浙江省1月高考续写“见义勇为”的小英雄

2025年浙江1月高考续写学案阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Kevinwasprettybored.Hismotherwasatwork,andhisfatherhadbeenawayonbusiness.Therefore,hewasleftinthecareofMrs.Hill,anoldladywholivednextdoor.Hisparentshadraisedthe12yearoldtobeagoodboy.Henevergotintotrouble,thoughsometimeshewantedtodoriskythings.Mrs.Hillwasasleep.Kevinsighed(叹息)andhopedsomethingexcitingwouldhappen.Suddenly,amovementoutsidecaughthiseye.Mrs.Hill’sfrontwindowfacedMr.andMrs.Green’shouseacrossthestreet.Thecouplehadbothgonetowork,soitwasstrangethatsomeonewasoverthere.Kevinstaredatthemanattheirfrontdoor.Suddenly,themanjumpedthroughanopenwindowintothehouse.Withhisheartinhismouth,KevingrabbedMrs.Hill’shomephoneandcalledthepolice.Thinkingthatthemanmightgetawaywithwhateverhewantedbeforethepolicearrived,Kevindecidedtodosomething.HerushedoutofMrs.Hill’shouseandcrossedthestreetquickly.Grabbingabranchfromacutdowntree,hejumpedinthroughthewindow.“Stoprightthere!Youmustleaverightnow!”hecalledout,holdingthebranchwithbothhands.Themanfrozeforasecond,butwhenhesawtheskinnyboyhebreathedasighofrelief.“Hey,kid,putthatdown.Itwasmyhome.Myparentsusedtolivehereandmyfather’swatchwashere,”heexplained,tryingtoliftafloorboard.Atthatmoment,thesoundsofapolicecarechoed(回响)intheair.Themanstoodupinapanic,thenranthroughthehousetowardthewindowandjumpedout.Kevinfollowedoutandtoldthearrivingpoliceofficerswhathadhappened.Theypursuedandarrestedtheman.KevinwentbacktoMrs.Hill’shouse.Somehowhewasn’tsurehehaddonetherightthing.“Whatifhehastoldthetruth?”hethoughttohimself.Theman’swordssoundedprettyconvincing.注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.Paragraph2:KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.1.情节分析（在下列故事山中填入感情线与情节线）2.矛盾分析______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.续写情节构建（每段提出3个问题）WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.衔接句:_______________________________________________________________________________________过渡句:_______________________________________________________________________________________衔接句:_______________________________________________________________________________________KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.衔接句:_______________________________________________________________________________________过渡句:_______________________________________________________________________________________结尾:_______________________________________________________________________________________4.在原文画出续写部分在原文的伏笔。5.按问题链及原文提示写作Para.1他详细地讲述了整个故事，在强调那个人关于房子和手表的说法时，他的声音微微颤抖。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.格林先生眉头紧皱，陷入沉思，沉默片刻后，他缓缓点了点头。“那个人的故事是真的，"他说，声音很有分寸。“在我们买下这房子之前，他的父母确实住在这里。至于那块表，我现在想起来了。那是传家之宝，为了安全起见被藏了起来。”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.他们毫不迟疑地来到那人指示的地方，格林先生费了九牛二虎之力才掀开地板。灰尘中躺着一块旧手表，指针一动不动。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2他们到达后，向警官解释了情况，并拿出手表作为证明该男子清白的证据。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________警方起初持怀疑态度，但仔细检查了手表，并与该男子的叙述进行了交叉对比。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________反思整个事件，凯文获得了关于信任、同情和世界复杂性的宝贵教训。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________直到这一刻，凯文才明白真相和表象的复杂性_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.范文赏析WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.Hepouredoutthewholestoryindetail,hisvoicetremblingslightlyasheemphasizedtheman'sclaimaboutthehouseandthewatch.Mr.Greenleanedforwardandlistenedintently,apensivefrownetchinghisbrow.Andafteramomentofsilence,henoddedslowly.“Thatman'sstoryringstrue,”hesaid.“Hisparentsdidresideherebeforewepurchasedtheproperty.Andasforthewatch,Irecallnow.Itwasafamilyheirloom,hiddenawayforsafekeeping.”Withoutdelay,theyheadedtothespotwherethemanhadsignaled,andwithabitofeffort,Mr.Greenliftedthefloorboard.There,nestledinthedustlayanoldwatch,itshandsstill.KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.Uponarriving/theirarrival,theyexplainedthesituationtotheofficers,presentingthewatchasevidenceoftheman'sinnocence.Thepolice,initiallyskeptical,examinedthewatchcloselyandcrossreferenceditwiththeman'saccount.Afterprovingtheman’sownershipoftheitems,hewasimmediatelyreleasedbythepolice.MuchtoKeven’sastonishment,themanstillthankedKevinprofusely,acknowledginghiscourageandintegrity.NotuntilthismomentdidKevinbreatheasighofrelief.Reflectingonthewholeevent,Kevinlearnedvaluablelessonsabouttrust,passion,andtheplexitiesoftheworld.7.范文默写WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.He_____________________________(详细地讲述了整个故事),_______________(，声音略带颤抖),)asheemphasizedtheman'sclaimaboutthehouseandthewatch.Mr.Green_________________________________________________________________________(倾身向前，认真地听着，眉头紧皱).Andafteramomentofsilence,henoddedslowly.“__________________________________________(那个人的故事是真的),”hesaid,hisvoicemeasured.“Hisparentsdidresideherebeforewepurchasedtheproperty.Andasforthewatch,Irecallnow.Itwasafamilyheirloom,hiddenawayforsafekeeping.”Withoutdelay,they______________________________________________________________________(向那个人示意的地方走去),a