考研英语（写作）模拟试卷88

考研英语（写作）模拟试卷88

一、大作文（本题共5题，每题7.0分，共5分。）

1、KnowingtheProblemsIsNotEnoughWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthe

drawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainits

intendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.解决方案呢/

标准答案：Inthepicture,anofficialisholdingabrushpenandwritingtwoChinese

charactersmeaning"read'onastone.Thestoneistherepresentationofaproblemand

moresimilarstoneswiththesameChinesecharactersarcbehindtheofficial.Thispicture

seemstourgeofficialstodosomethingabouttheproblemsfound,forknowingthe

problemsisfarfromenough,andtakingactiontoaddressthemismoreimportant.Inmy

opinion,procrastinationamongsomeofficialscouldbeeradicatedbyaperiormance-

basedevaluationscheme.Tobeexact,officials'salaryandpromotionshouldbedirectly

linkedtohowwelltheyhaverespondedtotheproblemsexposedbycitizensandthe

media.Iftheyturnablindeyetotheproblemsandtakenoaction,theyshouldbe

removedfromoffice.If,ontheotherhand,theytackletheproblemseffectively,they

wouldbefavorablyconsideredwhenthereisapromotionoffer.Theycouldalsobe

financiallyrewardedifthemeasurestheytakehavebeenprovensuccessfulandpowerful.

Inconclusion,tourgeofficialstobothknowandsolvetheproblems,areforminsalary

andpromotionschemeneedtobelaunched.

知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了一名官员拿着毛笔在各个问题上批了“已阅”二字。

从图解看出，该图认为只知道存在问题是不够的，还需要拿出具体的解决方案。根

据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出只知

道存在问题是不够的，官员应采取行动解决问题。第二段提出个人看法：官员拖

延处理问题的陋习可通过绩效考核机制来解决。其一，官员的晋升和工资应该与其

解决问题的能力挂钩。其二，如果官员的解决方案既有效又及时，可以给予一定的

奖励。第三段总结全文：通过改革工资和晋升、任免机制来敦促官员有效解决问

题。

and3)giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,alittleboyiswalkinginacommercialstreet.Heis

bombardedbycountlessleaflets,rangingfrombody-bvildingtoEnglishtraining,from

propertysalestocomputertraining.Thepicturevividlyillustratestheawkwardsituation

wehaveonceexperienced-weare"bothered"bytheubiquitousleaflets,whichweare

notevenabitinterestedin.AsIseeit,thesalestechniquesadoptedbythoseleaflet­

dependantcompaniesneedtoheupgraded.Moreoftenthannot,peoplearedisgusted

withtheseleaflets,whichturnouttobehelplessforattractingpotentialconsumers.

Makingthebestuseofsocialmediamayachievebetterpromotioneffect.Forexample,

companiescanoffersonicfreetrialsoftheirproductsorservice.Inexchangeforthose

freetrials,customersneedtopromisetowriteanin-depthreviewabouttheproductsor

theserviceandpostitonthecompany'ssocialmediaplatfbnn.Inthisway,promotionof

productsorservicecouldhappenwithoutusinganyflysheets,which,undoubtedly,will

bemoreeffective.Toconclude,promotingproductsorservicethroughleafletingis

inadvisablenowadays,whilesocialmediamaybeagreaterchannel.

知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了一名小男孩在商业街上被众多传单包围的情景。传

单种类繁多，让男孩应接不暇。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如

下：第一段描绘图片，指出我们饱受传单的“骚扰”。第二段提出个人看法：传单

宣传并非良策，建议升级宣传策略，可运用社交网络作为宣传渠道。第三段总结

全文：传单宣传已不是明智之举，而社交媒体会是一个更好的宣传渠道。

3、OnCelebrityEndorsementWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.

