读后续写：道德困境与个人成长类（讲义）-2026届高考英语一轮复习

浙江省嘉兴中学2026届普通高等学校招生全国统一模拟考试英语试题（三）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

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workingonformonths.Thetopicwasrenewableenerg)|,andAlexhadbuiltamodel

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wasabouttoleave,hisyoungerbrotherAxcameintotheroomwithbig,

sorry-lookingeyes(冲兖就来了1.Inhishand,heheldabrokenpieceofthecar'ssolarpanel.

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•becausehefeltguilty.」wasjustsocurious,iwantedtoseehowitworked,and1

didn'tmeantobreakit.”

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bottomofhisstomach..hepresenialionwasinafewhours，增0冲突后＞.andtherewasn't

timetofixit.Hethoughtaboutexplainingwhathappened,buthewasworriedit

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alittlebit,madehimfeelsick由■人财.

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finallymovedusingsolarpower现衣分叫做方孔状语iHisdreamsofwinningthecompetition

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rememberedthetalksatthedinnertablealongtimeago,whenhisparents101dhim

howimportantitwastobehonest,responsiblefandkeeptrying.Theirwordskept

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hisface.Heknewexactlywhathehadtodo.

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浙江省嘉兴中学2026届普通高等学校招生全国统一模拟考试英语试题（三）

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Itwasacoolfallmorning,andthesunwasjuststartingtorise,castingawarm

lighttothequitneighborhood.ForAlex,thehighschooljuniorwithadeeppassion

forscience,wasfilledwithbothexcitementandnervousness.Todaymarkedthefinal

presentationofhisscienceproject,whichhehadbeenworkingonfbrmonths.The

topicwasrenewableenergy,andAlexhadbuiltamodelofasolar-poweredcar.He

hopeditwouldhelphimwintheregionalsciencefair.

Alexcheckedhisbagonelastlime:notes,sides,andthemodelcar.Justashewas

abouttoleave,hisyoungerbrotherAxcameintotheroomwithbig,sorry-looking

eyes.Inhishand,heheldabrokenpieceofthecar'ssolarpanel."I'mreallysorry,

Alex!”Axsaidinaveryquietvoice,hisheaddownbecausehefeltguilty.4tlwasjust

socurious.Iwantedtoseehowitworked,andIdidn'tmeantobreakit.”

Alex'seyesopenedwideinshock,andhisheartfeltlikeitdroppedtothebottom

ofhisstomach.Thepresentationwasinafewhours,andtherewasn'ttimetofixit.

Hethoughtaboutexplainingwhathappened,buthewasworrieditwouldsoundlike

anexcuseandmakehimlesslikelytowin.Hecouldputabatteryinthecarandact

likenothingwaswrong.Butwhenhethoughtaboutit,hefeltuncomfortable.Hewas

proudofbeinghonest,andtheideaofcheating,evenalittlebit,madehimfeelsick.

Ashewalkedtoschool,hisstepswereslowandheavy.Hethoughtaboutallthe

late-nighthourshespentworkingathisworkbench,howfrustratedhewaswhenthe

circuitsdidn'twork,andhowhappyhewaswhenthecarfinallymovedusingsolar

power.Hisdreamsofwinningthecompetitionandbeingrecognizedfbrhishardwork

seemedtobegoingaway.Butthenherememberedthetalksatthedinnertablealong

timeago,whenhisparentstoldhimhowimportantitwastobehonest,responsible,

andkeeptrying.Theirwordskeptplayinginhismind.Bythetimehegottothe

schoolgates,adeterminedlookwasonhisface.Heknewexactlywhathehadtodo.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ParagraphI:Alexstoodinfrontoftheclassandjudges,feelingnervous.

Paragraph2:Laterthatday,Alexreceivedanemailfromthesciencefair

organization.

一、读后续写类型分析

该文章属于道德困境与成长型读后续写。这类故事通常围绕主角面临道德选

择，通过内心挣扎最终做出正确决定，并在此过程中获得成长或认可。构思时应

聚焦于主角的心理变化、道德抉择的后果以及主题的升华（如诚实、责任）。

思路构思与布局：

第一段续写（比赛现场）：应描述Alex如何面对评委和观众，公开承认错误并

展示项目原貌，同时通过动作、心理和环境描写强化紧张感和决心。

第二段续写（结果与反馈）：需体现比赛结果（可能未获胜但获得道德认可），

并通过邮件内容传递主题——诚实比胜利更重要，同时暗示后续积极发展（如额

外机会）O

提炼框架：

冲突解决：Alex选择诚实，承认模型损坏。

主题升华：强调道德价值胜过功利成功。

情感转折：从紧张到释然，再到被认可的幸福。

实施要点：

保持人称、时态（过去时）和风格一致。

衔接原文关键词（如“solarpanel"“honesl"“responsible”等）。

通过动作（如颤抖的手）、心理（如放松）和环境（如观众反应）推进剧情。

续写注意事项:

