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把道理说透、说准、说到位
近日,一些学校开始尝试使用AI辅助心理咨询。你校英文报就此现象开展征文活动,请你
写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)你的观点;
(2)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
MyViewsonAI-DrivenMentalHealthSupportonCampus
Step1列提纲
【思维拓展小妙招A-B-—C]
赞1.
同
理2.
由
3.
Step2[表达小妙招】
某事+细节/结果/解释/评述....
,which/where...............(定从)
主+谓,(thus)allowing/enablingsbtodosih...............(非谓语一结果)
,(thus)makingsbdosth................................(非谓语一结果)
,(thus)makingitpossible/impossible/difficult/challenging/easy/convenient/
Inconvenient...(forsb)todosth(it形宾/非谓语)
.leadingto名词/contributingto名词/causing’名词....(非谓语一结果)
IThepossibilitythat...
>boosting/helping/improving/facilitating/ensuring.................(非谓语一结果)
bccausc/sincc/givcnthat/considcringthat/ongroundsthat....(原因状语从句)
.Notonly倒装butalso.......................(倒装句)
例如:
AIcanprovide24/7service,+细节/结果/解释/评述....
①(thus)breakingtimeandspacebarriers,(结果1)whichallowsstudentsstrugglingwith
mentalhealthissuestohaveeasyaccesstoinstantsuggestionsanytimeandanywhere.(结果2)
②因此使有需要的学生能够不受时间和地点限制,及时获得心理支持成为可能)。
(thusmakingitpossibleforsbtodosth)
③让面临心理困扰(menk.1challenges)的学生无需预约等候(withoutwaitingforappointments)»
随时随地获得帮助,(结果1)有效缓解他们的心理健康问题。(结果2)
④确保即时建议触手可及(instantsuggestionsareavailable).(结果1)帮助学生及时(without
delay)摆脱负面情绪。(结果2)
⑤它不仅能够减轻(ease)专业心理咨询师的繁重工作负担(Iheheavyworkloadofprofessional
counselors),还能确保心理健康指导随时可用(immediateavailabilityofmentalhealthguidance)o
(notonly倒装…)
Step3根据上述【思维小妙招】十【表达小妙招】尝试写下列句子
赞同2+【表达小妙招】
AIcanprovideprofessionalguidance______________________________________________
(因为它利用大量的心理知识),provendataandevidence-basedtheories,
(确保了高质量的建议)thathelpsstudentssoothe
negativeemotions,suchasanxiety,depression,andanger.
赞同三+语言表达
AIprovidesasenseofsecurityforstudents,especiallyshyoneswho.
___________________________________________(可能犹豫不决去面对面地分享他们的困难
和humancounselors).____________________________________________________________
(考虑至AI可以提供)aprivateandstress-freeenvironment,theyaremorewillingtoexpresstheir
truefeelingsopenly.___________________________________________________
(使AI能产生更精准和针对性的建议)basedoncompleteandhonestinformation.
Step4列提纲(反对)
反
对
理
由
Step5根据【思维小妙招】+【表达小妙招】尝试写下列句子
反对一:选择短语填空并体会细节表达
A:tailorcdsupport
B:subtlefeelingsindepth
Cempathyandemotionalconnection
Dstudents'feelings
Ai-generatedsuggestionsarebasedoncold,impersonalalgorithms,lacking
,whichareessentialfotrulyunderstand
.(比较可有可无),Bycontrast,humancounselorscanperceive
students5bypickinguptheirfacialexpressions,toneofvoiceandbody
language,allowingthemtooffer.)
反对二
A:real-timeinteractions
B:sootheone'sdistress(痛苦)
C:providcsuggestionsmechanically
D:aheartfelthug
E:comfortstudentswithsincerecare
AI,basedoncoldalgorithmsandpre-setprograms,canonly______________________________.(比较可有
可无)Humancounselors,however,can_____________________________________________________andadjust
responsesbasedon__________________________________.andcanevenofferthem________________________.an
encouragingsmileandareassuringglance,whichareessentialto______________________________,yet
theyaresomethingAIcompletelylacks.
反对三
A:analyzecomplexpsychologicalissues
B:Giventhat
C:requireflexibilityandprofessionalinterventions(干预)
Ai-generatedsuggestionsareimpersonalandmechanical,theyfailto
.which.
