高三英语二轮复习讲义：2023-2025年全国I卷、II卷读后续写框架模板

读后续写的写作框架：

第一段：首句（已给出）---衔接句（回应首句内容••主述位推进

法）----心理/环境-----动作----对话/独白---心理/环境----动

作----衔接句启下（过渡到第二段给出句）

第二段：首句（已给出）-••衔接句（回应首句内容）•一心理/

环境---动作--对话/独白--心理/环境--动作（解决问题）

---主题句（情感升华）

一,2025年全国一卷：

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamily

andfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.

Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethe

backyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.

TherewasjustonethingIhadn'tcountedon:Mybrother

chosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Though

friendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece'ssmallboysand

mysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrother

showedupzIaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphis

energybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgiving

thekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,the

weatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewent

indoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn'twantTobytobe

runningaroundinthehousezandmybrotherwasn'thappy

withdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrother

decidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn'theardanythingfrommy

brother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocome

outagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise-ashock,actually:

“Notachance."Clearlyzhewasunhappyoverthewaywehad

parted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,hezIIgetover

it,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouch

withmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcall

first.However,myconscience(良/心)keptbotheringme.Itried

toputmyselfinmybrother1sshoes.Hewasfacinghealth

issuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafew

monthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theone

whokepthimgoing.

注意：

(1)续写词数应为150个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

第一衔接句IrealizeditwasmeIwhowasatfault.I

段hadfocusedonlyontheinconvenience

Tobymightcause,butoverlookedmy

brother'sfeelings.

心理；环境Afeelingofguiltcrowdedintomymind.

动作Ishookmyheadconstantly

对话/独白andsaidtomyself:yes,Tobywasn't

justadog,itwasafriendwho

accompaniedhimthroughthehard

dayswhenhiswifepassedaway.

心理Ifeltsoupset

动作thatIplannedtoapologizeinperson,

hopingmybrothercouldforgiveme.

衔接句Mywifesupportedmydecisionand

bakedsomebiscuitsformybrother.

What'smore,Ipreparedsomedog

treatsforToby.

第二Whenthedooropened,Tobyrushedto

段measifIwasanoldfriendofhim.

心理/环境MybrotherwasshockedandIcould

seethesurpriseinhiseyes.

动作Ihandedhimthebiscuitsandthegifts

forToby,

傲白saying.〃IamsorryforwhatIdid.I

hopeyoucanforgiveme.Ididn't

understandhowimportantTobywasto

you."

心理Tearswelledupinhiseyes.

动作(解决问Heinvitedmeinandwesatdownto

题)talk.Meanwhile,Bobbywaggedhistail

aroundus.

主题升华Fromthatdayon,therelationship

betweenmybrotherandIalsogrew

better.Iwouldvalueandcherishour

brotherhoodforever.

2025年全国一卷读后续写答案：

Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Ihadfocusedonly

ontheinconvenienceTobymightcause,butoverlookedmy

7z

brothersfeelings.ForhimzTobywasntjustadog,itwas

afriendwhoaccompaniedhimthroughtheharddayswhen

hiswifepassedaway.Ishouldhavewelcomedhimasapart

ofourfamily.IfeltashamedofmythoughtlessnessandI

plannedtoapologizeinperson,hopingmybrothercould

forgiveme.Mywifesupportedmydecisionandbaked

somebiscuitsformybrother.What'smore,Iprepared

somedogtreatsforToby.

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmy

brother'sdoor.Whenthedooropened,Tobyrushedtome

asifIwasanoldfriendofhim.Asformybrother,hewas

shockedandIcouldseethesurpriseinhiseyes.Ihanded

himthebiscuitsandthegiftsforToby,saying."Iamsorry

forwhatIdid.Ihopeyoucanforgiveme.Ididnzt

understandhowimportantTobywastoyou.Mybrother

eyessoftened.Heinvitedmeinandwesatdowntotalk.

Meanwhile,Bobbywaggedhistailaroundus.Fromthatday

on,Tobywasalwayswelcomeatourhomeandthe

relationshipbetweenmybrotherandIalsogrewbetter.

二,2024年全国一卷：

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveningin

September.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabusto

Pragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthad

beendelayedbyanhourandahalf.Itoucheddownin

Viennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbus

toPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazy

throughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxi

ontherankwithoutasecondthought.

ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,

buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmy

pronunciationwastheproblem,so1explainedagainmore

slowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasaboutto

giveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupa

friend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhat

seemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownand

startedthecar.

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothe

busstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue（队列）still

waitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthe

bus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileon

hisface."Wemadeit/'hesaid.

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.I

flashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmy

Portuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecard

machinejustdidnotplayalong.Afeelingofhelplessness

washedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallof

thebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.

Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,

andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outof

order.Sorry."

第一段衔接句“TheATMisoutoforder",I

panted（喘着气说）

心理/环境Hissmilefadedashesawthe

desperationonmyface.

动作Nocash?Noproblem!"hesaid

unexpectedly,wavinghishand

dismissively（不屑一顾地）.Before

Icouldprotest,hegrabbedmy

suitcasefromthetrunkand

pushedmetowardthebus.

对话/独白"Conferenceisimportant,yes?

Gonow!"heinsisted

心理Awaveofgratitudewashedover

me,hastilywritingdownmy

contactdetailsonapieceof

paperandgaveittohim.

动作"I'llfindyouwhenIreturn/'I

promised,withthebusdoors

shuttingbehindme.

衔接句Throughthefoggedwindow,I

sawGunterstandingintherain,

wavinggoodbyetome.