事项类型具体内容

1.开头需直接衔接段落给定句；

2.延续Alex的诚实决定；

承接原文事项

3.提及太阳能模型损坏细芍；

4.呼应父母教导（"honest,responsible”）0

巧妙设计续写内容：

第一段：评委的质疑-Alex的坦诚解释一观众/评委的意外反应（沉默一掌声）o

第二段：邮件内容不仅提及比赛结果，更强调“道德勇气奖”或邀请参加更高层次

活动，使结局更有层次。

二、故事山模式分析

开端：Alex准备科学展览，充满期待。

上升动作：弟弟损坏太阳能板，冲突产生。

高潮：Alex决定诚实面对而非欺骗。

下降动作：现场展示并承认错误。

结局：获得道德认可（可能非比赛胜利）。

三、细节分析

1.可衔接原文的要素

太阳能模型损坏（"brokenpieceofthecar'ssolarpanel"）0

＜4

父母教导（honest,responsible,andkeeptrying"）o

Alex的努力（“laenighthours』uslrated”“happy”）。

2.反映心情的句子/短语：

“excitementandnervousness”（兴奋与紧张）。

“heartfeltlikeitdroppedtothebottomofhisstomach”（心情沉重）。

^determinedlook"（坚定）。

3.动作描写：

“checkedhisbagonelasttime”（检查物品）。

“walkedtoschool,hisstepswereslowandheavy^^（步履沉重）。

4.关键转折点：

弟弟道歉并展示损坏的太阳能板（冲突爆发）。

Alex决定诚实（道德选择转折）。

5.伏笔与冲突：

伏笔：父母关于“诚实、责任”的教导（为后续选择埋下伏笔）。

冲突：道德与功利的冲突（是否用电池欺骗）。

隐含线索：Alex对荣誉的渴望与道德感的挣扎。

解决方案：Alex选择诚实，接受结果。

四、表格分析（按角度分类）

分析角度内容原文反应句

“Alex,thehighschooljuniorwith

Alex:勤奋、诚实、有责

adeeppassionforscience"；“Ax

人物刻画

任感；弟弟：好奇、愧疚。cameintotheroomwithbig,

sorry-lookingeyes”

兴奋一紧张一震惊一挣t4excitementandnervousness”—♦

情感层次“heartfeltlikeitdropped”—>

扎一坚定一释然。

''determinedlook”

弟弟损坏太阳能板；Alex“heldabrokenpieceofthecar's

关键情节点solarpanel";"knewexactlywhat

决定诚实。

hehadtodo”

简洁叙事，多用心理描写

“heartfeltlikeitdroppedtothe

语言特色

和比喻。bottomofhisstomach”

solarpanel,honest,

关键词分析多次重复关键词，凸显主题。

responsible,keeptrying

“Hethoughtaboutexplaining...”,

心理描写大量内心挣扎和回忆。“Butwhenhethoughtaboutit,he

feltuncomfbrtable,,

“stepswereslowandheavy”,

动作描写通过动作反映情绪。

“checkedhisbagonelasttime”

开头的清晨环境烘托希“coolfallmorning"，“sunwasjust

环境描写startingtorise,castingawarm

望感。

light”

父母教导："howimportantitwas

隐含主题诚实与责任比成功更重

tobehonest,responsible^^

分析角度内容原文反应句

要C

从梦想破灭到坚定选择“dreamsofwinning...seemedto

情感转折begoingaway"—>''determined

道德。

look”

“walkedtoschool","gottothe

空间转换家一上学路上T学校。

schoolgates”

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时间过渡walkedtoschool”—>ubythetime

始C

hegottotheschoolgates”

四、动作、心理、环境描写

动作描写

Heclenchedhisfists,takingadeepbreathbeforesteppingontothestage.

他握紧拳头，深吸一口气，然后走上舞台。

Hishandstrembledslightlyasheadjustedthemicrophone.

他调整麦克风时，双手微微颤抖。

Hegesturedtowardthebrokensolarpanel,hismovementdeliberateyetnervous.

他指向损坏的太阳能板，动作刻意而紧张。

Alexshuffledhisnotes,avoidingdirecteyecontactforamoment.

亚历克斯翻动着笔记，一时避免直接眼神接触。

Hebentdowntopickupthemodelcar,hismovementsslowandheavy.