Step6辩证表达
•—)辩证表达出现在par.l中时
Par.l选择
①WhileAIgeneratessuggestionsbasedonimpersonalalgorithms
©AlthoughAIcanofferinstantsuggestions
赞同:
Inrecentdays,somecampuseshavewitnessedtheuseofAIasmentalhealth
support._____________________________________________,Iwouldarguethatthisisapositivetrend.
反对:
Inrecentdays,somecampuseshavewitnessedtheuseofAIasmentalhealth
support._____________________________________,Iwouldarguethatthisisnotasensiblepractice.
给本句加一个辩证句
Recently,theattemptofsomeschoolstouseAIforpsychologicalcounselinghasarouseda
debate.Personally,Iopposethispractice
现象©Inrecentdays,地点/时间havewitnessed现象
句的©Recently,thephenomenonthat具体现象hasarousedaheateddebate.
其它(3).......isanemergingtrend.
表达④Nowadays,Itisincreasinglycommontosee…
⑤Thesedays,某现象hasgainedmonicntuni/inipctus.
©Atpresent,...hasdevelopedvigorously/hasdevelopedatastartlingspeed.
⑧Recently,....hasbecomeanintegralpartof.................
©Recently,therehasbeenagrowingtendency(hat.….
©Currently,itiswidelyacknowledgedthat................
观①frommyperspective/standpoint,inmyopinion,asfarasIamconcerned,frommypoint
点ofview
句②Ithink/Iholdtheview(hat/Iamconvincedthat/Ideem/Imaintain/Iwould
argue................
(-)辩证表达也可以出现在par.2中
WhileAIcanprovideinstantsuggestions.Iwouldarguethatitisnotsuitabletoworkasmental
healthsupport.Firstly.............................whatisparticularlyworthmentioningisthat............in
addition....
注意层次
Firstly,Secondly,finally/ukimately
Firstofall.Inaddition.
Tobeginwith,Besides,
Inthefirstplace.Moreover,
FirstandforemostFurthermore,
Additionally,
Whatismore,
Whatisparticularlyworthmentioningisthat...
Itisalsoworthnotingthat...
Anotherpointworthattentionisthat...
Step.7par.3的写法
Par.3赞成:
Inconclusion,+重申观点
AI-assistedmentalcounselingis_________________________________(一个珍贵的补充)to
traditionalcounseling.Notonly_______________________________________(它带来了便利和高效)
tostudents'mentalhealthcarebutalsocasesprofessionals'heavyworkload.
反对:
Inconclusion,+重申观点
ConsideringAl'spotentialrisks,schoolshouldprioritizehuman-centeredcounseling
methodstoensurestudentsgetpropermentalsupport.
Step8学习积累
参考范文(赞成):
Inrecentdays,someschoolshavestartedtotryusingAItoassistpsychologicalcounseling.
Frommyperspective,thisisapositivetrend.
Firstly,AIcanprovide24/7accessiblesupport.Studentsmayfeelembarrassedtotalkto
humancounselorsimmediatelywhentheyfacementalissues,butAIoffersaprivateandstress-
freeenvironmenttoexpressthemselves.Secondly,AIisgoodatdata-drivenanalysis.Itcan
quicklyidentifypatternsinstudents'emotionsandproblemsbyanalyzingtheirinputs,thus
providingtargetedsuggestions.Moreover,AIcanhelprelievetheheavyworkloadofprofessional
counselors,allowingthemtofocusonmorecomplexcases.
Inconclusion,AI-assistedpsychologicalcounselingisavaluablesupplementtotraditional
counseling.Itbringsmoreconvenienceandefficiencytostudents'mentalhealthcare.
参考范文(反对):
Recently,theattemptofsomeschoolstouseAIfbrpsychologicalcounselinghasarouseda
debate.Personally,Iopposethispractice.
Firstofall,psychologicalcounselingrequiresempathyandemotionalconnection,which
Ailacks.Humancounselorscanunderstandstudents'feelingsthroughfacialexpressions,tones
andbodylanguage,whileAIcanonlyprocesstextsordatamechanically.Secondly,complex
mentalproblemsoftenneedhumanjudgmentandcreativitytosolve.Al'ssuggestionsarebasedon
pre-setprogramsandlacktheflexibilitythathumanmindshave.Additionally,relyingtoomuch
onAImaymakestudentslesswillingtocommunicatewithrealpeople,weakening(heirsocial
skillsandemotionalintelligence.
