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LearningObjectives通过本课时的学习,学生能够:阅读感谢信,提取并梳理Kelly感谢老师的两个核心原因(学业上,情感上);梳理感谢信的结构:开头点明感谢对象→中间分点阐述感谢的具体事由→结尾再次表达感谢并署名。(学习理解)基于文本内容和3b的笔记框架,内化“表达感谢”的语言逻辑。明确感谢的对象,描述自己面临的困难,说明对方是如何帮助自己的;学习并运用文中及3c提供的表达感谢的句型。(学习理解,应用实践)通过分析范文和仿写练习,增强对“感恩”主题的叙述能力,学会清晰、真诚地描述他人的帮助和自己的感受。(迁移创新)03While-readingReadandanswerHowmanyparagraphsarethere?312Three.Whatkindofpassageisit?A.Aletter.B.Astory.Howmanypartscanwedivide?Two.While-readingReadforstructureDearMrsThompson,Iwanttothankyouforbeingmyteacher.Youtookthetimetohelpme,althoughyouweresobusy.Yourclassesalwaysmademehappy.Iusedtothinkthatsciencewasboringanddifficult,andIdidbadlyinclass.IneverlikedscienceuntilItookyourclass.Youencouragedmeandmadesciencelessonsfun,andslowly,Igrewmoreconfident.Ialsowanttothankyouforbeingkindtome.Youhelpedmealot,especiallyaftermygrandmotherpassedaway.Icouldn'ttalkaboutmyfeelingstoanybodyuntilyousatwithmeduringlunchthatday.YoulistenedtomeandtalkedwithmesothatIfeltmuchbetter.Thatdaywillalwaysremaininmymind.Thankyousomuchforbeingnotonlymyteacherbutalsomyfriend.What’sthestructureofthisletter?A.B.B.While-readingReadandanswerReadPARA.1andanswerthequestions.Iwanttothankyouforbeingmyteacher.Youtookthetimetohelpme,althoughyouweresobusy.Q1:Whatdidtheteacherdoeventhoughshewasverybusy?A.Shetookthetimetohelpthestudent.B.Shecanceledtheclass.C.Sheaskedanotherteacherforhelp.Q2:Whatcanweinferabouttheteacherfromthissentence?A.Shewasalwaysfree.B.Shedidn'tcareaboutherstudents.C.Shewaskindandpatient.While-readingReadandanswerReadPARA.2andfillintheblanks.Yourclassesalwaysmademehappy.Iusedtothinkthatsciencewasboringanddifficult,andIdidbadlyinclass.IneverlikedscienceuntilItookyourclass.Youencouragedmeandmadesciencelessonsfun,andslowly,Igrewmoreconfident.InthepastKellythoughtsciencewas_______anddifficult.Shedid_______inclass.Aftertakingtheteacher’sclassTheclassesmadeher_______.MrsThompsonmadesciencelessons_______.Shegrewmore____
___.boringbadlyhappyfunconfidentWhile-readingReadandanswerReadPARA.3andanswerthequestions.Ialsowanttothankyouforbeingkindtome.Youhelpedmealot,especiallyaftermygrandmotherpassedaway.Icouldn'ttalkaboutmyfeelingstoanybodyuntilyousatwithmeduringlunchthatday.YoulistenedtomeandtalkedwithmesothatIfeltmuchbetter.Thatdaywillalwaysremaininmymind.Thankyousomuchforbeingnotonlymyteacherbutalsomyfriend.KellyWhatHer