他弯腰捡起模型车，动作缓慢而沉重。

Noddingtothejudges,hebeganhispresentationwithasteadyvoice.

他向评委点头，用稳定的声音开始演示。

Hewipedhissweatypalmsonhispantsdiscreetly.

他悄悄地在裤子上擦去手心的汗。

Alexheldupthesolarpanel,showingthecracktotheaudience.

亚历克斯举起太阳能板，向观众展示裂缝。

Hepacedbackandforthbackstage,mutteringtohimself.

他在后台来回踱步，喃喃自语。

Withasigh,hesetthemodeldownonthetablecarefully.

他叹了口气，小心地把模型放在桌上。

心理描写

Awaveofreliefwashedoverhimashefinishedconfessing.

坦白结束后，他如释重负。

Doubtgnawedathim,buthepusheditaside.

疑虑折磨着他，但他把它抛在一边。

Hismindraced,searchingfortherightwords.

他的大脑飞速运转，寻找合适的词语。

Hefeltapangofguiltbutstoodbyhisdecision.

他感到一阵内疚，但仍坚持自己的决定。

Anxietycoiledinhisstomachlikeatightspring.

焦虑像一根紧绷的弹簧缠绕在他的胃里。

Prideswelledinhischestdespitetheoutcome.

尽管结果如此，他心中仍充满自豪。

Hebattledtheurgetomakeexcuses.

他克制住找借口的冲动。

Asenseofcalmsettledoverhimoncehechosehonestv.

一旦选择了诚实，一种平静感笼罩了他。

Hishopesdwindledwitheachpassingsecond.

他的希望随着每一秒的流逝而减少。

Hereplayedhisparents5wordsinhismindforcourage.

他在脑海中回想父母的话以获取勇气。

环境描写

Theauditoriumwashushed,everyeyefixedonhim.

礼堂一片寂静，每双眼睛都盯着他。

Sunlightstreamedthroughthewindows,illuminatingthestage.

阳光透过窗户照射进来，照亮了舞台。

Thebuzzingofthefluorescentlightsaddedtohisnervousness.

荧光灯的嗡嗡声加剧了他的紧张。

Acooldraftsweptacrosstheroom,makinghimshiver.

一阵凉风扫过房间，让他打了个寒颤。

Theclockonthewalltickedloudly,markingthetensemoments.

墙上的时钟滴答作响，标志着紧张的时刻。

Shadowslengthenedinthecornerasthepresentationdraggedon.

随着演示的进行，角落里的影子变长了。

Thesmellofpolishedwoodandchalkdustfilledtheair.

空气中弥漫着抛光木材和粉笔灰的气味。

Muffledwhispersfromtheaudiencecreatedasoftbackdrop.

观众压抑的低语形成了柔和的背景音。

Thejudge'spentappedrhythmicallyonthescoresheet.

评委的笔在评分表上有节奏地轻敲。

Goldenautumnleavesbrushedagainstthewindowsoutside.

外面金黄色的秋叶拂过窗户。

常见单词高级替换词（5组分类场景）

—Nervous”的替换（紧张场景）：

Anxious（更强调焦虑）

Apprehensive（担心不好的结果）

Jittery（因紧张而动作不稳）

Onedge（烦躁不安）

Trepidations（正式,畏惧）

2.“Honest”的替换（道德品质场景）：

Truthful（说真话）

Integrous（恪守诚信原则）

Principled（原则性强）

Sincere（真诚）

Forthright（直率）

3.“Hard-working”的替换（努力场景）：

Diligent（勤奋的）

Assiduous（刻苦的）

Industrious（勤勉的）

Persevering（坚持不懈的）

Sedulous（兢兢业业的）

4.“Sad”的替换（沮丧场景）：

Despondent（沮丧失望）

Crestfallen（挫败感强）

Dejected（情绪低落）

Disheartened（灰心）

Morose（忧郁的）

5.“Happy”的替换（喜悦场景）：

Elated（兴图米烈）

Jubilant（欢呼雀跃）

Exultant（狂喜）

Gratified（欣慰满足）

Ecstatic（欣喜若狂）

常见固定搭配：

Castawarmlight（投下温暖的光）

“cast”常用于光线、影子投射。

Feltlikeitdroppedtothebottomofhisstomach（心情沉到谷底）

比喻极度失望或震惊。

Soundlikeanexcuse（听起来像借口）

“soundlike”表示“听起来像

Makehimlesslikelytowin（降低他获胜的可能性）

“makesb.lesslikelyto”是地道表达。

Keptplayinginhismind（在脑海中回荡）

“play”这里指“反复出现”。

Adeterminedlookwasonhisface（脸上露出坚定的表情）

介词“on”用于面部表情。

可积累语料（生词短语）：

Renewableenergy（可再生能源）

词性：名词短语

词意：Energyfromsourcesthatarenotdepletedwhenused,suchaswindorsolar

power.