第二段衔接句"Hello?"

心理/环境Hisvoicecrackledwithsurprise

anddelightwhenherecognized

mine.

动作Afterabriefconversation,we

agreedtomeetattheairport

whereIspottedGunterinthe

crowd,soIwavedandhurried

towardshim.

对话/独白"Thankyou,Gunter.Yourhelp

meanttheworldtome."Ihanded

himthecash.

心理Hewassohappybutrejectedit.

动作（解决问题）,'Keepit,”hesmiled,"Payit

forwardsomeday.MIstoodthere,

movedbyhisgesture.

主华AtthatmomentIunderstoodthe

depthofhiskindnessandvowed

tocarrythisspiritforward,

spreadinggoodwillwhereverI

went

2024年全国一卷答案:

"TheATMisoutoforder/Ipanted.Hissmilefadedashesaw

thedesperationonmyface."Nocash?Noproblem!"hesaid

unexpectedly,wavinghishanddismissively.BeforeIcould

protesthegrabbedmysuitcasefromthetrunkandpushed

metowardthebus."Conferenceisimportant,yes?Gonow!"

heinsisted.Awaveofgratitudewashedovermezhastily

writingdownmycontactdetailsonapieceofpaperandgave

ittohim,"I'llfindyouwhenIreturn,"Ipromised,withthebus

doorsshuttingbehindme.Throughthefoggedwindow,Isaw

Gunterstandingintherain,wavinggoodbyetome.

第二段

"Hello?"Hisvoicecrackledwithsurpriseanddelightwhenhe

recognizedmine.Afterabriefconversation,weagreedto

meetattheairportwhereIspottedGunterinthecrowd,soI

wavedandhurriedtowardshim."Thankyou,Gunter.Yourhelp

meanttheworldtome."Ihandedhimthecash.Hewasso

happybutrejectedit."Keepit/'hesmiled,"Payitforward

someday."Istoodthere,movedbyhisgesture.Atthat

momentIunderstoodthedepthofhiskindnessandvowedto

carrythisspiritforward,spreadinggoodwillwhereverIwent.

三,2023全国一卷:

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacherasked

metoenterawritingcontest,Isaidnowithoutthinking.Idid

notlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwas

onlymysecondlanguage.Writingwassodifficultandpainful

formethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaper

onthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereI

playedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichI

wassuretofail?Hisreply:"BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou'

rewillingtoapplyyourselfIthinkyouhaveagoodshotat

this."Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.

IchosePaulRevere1shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasa

silversmith（银匠）inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril

18z1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswere

coming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse7s

mouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny,andunlikelytobe

anyoneelse'schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,asspedthroughthenight?Didhe

gettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathized

immediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.Butzlike

revere*shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheekedmy

spelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.I

checkedoutahalf-dozenbooksonpaulReverefromthe

library.Ievenreadafewofthem.

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughed

outloudandsaid,"Great.Nowzwriteitagain."Iwroteit

again,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinisheditzthe

thoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.

IfIdidnftwin.Iwouldn1tcare.

第一段衔接句"You'vedoneagood

jobiYoutookfirstplace!"

心理/环境Iwasfrozenatthespotjeeling

incredibleandoverjoyed.

动作Myfellowstudentsgavemeahandclapfor

mygoodperformance.UntilthenI

confirmedwhatIheardwastrue.

对话/独白〃Imadeit〃,Isaidtomyself.

心理Afeelingofexcitementcrowdedintomy

mind.

动作Tearsrolleddownmycheekswithout

control.

衔接句Iwasfortunateenoughtobeinvitedto

asimplebutimpressiveaward

presentationceremony.Whenthe

schoolmasterpresentedthecertificate

tomezmywholebodywastrembling

andmyeyestwinkledwithpleasure.My

dedicationpaidoff.

第二段衔接句"Congratulations!"myteachergreeted

mewithafirmhandshake.

心理/环境Awaveofgratitudesweptoverme.

动作Ihuggedhimtightly

对话/独白n"Millionsofthanks,Sir!"

心理Totellthetruth,Ifeltinferior（自卑的）

sinceIhadbeensoweakinEnglishand

writing.

动但解决问Ialmostgaveuponmyself.However,

题）thewritingcompetitionchangedmy

world.

主题升华Anditwasmyteacherwhowas

considerateenoughtoencourageme

toattendit,urgingmetotake

advantageofmypotentialintelling

stories.Myteachergaveroseswith

everlastingfragranceinhishands!

2023年读后续写答案：

/fewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,the

newscame.'You'vedoneagood

joblYoutookfirstplace!"Iwasfrozenatthespotjeeling

incredibleandoverjoyed.Thethunderousapplauseand

heartyblessingsfrommyfellowstudentsconfirmed

whatIheardtobetrue.Nextmorning,Iwasfortunate

enoughtobeinvitedtoasimplebutimpressiveaward

presentationceremony.Whentheschoolmaster

presentedthecertificatetome,mywholebodywas

tremblingandmyeyestwinkledwithpleasure.My

dedicationpaidoff.

Icametotheteacher'sofficeaftertheaward

夕，ese/7均"077."Congratulations!”myteachergreetedme

withafirmhandshake.n"Millionsofthanks,Sir!"I

huggedhimtightly.Totellthetruth,IfeltinferiorsinceI

hadbeensoweakinEnglishandwriting.Ialmostgave

uponmyself.However,thewritingcompetitionchanged

myworld.Anditwasmyteacherwhowasconsiderate

enoughtoencouragemetoattendit,u