高一英语（人教版）教学课件必修二UNIT1SectionⅥWriting

SectionⅥWriting目录写作项目——Writeanewsreport课时跟踪检测写作项目——Writeanewsreport本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于保护文化遗产的新闻报道。新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的客观性、真实性、准确性，语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂，不必追求过分花哨的词语和过于复杂的句型。此外，新闻报道一般不发表主观评论，常提供背景信息，多用直接引语与被动语态。由教材学写作一、学文体架构二、学逻辑组材1．课文的标题使用了动词短语，体现了简明精练的特点。2．第一段中的前两句是导语，讲该文化遗产保护项目的概况，包括时间、地点、人物、事件等要素，使读者对该新闻报道的要点一目了然。导语之后是一些支撑性细节信息。主体是第二、三段，报道了莫高窟的重要的历史文化价值和制作莫高窟文物数码图像对传承历史文化，增进国际文化理解、交流与合作的重要意义。结语是第三段的结尾部分，点明推广莫高窟文化的影响。三、学主旨升华结语部分使用了直接引语，引用一位研究者的原话，增强了文章的真实性和权威性，起到了指明意义、深化主题的作用。四、学亮点表达1．第一段第二句中helpincrease，简洁、概括地表达出此行的目的。第三句中akeystop，意为“关键的一站”，表达简洁，清晰易懂，stop为熟词生义。2．第二段主要用时间副词long，today和程度副词even串联本段，使表达更加灵活、确切。3．第三段第三句句首使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，在句中意为“正如”，

段中promote,educate,safeguard,understand等动词寓意深刻，紧扣主题。连用两次动名词短语作主语Appreciatingtheculturalheritage，强调了文化遗产在国际交流、增进理解方面的重要作用。同时也总结了全文，升华了主旨。针对练笔/完成句子①________________,

fishcan'tlivewithoutwater.众所周知，鱼儿离不开水。②_______________________________________________toavoidbeinginfectedbydiseases.经常洗手是避免被疾病传染的有效方法之一。AsisknowntoallWashinghandsregularlyisoneoftheeffectiveways

写作项目指导Writeanewsreportaboutapersonorgroupwhoworkstoprotectourculturalheritage——写一篇个人或团队致力于保护我们文化遗产的新闻报道第一步：构思谋篇Part1·towriteatitletogetthereader'sattention·tointroducebrieflyapersonorgroup(who,what,when,where,andwhy)Part2todescribewhatthepersonorgroupdoes(thefacts,details,examplesetc.)Part3toendwithashortsummary第二步：要点表达第一部分导语简述新闻梗概

①Thepost-95steamparticipatedintheprotectionanddevelopmentofancientvillagesinGuangxi,using“blacktechnology”to________________________.“95后”团队参与到广西古村落的保护和开发，利用

“黑科技”让民族文化“活”起来。bringethnicculturetolife②WuhanfolkcustomsexpertLiuQianding______________________________topromotingthehistoryandcultureofWuhan,and_____________________________________thehistoricalandculturalbuildingsofWuhan.武汉民俗专家刘谦定长期致力于弘扬武汉历史文化，为保护武汉历史文化建筑做了很多实事。haslongbeencommitted

hasdonemanypracticalthingstoprotect③DunhuangculturalconservationistZhangJianjunandhiswifearewillingtobelonelyand____________________inthedepthsofthedesertforyears,________________theancientcityruinsofDafangPanchengandasectionoftheGreatWallthatisabout2kilometerslongwithcareandlove.敦煌文保员张建军与妻子甘于寂寞，常年驻守在大漠深处，一起用心用情守护大方盘城古城遗址和一段长约2公里的长城。havebeenstationed

guardingtogether第二部分主体阐释个人或团队致力于保护文化遗产1．描述文化遗产的词汇①__________n．

文明②__________

adj. 传统的③_______adj. 独特的④___________

追溯到⑤___________

传递⑥_____________

……的象征civilizationtraditionalunique

datebacktopassdownthesymbolof2．保护文化遗产所用的技术①3Dlaserscanningtechnology 三维激光扫描技术②3Ddigitalrepairtechnology 三维数字化修复技术③Mobileterminaltechnology

移动终端技术④Cloudplatformandapplicationservices云平台及应用服务3．致力于保护文化遗产常用词块①____________________

采取有效的措施②____________________

帮助修理古庙③___________________

拍照④educatethepublicwidely ________________⑤showculturalrelicstothecitizens _________________⑥raisemoney _________takeeffectivemeasures

helprepairoldtemplestakephotos/picturesof

广泛教育公众向市民展示文物筹集资金4．细节支撑句①Theytravelto___________________________culturalrelicsaswellasoldhouses.他们四处寻找文物和老房子并且拍摄照片。②Theirmoneyandabilities____________.他们的财力和能力有限。searchforandtakepicturesof

arelimited③Theywillalsoshowthepublic_______________________ofculturalrelicsbyshowingthepicturestothem.他们也会通过向公众展示照片的形式让公众了解令人担忧的文物现状。④Theyhelpintheformofraisingmoneyand_______________totakepart.他们以筹集资金的形式提供帮助，并号召人们参与进来。theworryingsituationcallonpeople