passedaway.Whathappenedtoher?HowTheteacher________toherandtalkedwithher.Howdidtheteacherhelpher?WhyTothanktheteacherforbeing________.Whydidshewritethisparagraph?grandmotherlistenedkindPost-readingReadandfillReadthetextagainandfinishthetable.ThepersonIwanttothank:________HowshehelpedmeWhatdifficultiesIfacedMrs.ThompsonIfoundscienceveryboringanddifficult.Ididbadlyinscienceclassandneverlikedit.Aftermygrandmotherpassedaway,Icouldn'ttalkaboutmyfeelingstoanybodyandfeltverysad.Shetooktimetohelpmeeventhoughshewasbusy.Herclasseswerefunandsheencouragedmealot,soIgrewmoreconfidentinscience.Aftermygrandmotherpassedaway,shesatwithmeduringlunch,listenedtome,andtalkedwithme.Post-readingWorkon3bWhowouldyouliketothankthemost?Makenotes.ThepersonIwanttothank:________Howhe/shehelpedmeWhatdifficultiesIfacedmyEnglishteacherIfeltverynervousaboutspeakingEnglishinclass.Itwashardformetoremembernewwords.Shealwayssmiledatmetomakemefeelrelaxed.Shetaughtmefunwaystocreatewordcards.Post-readingWorkon3cWriteyourownthank-youletter.Youcanuseyournotesin3bandtheexpressionsbelowtohelpyou.Thankyouforhelpingmeto…Onthatday,I…,andyouhelpedmeto…Ididn’t/couldn’t…,butyou…Thankyouverymuchforyour…Iamverythankfulbecause…WhenI…,youwerethereto…Pre-reading写作思路:三段式第一段:开头点题(1–2句)直接告诉阅卷老师:你要感谢谁,他/她大概是什么样的人,不用铺垫,开门见山最加分第二段:中间叙事(3–5句)这是全文最重要的一段,写一件小事:你遇到了什么困难→他/她怎么安慰/帮助你→你有什么变化,用上单元短语,立刻显得很地道第三段:结尾抒情(2–3句)表达感谢、说说收获、表个决心,简单真诚,不喊口号,就是高分结尾Pre-writingBeginning开头段1.Iamwritingtothankyouforyourhelp.Althoughyouwerebusy,youalwaystooktimetohelpme.我写信是为了感谢你的帮助。虽然你很忙,但你总是抽出时间来帮助我2.Iamwritingtoexpressmydeepestgratitudeforyourkindnessandsupportduringmyhardtime.我写这封信是为了表达我最深切的感谢,感谢你在我困难时期对我的友好和支持3.Iamwritingtothankyouforyourselflesshelpandwarmsupport.Itwasyouwhopulledmethroughthehardesttimeinmylife.我写信是为了感谢您无私的帮助和热情的支持。是你帮我度过了人生中最艰难的时刻。Pre-writingBody中间段这是全文最重要的一段,写一件小事:你遇到了什么困难→他/她怎么安慰/帮助你→你有什么变化,用上单元短语,立刻显得很地道(困难+帮助+改变)困难:Lastmonth,Ifailedanimportantexam.Ifeltupsetanddidn’tknowwhattodo./WhenIstruggledwith...,Ifeltsostressed.帮助:Younoticedmyproblemandhelpedmealot.Yougavemesomeusefuladviceandencouragedmetotryagain.-改变:Thankstoyourhelp,Imadegreatprogress.Ibecomemoreconfidentandinterestedinlearning.上个月,我在一次重要的考试中失败了。我感到心烦意乱,不知道该怎么办。/当我挣扎于……我感到压力很大。你注意到了我的问题,给了我很多帮助。你给了我一些有用的建议,鼓励我再试一次。由于你的帮助,我取得了很大的进步。我变得更加自信,对学习更感兴趣。Pre-writingEnd结尾段第三段:结尾抒情(2–3句)表达感谢、说说收获、表个决心,简单真诚,不喊口号,就是高分结尾1.Thankyouagainforyourkindness.Iwillneverforgetyourhelp.2.Thankyousomuchforbeingmy+(家人/朋友/老师).Yourwordswillremaininmymindforever.IhopeIcanbeapersonlikeyouinthefuture.非常感谢你做我的+(家人/朋友/老师)。你的话将永远留在我心中。我希望将来我能成为一个像你一样的人。再次感谢您的好意。我永远不会忘记你的帮助。PossibleVersion
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