ConsideringAl'spotentialrisks,schoolsshouldprioritizehuman-centeredcounseling
methodstoensurestudentsgetpropermentalsupport.
表达积累:
1)通用高级表达
assistpsychologicalcounseling
一个积极的趋势
引发热议
opposethispractice
一个宝贵的补充
带来便利与高效
优先采用以人为本的方式
确保获得恰当的心理支持
2)赞成范文亮点表达
提供全天候的支持
私密且无压力的环境
数据驱动的分析
有针对性的建议
减轻繁重的工作负担
专注于更更杂的案例
3)反对范文亮点表达
需要共情与情感联结
机械地处理文字或数据
人类的判断力与创造力
预设程序
缺乏灵活性
过度依赖AI
削弱社交能力与情商
潜在风险
你的完整作文:
MyViewsonAI-DrivenMentalHealthSupportonCampus
Step9Al类作文的常见表达积累
A.AI&科技与学习
I.AI&科技在学习中的应用
选择:grading,improve,clarify,relyon,
Altoolsforhomeworkassistance
bewidelyusedtooarwritingandourspeakingskills
Automatedwriting
_______doubts
2.AI&科技应用于学习的优势
选择:al【heirownpace,help,(rack,access,instant,personalized,
awealthoflearningresources
Providefeedback
Allowonetolearn
academicprogress(跟踪学习进度)
self-pacedlearning(有利于自己学习的节奏)
Providelearning(个性化的学习)
3.AI&科技应用于学习的问题/缺陷
选择:independentthinking,over-reliance,weaken,problem-soNingability,stifle,
Causeontechnology造成对技术的过度依赖
criticalthinkingskills削弱批判性思维能力
creativethinking扼杀创造性思维
Hinderandlearning妨碍独立思考和学习
Undermine削弱解决问题的能力
4.AI&科技应用于学习的建议
选择:combine,strike,prioritize,over-dependence,boundaries,embrace
originalthought优先考虑原创的想法
setforAI为人工智能设定边界
Alwithcriticalthinking将Al与批判性思维相结合
avoidonAI避免过度依赖人工智能
AIasasupplement/supplementarytoolinsteadofareplacement,
拥抱人工智能作为辅助而不是替代品
abalancebetweenAIandindependentthinking在人T:智能与独立思考之间取得平
衡
B.AI&科技与生活
1.AI&科技在生活中应用的方面
选择:AI-generated.AI-powered、Ai-guided,real-time,facialrecognition,mentalhealth,
voiceassistants智能语音助手
Automatictranslation实时自动翻译
payments人脸识别支付
Al-basedchatbotsAI心理健康聊天机器人
art/musicAI生成艺术/音乐
medicaldiagnosisAI辅助医疗诊断
2.AI&科技在生活中的功能
analyzemedicalimagesandpatientdatatoassistdoctorsindiagnosingdiseases
分析医疗影像与患者数据,辅助医生诊断疾病
navigateroads,detectobstacles,andmakereal-timedrivingdecisions
自主导航道路、识别障碍物并实时做出驾驶决策
AIchatbotsprovideinstantresponsesandsolutionstocustomers
人工智能客服聊天机器人可即时响应并解决用户问题
AI-powcrcdtranslationtoolsinstantlytranslatetextbetweendifferentlanguages.
人工智能驱动的翻译工具可实时在不同语言之间翻译
AIinfitnessappstracksphysicalactivity,providesworkoutsuggestions,andmonitorshealth
conditions
健身应用中的人工智能可追踪身体活动、提供锻炼建议,并监测健康状况。
AIanalyzessoilandcropdatatooptimizeiiTigation,fertilization,andpestcontrol,improving
cropyields
人工智能通过分析土壤与作物数据,优化灌溉、施肥和害虫防治,提升农作物产量
3.AI&科技在生活中应用的优点
undoubtedlyenhancesefficiency无疑提高了效率
pavesthewayforabrightertomorrow为更光明的明天铺平了道路
savetimeandincreasingproductivity.节省时间并提高生产力。
makedailylifemoreconvenient.让日常生活更加便捷.
auloinatehomefunctions实现家居功能自动化
personalizeexperiencesandenhanceusersalisfaclion.个性亿体验并提升用户满意度。
processlargeamountsofdatawithhighprecision,reducingerrors.以高精度处理大量数据,减少
错误。
operatecontinuouslywithoutbreaks,providinground-the-clocksupport.不间断运行,提供全天候
支持
significantlyloweroperationalcosts显著降低运营成本
leadtomoreaccurateandeffectivemedicalcare.带来更精准、更有效的医疗服务。
detectandrespondtopotentialhazards,improvingsafetyinvariousfields.
