人教 九上 英语 Unit 1《单元写作》课件

单元写作写“今昔变化”相关文章Unit1TheChangingWorld写作维度本单元的话题是“今昔变化”，与此相关的写作通常包含以下几个方面：（1）自己的变化（2）自己身边人物/事物的变化（3）家乡的变化等。写作支架/模板写“今昔变化”相关文章引出话题，点明变化的主体讲述变化的细节总结对变化的感想黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)开头段①Overthepastfewyears,myhometownhasgonethroughgreatchangesthatIneverexpected.②Lookingbackatthelifefiveyearsago,Icanclearlyfeelhowdifferentitisfromnow.③NoonecouldimaginethatthesmallvillagewhereIgrewupwouldbecomesomoderntoday.中间段①Tenyearsago,mostpeopleinmyneighborhoodrodebikestogoshoppingorvisitfriends.②Weusedtowriteletterstomyunclewholivedinanothercity,andittooktwoweekstogetareply.③Therewasonlyonesmallshopinourvillagebackthen,anditdidn’thavemanykindsoffood.④Now,almosteveryfamilyhasacar,andwecanalsotakethenewbuslinetothecitycenterin20minutes.⑤Wecanvideocallmyuncleeveryweekendnow;wecanseehisfaceandtalktohimanytime.⑥Therearetwobigsupermarketsnearourcommunity,andwecanevenbuyfreshvegetablesonline.结尾段①I’mreallygladtoseethesechanges,astheymakeourlifemoreconvenientandfulloffun.②Thesechangesshowhowfastourlifeisdeveloping,andI’mlookingforwardtoabetterfuture.③Thesesmallbutimportantchangeshavemademylifehappier,andI’mgratefulforthebettertimeswehavenow.经典例题(从经典例题中学会审题)假设你是李鑫，下周是你小学班主任许老师的生日。你为她画了一幅画，这张画的纸是你自己做的，原材料是旧书。请你写一封电子邮件向许老师简单介绍一下这份礼物，并说说初中以来你的变化，要点如下：1.今昔对比（外貌；

性格；兴趣爱好）；2.学习上的进步（两个学科，每个学科至少描述一个进步）。审人称：第一人称审体裁：应用文审时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，

现在完成时审要点：今昔变化、学习上的进步要求：1.写作应包含所有要点；2.可适当增加情节使文章内容通顺、合理；3.词数100左右，开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：usedtodosth;makeprogressin;inpublic;connect...with...DearMs.Xu,I’memailingyoutosayhappybirthdaytoyou.Imissyousomuch._______________________________________精彩范文展示DearMs.Xu,I’memailingyoutosayhappybirthdaytoyou.Imissyousomuch.I’vepaintedapictureforyou,andthepaperwasmadebymyselfusingoldbooks.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Sincegraduatingfromprimaryschool,I’vechangedquitealot.Iusedtobeshortandshy,butnowI’vegrowntallerandbecomemoreoutgoing.Iusedtoenjoyreadingcomicbooksquietly,butnowI’minterestedinplayingbasketballandjoiningingroupactivities.I’vebecomemoreconfidentandmadegreatprogressinmystudies.①Myfamilyusedtoliveinasmallflat,butnowwehavemovedtoamuchlargerone.（教材P9）②Ihavebecomemoreconfidentinmystudiesandoftenattendgroupdiscussions.（教材P9）Inmath,Icansolvecomplexproblemsandhaveimprovedmyproblem-solvingskills.InEnglish,I’vebecomebetteratspeakinginpublicandcanexpressmyideasmoreclearlynow.Thankyouforallyoursupportandguidanceduringmyprimaryschoolyears.Yours,LiXin【亮点词块】bemadeby由……制作enjoydoingsth喜欢做某事beinterestedin对……感兴趣【高分句子】Iusedtobeshortandshy,butnowI’vegrowntallerandbecomemoreoutgoing.(but连接的并列句)我以前又矮又害羞，但现在我经长高了，也变得更外向了。实战演练假设你是李倩，暑假期间你回老家度假，发现你的家乡发生了巨大的变化。请你用英语给你的英国朋友John写一封电子邮件，描述你家乡的变化，并邀请John来你的家乡做客。要点：1.描述家乡的变化；2.你的感受。注意：1.邮件须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.邮件中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数100左右(邮件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数)。DearJohn,How’sitgoing?Thissummervacation,IreturnedtomyhometownandIwasamazedbythechanges._______________________________________________________Wouldyouliketovisitmyhometownwhenyouhaveachance?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Bestwishes.Yours,LiQian范文参考DearJohn,How’sitgoing?Thissummervacation,IreturnedtomyhometownandIwasamazedbythechanges.Thankstothegovernment,ourvillagehasdevelopedalot.Therearetwobeautifulparksnow.Whenpeoplearefree,theycanrelaxintheparks.Myfavoriteplaceisamodernlibrary,becauseIlikespendingmyfreetimereadingthere.Thereisevenagymforpeopletoexercise.Thestreetiscleanerthanbefore.Peoplecanbuyalmosteverydailythingintheshops,solifehasbecomemuchmoreconvenient.Also,theroadsarewiderandbetterthanbefore,andtravellinghasbecome