第三部分结语对新闻报道进行小结

①Ourculturalheritage,ournationaltreasure.It'severyone'sdutyandresponsibility____________.文化遗产，我们的国宝。保护国宝，人人有责。②Allinall,weshouldn't________________________anyourculturalheritagesite.总之，我们决不允许任何人破坏任何文化遗址。toprotectitallowanyonetodestroy

③Moreimportantly,wemustdoallwecanto______________________protectingourculturalheritage.更重要的是，我们要竭尽所能，积极投身于保护文化遗产。takeanactivepartin[随堂针对练笔]文化遗产面临着各种风险，有很多因素影响着文化遗产。请以“主题句＋支撑句”的模式写一个60词左右的片段。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：Therearemanyfactorsthataffectculturalheritage.First,naturalforcesthreatenculturalheritage.Long-termforcesofnature,suchaswind,waterandtemperature,cangraduallydamagetheseheritage.Second,anotherimportantfactorishumanactivities,whichcandoalotofdamagetoculturalheritageandnature.What'smore,thelargenumberoftouristsalsocountsalot.写作素材储备(一)新闻报道常用开头句①Yesterdayafternoon,MrLiuaswellashisteamwasworkingto....昨天下午，刘先生和他的团队正在工作……②Lastweekwitnessedour...projectinourcity.上周见证了我们城市……的项目。③A/An...exhibitionwassuccessfullyheldinourschooltoday.今天我校成功举办了……展览。④LastSunday,SeniorOnestudentsfromHongxingHighSchoolwentto...,locatedinthedowntownareaofourcity,toappreciatea/an...exhibition.上周日，来自红星高中的高一学生去了……，位于我市的市中心，去欣赏……展览。⑤Inordertoencouragestudentsto...,ourschoolorganizeda/an...activityonOctober30th.为了鼓励学生……，在10月30日，我们学校组织了一次……的活动。(二)新闻报道常用结尾句①Notonlydidtheyrealizetheimportanceof...,buttheyalsofoundthewaysto....他们不仅意识到……的重要性，而且还找到了……的方法。②...wasagreatsuccess.Itnotonlyenriched...,butalsohelpeduslearnmoreabout....……取得了巨大的成功。它不仅丰富了……，也帮助我们更多地了解……③Withtheirenthusiasticsupportandactiveparticipation,...wasundoubtedlyasuccess.在他们的热情支持和积极参与下，……无疑是成功的。课时跟踪检测[写作专项训练]Ⅰ.完成句子1．Although_______________________aroundtheglobe,onlyChinesepaper-cuttingwaslistedintheUNESCOIntangibleCulturalHeritage(ICH)lists,becauseit_________________morethan1,500yearsandit_________________________ofthepeoplethroughoutChina.虽然剪纸在世界各地都很流行，但只有中国剪纸被列入联合国教科文组织非物质文化遗产(ICH)名录，因为它有1500多年的历史，代表着整个中国人民的文化价值。paper-cuttingispopularhasahistoryofrepresentsculturalvalues2．Chinesecalligraphyis____________________ofChineseICH.中国书法是中国非物质文化遗产里一个著名的艺术形式。3．Havingahistoryofabout160years,ithas______________________inChinesefolkart.它有大约160年的历史，在中国民间艺术中创造了许多“第一”。awell-knownartformcreatedmany“firsts”4．ICHinChinaalso______________________________,

ChineseAcupuncture,ShadowPlay,andsoon.在中国，非物质文化遗产还有端午节、中国针灸、皮影戏等等。5．Theyshouldbeprotectedbecausetheyare________________China'sculture.它们应该受到保护，因为它们是中国文化的一个强有力的象征。includestheDragonBoatFestivalastrongsymbolof6．ThistypeofexpressionhasbeenwidelypractisedinChinaand_________________________inChineseculture.这种表达方式在中国被广泛使用，并且在中国文化中普遍受到高度尊重。hasbeenhighlyrespected

Ⅱ.完成语段①_______________________________________

(说到文物保护),Ithinkit'sveryimportantforustoprotectculturalrelics.Whenitcomestoculturalrelicsprotection

Asweallknow,culturalrelicscanhelpusknowaperiodofhistory,and②_________________________________

(有助于文化研究).Andculturalrelicsarepreciouswealthleftbyourancestors,which③_______________________________

