunteers,_______________________________________DearMsYan,Iamwritingtoyouaboutmygroup’splansto__________________________(Purposeoftheemail).Inorderto_________________________(Purposeofactivities),weplantoorganizeavisittothechildren’shomenextweek.Fivestudentsfromourclasshaveofferedtohelp.Weplantoteachthechildrentheretodofunactivitieslike_______________(Activity1)and_______________(Activity2).Somelocalshopshavedonatedcraftmaterialsforustouse.Wearealsothinkingabouthelpingthechildren______________________(Activity3).Wewouldliketovisitthechildren’shomeon___________________(Time).Couldyouplease___________________________________________(Requestforapproval)?Thankyouforyoursupport!Welookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,WangYaoCompletethesampleemail.startavoluntaryactivityhelpchildreninneedflowerarrangingpaper-cuttingtidyuptheirroomsSaturday,23MarchgiveuspermissiontoorganizetheactivityPre-writingHowtowriteanemailtoaskforpermission?Pre-writingHowtowriteanemailtoaskforpermission?Writeanemailtoaskforpermission.Usethesentencesinthesentencebankbelowtohelpyou.KeypointsSentencesPurposeoftheemailWewouldliketoorganizeavoluntaryactivity,andIamwritingtoaskforyoursupport.Time&placeWeplantogototheChildren’sHomeonSaturday,23March.AimOurmaingoalistobringthesechildrenjoy.ActivitiesWewillplaysomefungamestogether.Wewillhelpthechildrencleantheirroomsanddotheirhomework.Wewillteachthechildrenhowtomakepaper-cuts.EndingtheemailWehopeyouwillapprovethisplan.While-writing03Writeyouremail.Writinganemailtoaskforpermissionforavoluntaryactivity.Step1PlanBrainstormwhatvoluntaryactivityyouplantoorganizeandtakenotes.UsethepointsinExercise1tohelpyou.Step2Writeanemailtoaskforpermission.While-writing03Writeyouremail.Writinganemailtoaskforpermissionforavoluntaryactivity.Step3CheckandreviseTick(√)theboxestocheckyourwriting,andthenreviseit.Iusepolitelanguageinmyemail.Iexplainedthepurposeatthebeginningoftheemail.Iusedcertainexpression,suchas

toexplainourplansclearly.IusedthewordsandexpressionsIlearntinthisunit.Iusedcorrectspelling,grammarandpunctuation.Post-writing04Samplewriting.DearMsLi,Iamwritingtoyouaboutourclass’splanstostartavoluntaryactivity.Inordertoraisemoneyforchildreninneed,wewouldliketoorganizeabookfairatourschool.Sevenstudentsfromourclasshavevolunteeredtohelpwiththeevent.Theschoollibrarianhasalsopromisedtohelpus.Weplantocollectusedbooksfromstudentsandteachers.Alocalbookshophasalsodonatedsomenewbookswecansell.WewouldliketoholdtheeventonSaturday,25September.Couldyoupleasegiveuspermissiontoorganizethisactivity?Webelieveitwillbeameaningfulandeducationalexperienceforeveryoneinvolved.Welookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,WangYanSummary06Thewordswehavelearned

1.permission__________2.arrange_________3.捐赠；赠送__________4.包含__________准许；许可排列；布置donateinvolveThephraseswehavelearnedSummary06inorderto目的是；为了

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ThesentenceswehavelearnedSummary06二一教育KeypointsSentencesPurposeoftheemailWewouldliketoorganizeavoluntaryactivity,andIamwritingtoaskforyoursupport.Time&placeWeplantogoto