Unit 7 课时5 Section B (2a-2b) 写作课课件-七年级英语下册

Whatdidyoulearnonthatspecialday?SectionB2a-2bUnit7ADaytoRememberLessonObjectives:Inthislesson,wewillbeableto:1.describetheirschooltripexperiencesusingkeyvocabularyandsentencepatterns,improvingtheirwritingskillsinEnglish.2.constructastructureddiaryentryusingchronologicalorderandpersonalreflections.3.creativelyreflectontheirexperiencesandarticulatelessonslearnedfromthetrip.目录01Leadin02Pre-writing03While-writing04Post-writing05Writingtask06Exercise&HomeworkLean-in➸Didanyunexpectedevents(意外事件)happenduringyourtrip?➸Howdidtheychangeyourfeelings?Iwanttosharemypersonalexperience(个人经历):Igotlostbutdiscoveredahiddenartwork.(我迷路却发现了隐藏的艺术品)➸

SurprisingRewards(意外的收获)/"growththroughimperfection."(不完美中的成长)��“2真1假”游戏🌟

先写下三句你印象深刻的旅行/研学经历，让大家猜猜哪句话是假的。(两分钟准备➸抽签展示➸给出答案)A.IvisitedthehistorymuseumlastSunday.Therewerealotof

ancientrelics(古代文物)ondisplay(展出).B.Ijoinedaguidedtourinthemuseumandtheguide(导游)toldusmanyinterestingstoriesbehindtheexhibits(展品背后).C.Inthemuseum,Itouchedarealdinosaurfossilwithmyownhands(我亲手触摸了一块真正的恐龙化石).

Shareyourspecialtrip.A.Iwenttotheparklastweekend.Theflowerstherewere

infullbloomandsmelledsosweet(花儿盛开，香气扑鼻).B.Inthepark,Isawasheepgrazing(吃草)onthegrass.C.Irented(租)asmallboatandrowed(划)onthelakeintheparkwithmyfriends.Shareyourspecialtrip.A.Ispentawonderfuldayatthebeachlastsummer.Thesandwaswarmandsoftundermyfeet.B.Ibuiltabigsandcastle(沙堡)

withamoatandtowers(有护城河和

塔楼)bytheseaside.C.Iswamwithmermaids(美人鱼)intheseanearthebeach.Shareyourspecialtrip.2aMakenotesaboutyourlastschooltrip.My

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Trip1.Wheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudo/see?3.Howdidyoufeel?4.Whatdidyoulearn?ReadingforwritingPre-writing:AnalyzethestructureofSam’sdiary.日记顶部先写星期和日期，格式为“Friday,30May”，星期在前，具体日期在后

。Beginning(引出话题)Todaywewentonaschooltriptoafarm!Itwastiringbutgreatfun!Body(描述具体活动)按时间顺序叙述Inthemorning...Then...First,...Intheafternoon...End(阐述自己的感悟)OnethingIlearnttoday:...Todaywasreallyadaytoremember.Pre-writing:AnalyzeSam’sdiary.Whatarethemainpointsofeachpart?Friday,30MayTodaywewentonaschooltriptoafarm!Itwastiringbutgreatfun!Beginning➸Whatdidhedo?+

Wheredidhego?+

Howdidhefeel?Inthemorning,weexploredthefarm.Therewerelargetentswithtomatoes,cucumbers,andmanyotherfruitsandvegetables.Thefarmertoldusabouthowthesefruitsandvegetablesgofromthefieldstoourtables.IwasveryinterestedbecauseIusuallyonlyseetheminthesupermarket.Thenwegotstraighttowork!First,wepickedsomestrawberries.Theworkseemedeasy,butittooktimetogetitright.Slowly,wefilledmanybaskets.Intheafternoon,thefarmertaughtushowtocutbranchesandleavesfromtomatoplants.Thishelpsthemtogrowmorefruit.Finally,wewateredtheplants.Plantsneedsomuchwork!Itwastiring,butIenjoyedworkingwithmyhands.Pre-writing:AnalyzeSam’sdiary.Whatarethemainpointsofeachpart?Body➸When+