检测并应对潜在危险,提升各领域的安全性。
recommendpersonalizedcontent,enhancingtheentertainmentexperience
推荐个性化内容,提升娱乐体验
4.AI&科技在生活中应用的建议
carefullyweighitsbenefitsandpotentialdrawbacks仔细权衡它的好处和潜在的缺点
addressthecomplexchallengesitpresents应对它带来的复杂挑战
Homework:同类话题拓展练习
假定你是李华,在口语课上,外教M汰e组织同学们讨论“能否在英语学习中使用翻译笔”。
请你代表小组做总结发言,内容包括:1.小组观点;2.陈述理由。
Step1列提纲(赞同)
AI提供24/7全天候服务,突破时空限制
AI依托专业数据,提供高质量心理指导
AI保护隐私,让内向学生更愿意敞开心扉
Step2表达小妙招(完整句子)
AIcanprovide24/7service,thusbreakingtimeandspacebarriers,whichallowsstudents
strugglingwithmentalhealthissuestohaveeasyaccesstoinstantsuggestionsanytimeand
anywhere.
AIcanprovide24/7service,thusmakingitpossiblefbrstudentsinneedtogettimelymental
supportwithouttimeandplacelimits.
AIcanprovide24/7service,enablingstudentsfacingmentalchallengestogelhelpanytimeand
anywherewithoutwaitingforappointments,thuseffectivelyrelievingtheirmentalhealth
problems.
AIcanprovide24/7service,ensuringinstantsuggestionsareavailable,helpingstudentsgetridof
negativeemotionswithoutdelay.
Notonlycaniteasetheheavyworkloadofprofessionalcounselors,butalsoitcanensureihe
immediateavailabilityofmentalhealthguidance.
Step3赞同句填空
AIcanprovideprofessionalguidanceasitmakesuseofabundantpsychologicalknowledge,
provendataevidence-basedtheories,ensuringhigh-qualityadvicethathelpstudentssoothe
negativeemotions,suchasanxiety,depression,andanger.
Alprovidesasenseofsecurityforstudents,especiallyshyoneswhomayhesitatetosharetheir
difficultieswithhumancounselorsfacetoface.ConsideringthatAIcanprovideaprivateand
stress-freeenvironment,theyaremorewillingtoexpresstheirtruefeelingsopenly,enablingAIto
offermoreaccurateandtargetedsuggestionsbasedoncompleteandhonestinformation.
Step4列提纲(反对)
AI缺乏共情与情感连接,无法深度理解学生
AI只能机械提供建议,不能实时互动与情感安慰
AI无法灵活处理复杂心理问题
Step5反对句填空
AI-generatcdsuggestionsarebasedoncoldJmpcrsonalalgorithms,lackingCempathyand
emotionalconnection,whichareessentialtotrulyunderstandDstudents'feelings.Bycontrast,
humancounselorscanperceivestudents'Bsubtlefeelingsindepthbypickinguptheirfacial
expressionsjoneofvoiceandbodylanguage,allowingthem:oofferAtailoredsupport.
AI.basedoncoldalgorithmsandpre-setprograms,canonlyCprovidesuggestionsmechanically.
Humancounselors,however,canEcomfortstudentswithsincerecareandadjustresponsesbased
onAreal-timeinteractions,andcanevenofferthemDaheartfelthug,anencouragingsmileanda
reassuringglancc,\vhicharcessentialtoBsootheone'sdistress,yettheyarcsomethingAI
completelylacks.
BGiventhatAl-gcncratcdsuggestionsarcimpersonalandmechanical,theyfailtoAanalyze
complexpsychologicalissues,whichCrequireflexibilityandprofessionalinterventions.
Step6辩证表达填空
赞同:Inrecentdays,somecampuseshavewitnessedtheuseofAIasmentalhealth
support.AlthoughAIcanofferinstantsuggestions,Iwouldarguethatthisisaposit
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