(在历史上起着重要的作用).Inaddition,theycan④__________________________________

(加深对祖国的爱)．contributetoculturalresearch

playanimportantroleinhistorydeepentheloveforourmotherland

Whatshouldwedo?First,weshouldmakerelevantlawsand⑤__________________________________

(加大对违法行为的惩罚力度).Second,weshouldraiseawarenessoftheprotectionofculturalrelicsand⑥_________________________

(积极保护文物).Asstudents,weshouldbecivilizedtouristsand⑦__________________________

(不破坏文物)．increasethepunishmentforillegalacts

activelyprotectculturalrelicsnotdestroyculturalrelicsⅢ.读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tomarktheirhardworkandcontributiontowildlifeprotectioninthereserve,lastyear,Shi's20-memberteamwasrecognizedwithaspecialawardatanonlineawardceremonyfortheIUCNWorldCommissiononProtectedAreas'InternationalRangerAwards.KathyMacKinnon,headofthecommission,speakshighlyoftheirwork,sayingthattheyare“criticaltoourglobalconservationefforts,helpingtostembiodiversitylossandprotecttheimportantecosystemsthatserveasnaturalsolutionstoclimatechangeandotherglobalchallenges”．Shirealizesthatthroughprotectingendangeredanimals,likegiantpandasandsnowleopards,therichbiodiversityoftheenvironmentcanalsobemaintained,whichisawin-winsituation.AftergraduationfromSichuanForestrySchool(nowSichuanAgriculturalUniversity)in1992,ShibecameaforestguardianattheWolongNationalNatureReserve.Establishedin1963,Wolongisthecountry'searliestpandareserve.Itexperiencedserioushuman-animalconflict,suchasillegalloggingandhuntingbeforethe1990s.In1978,anobservationtent,claimedtobethecountry'sfirstfieldcamptostudywildgiantpandas,wasbuiltonasteepforestedslopeinthereserve.Intheearly1980s,thegovernmentcooperatedwiththeWorldWideFundforNaturetoestablishtheChinaConservationandResearchCenterfortheGiantPandatosavetheendangeredanimal.Attheverybeginning,itwasreallydifficultforrangers.Withnoproperoutdoorequipment,likeprotectivejacketsorsleepingbags,everytime,goingaroundtheareacouldbealife-threateningadventure.Plasticwovenbagswerecommonlyusedforwarmthandasmakeshifttentsforemergencycases.ForShi,therealchallengesarenaturaldisasters,whichcannotbepredicted.HehasavividmemoryofasnowslideinJune2017duringaroutineinspection.“Wewereabouttoclimbovera400-meter-longmountainpass,about5,500metersinaltitude,whichwasthemostdangerousplaceforuswithsnowdepthonthegroundreachinguptotwometersandthewindblowingheavily,”Shisays.SuddenlyShiheardthunderingsoundsandamassofsnowcametumblingdownthemountain.Quicklythrowinghimselfattherockandgrabbingontoit,Shisurvivedbutwasinjured.注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；2．重点描述Shi遇见大熊猫的惊喜，要求逻辑合理。There

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job.Shihasasoftspotforgiantpandas.Althoughhehasworkedinthereserveforthreedecades,hehasonlymetthepandastwice.Inordertorecordvideosofthewildgiantpandasinthereserve,theysearchedforthemforseveraldaysintheforest,butdidn'tspotone.Whentheywereabouttogiveup,therewasasoundfromthebambooforestbehind,andtheyturnedaroundandsawafatpandaaboutsixmetersaway,hidinginthewoods.Itranquickly.Itwasfunnytoseeagroupofpeoplechasingthepandainthewild.Thesceneisjustlikehide-and-seek,whichwillneverbeforgotten.[阅读拓展训练]阅读七选五Internationaltourismisbecominginterestinglypopular,andlargenumbersofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitfamousplacessuchastheGreatWallofChinaandtheSistineChapelintheVatican.1They'vethrownrubbisheverywhere,broughtmoretrafficandevendoneseriousdamagetoancientrelics.Asforthedamage,therearemanydifferentcauses.Forexample,thepaintingsintheSistineChapelarebeingdamagedbypeoplebreathingontothemwhentheyvisit.2Thatmayraisethehumidity(湿气)oftheairanddamagethepaintings.DamageinotherplacessuchastheGreatWallisbecauseoftouristsclimbingondelicate(脆弱的)areas.Besides,roadshavealsobeenbuilttohelpvisitorsclimbtheWalleasily.Theseactivitiescancausealotofdamagetothearea.3Firstly,wehavetocutdowntouristnumbers,becausefewervisitorswillresultinlessdamage.Secondly,weshouldmakestrictrulesaboutwhichareaspeoplecanvisitandwhattheycandowhentheygetthere.4Peoplewillnotbeallowedtowalkoffthepaths.Visitorstoindoorplacescanbeaskedtowearmaskstoprotectthepaintings.Inshort