Whatdidhesee?+

Whatdidhedo?+

Whatdidhelearn?+

Howdidhefeel?Pre-writing:AnalyzeSam’sdiary.Whatarethemainpointsofeachpart?OnethingIlearnttoday:Farmingisn’teasy!Itmademethinkofthesaying:"Everygraincomesfromhardwork."Thefarmerletustakesomevegetableshome.Mymumcookedsomefordinner,andtheywerefreshanddelicious!Theycertainlytastebetterwhenyouworkforthem!Todaywasreallyadaytoremember.End➸

Whatdidhelearn?+

Howdidhefeel?Howdowewriteadiaryaboutschooltrip?BeginningBodyEndingSchooltripWheredidyougo?Howdidyoufeel?Whenwastheactivity?Whatdidyoudo/see?Whatdidyoulearn?Howdidyoufeel?Whatdidyoulearn?Howdidyoufeel?Anexample2aMakenotesaboutyourlastschooltrip.My

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Trip1.Wheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudo/see?3.Howdidyoufeel?4.Whatdidyoulearn?Wewenttoanaturalhistorymuseum.Wesawdinosaurskeletons(骨架)andsomemodelsofplantets.Iwasveryinterestedandcurious(好奇的).Ilearntsomefactsaboutdinosaursandplanets.While-writingWriteanoutline.BeginningBodyEndingOurclasswentonaschooltriptoanaturalhistorymuseum.WhenIwalkedintothemuseum...Therewere...Theylooked...Ialsosaw...Thecoloursanddetails...Iwasveryinterested...Ialsolearnt...Thistrip...2bWriteadiaryentryabouttheschooltrip.Useyournotesin2aandtheexpressionstohelpyou.Ihada(n)amazing/good/bad/terribledaytoday.Ourclasswentonaschooltripto…Whataday!Friday,6JuneIhadareallygooddaytoday.Ourclasswentonaschooltriptoanartmuseum...SampleFriday,6JuneIhadareallygooddaytoday.Ourclasswentonaschooltriptoanaturalhistorymuseum.WhenIwalkedintothemuseum,IwasamazedbywhatIsaw.Therewerehugedinosaurskeletons.Theylookedbothscaryandinteresting.Ialsosawsomemodelsofplanets.Thecoloursanddetailsofthoseplanetsweresogood.Iwasveryinterestedandcuriousduringthewholevisit.Ialsolearntsomeinterestingfactsaboutdinosaursandplanets.Thistriptothenaturalmuseumwasreallyfun.Post-writingExchangeyourworkwithyourclassmate.Evaluateaccordingtothechecklist.ChecklistAssessment(评价)TotalscoreYourscore内容要点全面，表达准确10分文章结构完整1分人称、时态使用得当2分词汇丰富、句子衔接流畅1分卷面书写1分合计（总分15分）15分Writingtask假如你是李华，上周你们学校组织了一次去农场的郊游活动。英语课上，老师让你们以“ASchoolTrip”为题写一篇短文，讲述一下自己的经历及感受。内容包括：1.郊游的时间、地点及出游方式等；2.郊游期间你的所见所闻等；3.你的感想。要求：1.不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数70左右。作文标题和开头已经给出，不计入

总词数。WritingGuideStep1

审题定人称：_________________Step2审题定时态：_________________Step3素材积累：

【提分好词】

1.

喂鸡_______________2.

摘蔬菜_______________

3.

返回_______________4.