近义词:Greenenergy,sustainableenergy

反义词：Fossilfuels

例句：

Hisprojectfocusedonrenewableenergysolutions.

Theworldisshiftingtowardsrenewableenergy.

Solarpanel（太阳能电池板）

词性：名词短语

词意：Adevicethatconvertssunlightintoelectricity.

近义词：Photovoltaicpanel

例句：

Thesolarpanelwascrackedaccidentally.

Theyinstalledsolarpanelsontheroof.

Feelguilty（感到愧疚）

词性：动词短语

词意：Tofeelremorsetbrone'sactions.

近义词：Feelremorseful,feelashamed

反义词：Feelinnocent,feeljustified

例句：

Hefeltguiltyforbreakingtheitem.

Shefeltguiltyafterlying.

Sciencefair（科学展览会）

词性：名词短语

词意：Acompetitiveeventwherestudentspresentscienceprojects.

近义词：Scienceexhibition,researchfair

例句：

Hepreparedforthesciencefairformonths.

Thesciencefairattractedmanyyounginnovators.

Keeptrying（坚持努力）

词性：动词短语

词意：Topersistineffortsdespitedifficulties.

近义词：Persevere,persist

反义词：Giveup,quit

例句：

Hisparentstaughthimtokeeptryingnomatterwhat.

Evenafterfailure,shekepttrying.

Regionalcompetition（地区比赛）

词性：名词短语

词意：Acontestataregionallevel.

近义词：Areacontest,localcompetition

反义词：Nationalcompetition,internationalcompetition

例句：

Headvancedtotheregionalcompetition.

Theregionalcompetitionwasfierce.

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Insleadofiheusualranking,theemailannouncedthathisprojectwouldbefeatured

inalocalnewspaperasanexampleof"honestscience.**Alexblinkedatthewords

indisbelief,alauahescapinghislips士格创w人物）.Hehadn'twontheofficialprize,but

hisnamewouldreachbeyondthefair.Axpeekedoverhisshoulder,whisperingan

apulox、again现在分外0诉做件*动作）,yetAlexonlyruffledhisbrother'shairandsmiled.

“Don'tworryJhesaidsoftly,"thisisbetterihacIimagined."Inihalinstant,Alex

realizedthatrecognitiongainedthroughtruthlastsfarlongerthananytrophy.The

disappointmentheoncefeltwasreplacedwithaquietdetermination—hisjourney

hadonlyjustbegun.

1.地道搭配与同义替换

tel）thetruth—>confesshonestly/admitfrankly

wintheprize—>earntheaward/securethetrophy/claimthehonor

feelnervous—beonedge/havebutterfliesinone'sstomach

makemistakes—>commiterrors/slipup/gowrong

staytruetooneself—sticktoone'sprinciples/remainfaithfultoone's

values

2.情绪描写亮点词汇

nervous—>anxious,uneasy,restless

proud—dignified,gratified,fillfilled

disappointed—►frustrated,letdown,disheartened

relieved一comforted,reassured,atease

3.动作描写亮点词汇

palmsgrewsweaty—►sweattrickleddownhispalms

heartpounding一heartbeathammeringagainsthischest

voicetrembling—wordsquiveringonhislips

noddedgently—*gaveanapprovingnod

4.积累语料与升级替换

conscienceclear一freefromguilt/atpeacewithoneself

holdone'sheadhigh—>maintaindignity/standtall

lessonlearned—valuabletakeaway/meaningfiilinsight

failureisnottheend—>setbacksarcsteppingstones

例句：

Heheldhisheadhigh,eventhoughhehadn'tachievedtheexpectedresult.

Failure,farfrombeingtheend,oftenbecomesthesteppingstonetosuccess.

Withhisconscienceclear,hewalkedoffthestage,lighterthanbefore.

Thejudgesgaveanapprovingnod,signalingrespectbeyondwords.

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4/exstoodinfrontoftheclassand加tfges,feelinwHispalmswere

sweatingandhisheartbeatfasterthaneven心双.其）.piebrokenpanelweighedonhis

mindlikeaheavystone.Afteralongpause,heclearedhisthroatandadmittedwhat

hadhappenedthatmorning.4Mymodelcarcan'truntodaybecauseofanaccidentat

home；'heexplainedhonestlj,hisvoicetrembling做文士格,丑人枷g.Ahushfellacross

theroom,后又土语句，耳会*为,and