许多种类的.......___________________

【提分好句】

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从这次经历中，我学到了很多关于农业的知识。(learn

sth.

about)

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虽然我们有点儿累，但我们感到很高兴。(though)_____________________________________________________

以第一人称为主一般过去时feedthechickenspickvegetablesgobackmanykindsof...Fromthisexperience,Ilearntmanythingsaboutfarming.Thoughwewerealittletired,wefeltveryhappy.Step4思路引导段落布局开头：郊游的基本信息Lastweek,ourschoolhadatriptothefarm....中间：郊游期间的所见所闻结尾：感想...inthemorning,we...Fromthisexperience,I...Somestudents...Others...Intheafternoon,we...Step5实战训练ASchoolTripLastweek,ourschoolhadatriptothefarm._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Itwassunnythatday.Ateighto'clockinthemorning,wewenttothefarmbybus.Wesawmanykindsofanimalsthere.Somestudentsfedthechickensandsomemilkedthecows.Otherspickedeggs.Intheafternoon,wepickedvegetablesandfruithappily.Theywerefreshanddelicious.Ataboutfouro'clock,wewentback.Fromthisexperience,Ilearntmanythingsaboutfarming.Thoughwewerealittletired,wefeltveryhappy.ExercisesAgroupoflovelykids,agedfrom3to6fromNanning,Guangxi,wentonastudytriptoHarbin.

1.______EveryoneontheInternetjustlovedthem.Everyday,peoplefollowedtheirtriponline,helpingto“virtuallybabysit(虚拟照看)”them.Peoplecalledthemthe"littletangerines"becauseoftheirbrightorangeclothes.2.______Duringtheirtrip,the"littletangerines"trieddeliciouslocalfoodsinHarbinandwatchedbeautifulfireworksinthesnow.3.______Wherevertheywent,thelocalpeoplewelcomedthemwithopenarms.InChina'snorthernmostarea,thekidsproudlysangthenationalsongandsaluted(向......敬礼)theborderpolice.4.______TheyalsovisitedChina'snorthernmostfirestation.Thefirefightersmadesnowmentomakethe"littletangerines"smile.

5.______TheywerealsothankfulforallthesupportandcarefrompeopleonlineandfriendsinNortheastChina.Atfirst,someparentswereworried,butthentheywerehappytofindthatthekidsadapted(适应)wellandenjoyedthemselves.任务一:阅读还原。A.Theselovelykidswerelikelittlestarsonline.B.It'sanimportantlessonoftheireducationaltrip.C.Theparentsofthesekidsfelthappyandrelaxed.D.Theygotlotsoflovefromthepeopletheymet.E.Anotherreasonisthattheirhometown,Guangxi,isfamousforgrowingtangerines.AvEDBCExercises上面的文章介绍了广西的“小砂糖橘”到冰城哈尔滨进行研学旅行的经历，是一篇典型的介绍旅行的文章。其中，trieddeliciouslocalfoodsinHarbin和watchedbeautifulfireworksinthesnow很好的动词短语，体现了哈尔滨的特色。一、写作词汇积累1.去旅行________________2.进行研学旅行___________________3.写下；记下________________4.考虑_________________二、常用句型积累5.因为突然的大雨，我们不得不待在山顶。【becauseof】________________________________________________________6.上周末，我和同学们去旅行。【goonatrip】________________________________________________________7.当我们到达那里时，我们开始爬山。【starttodo

sth.】________________________________________________________任务二:表达。goonatripgoonastudytripwritedownthinkof/aboutWehadtostayatthetopofthemountainbecauseofthesuddenheavyrain.Lastweekend,Iwentonatripwithmyclassmates.Whenwearrivedthere,westartedtoclimbthemountain.Exercises短文填空，从方框内选择适当的词并用其正确形式填空，有两词多余。I'mHelen.IliveinBrightonandIamEnglish.Lastsummerholiday,IwenttoParisbycar.Iwentwith1.________family.Thereweremyparents,mybrotherTom,mylittlesisterSusanandme.Wesawsome2.__________placesinParis,likeEiffelTower,theLouvreMuseum(卢浮宫),andwemadeshorttripsaroundthecity.Ilovedthesetrips3.________Parisisaverybeautifulcity.4.________thefifthday,wewenttoEuroDisney.Westayedatahotelinthepark.Luckily,the5.___