Inyouressay,youshould1)describet_itended

meaning,and3)giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,acelebrityisposingforaproductendorsement.Shecloses

oneeyewhileleavestheotheropen.Thewide-openeyestandsforherpersonalgains,

whiletheclosedoneisasymbolofsocialresponsibility.Theintentionofthepictureisto

callformoralintegrityfromcelebritieswhentheyareendorsingcommercialproducts.In

myeyes,celebrityendorsementshouldbeaqualityguaranteeratherthanamaskfor

inferiorproducts.Forinstance,acelebritywhoendorsesapharmaceuticalproductwill

sendamessagetothetargetedbuyersthattheproductiseffective.Iftheproductfailsto

deliverthedesiredeffect,orevenworsensthebuyers5healthcondition,thecelebrityis

actuallyanaccompliceofthesalefraud.Thus,itisquiteadvisablethatcelebrities

themselvestrytheproductfirstbeforetheyendorseit.Toconclude,celebritiesneedto

putconsumers'well-beingbeforetheirpersonalbenefits.Theiractualexperienceofthe

productswillmaketheendorsementmoreconvincingandatthesametimemake

themselvesbecomemoresociallyresponsible.

知识点解析♦：这幅图片刻画了明星代言产品时睁一只眼、闭一只眼的情景，睁开

的眼睛看到的是个人利益，闭上的眼睛忽视的是社会责任。根据这一思路，并按照

题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：呼吁明星

在代言产品时应诚信。第二段提出个人看法：明星的代言应该是质量的担保，而

不是为伪劣产品打幌子。如果没有亲自使用过产品就不应轻易代言，否则会贻害消

费者。第三段总结全文：明星代言应把社会责任放在第一位。

4、BuildaHarmoniousWorldWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.

Inyouressay,youshould1)describetintended

meaning,and3)giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,aglobeissurroundedbysixchildrenofdifferentcolors.They

areallsmilingandholdinghandswithoneanother.Onthecenteroftheglobearefour

Chinesecharacters,meaning"aharmoniousworld".Asillustratedinthepicture,we

shouldbuildaharmoniousworldintheinterestofourfuturegenerations.AsfarasIam

concerned,theconceptof"aharmoniousworld"isanoblegoalthatweshouldcommit

ourselvesto.Inessence,aharmoniousworldisaworldwithtolerance.Sincewcliveina

meltingpotwherepeopleofdiverseethnicbackgroundslivetogether,itisnaturalthatwe

maynotthinkalikeandwemighthavetotallydifferentopinionsonthesameissue.We

mustlearntobetolerantofideasdifferentfromourownandtrytoavoidconfrontation

amongpeopleorevencountries,therebyhelpingtobuildaharmoniousworldwhereour

kidswillnotbeplaguedbyconflictsandwarseventually.Inconclusion,toleranceisan

essentialingredientforaharmoniousworldthatisthebetterfuturewemustbuildforthe

futuregenerations.

知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了6名不同肤色的小孩微笑地手拉手围着地球。从图

解看出，各个种族的小孩都受惠于一个和谐的世界。根据这一思路，并按照题目要

求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：我们应该为后代

营造一个和谐世界。第二段提出个人看法：“和谐世界”是一个崇高的目标，我们

要为之努力。和谐社会的本质是包容，我们要学会包容不同的观点，避免冲突。

第三段总结全文。

5、TheGuideWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyouressay,

waning,and3)give

yourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,agroupoftouristsiswalkingontheedgeofanoversized

knife,whichisheldbyadishonesttourguide.Ontheknife,theword"shopping"is

marked.Thispictureintendstorevealtheproblemcausedbycommission-mindedtour

guides.Apparently,sometourguidesareseekinghugeprofitsbyluringorevenforcing

touriststobuythingsinsomedesignatedshops.Tocurbtheimproperpracticeof

compellingtouriststomakepurchase,twomeasuresshouldbetaken.First,atourguide

supervisioncommittee,probablyattachedtothetourismindustrycouncil,couldbesetup

todisciplinetourguides.Whenthecommitteereceivescomplaintsfromtourists,

investigationshouldbecarriedout.Iftourguidesarefoundforcingtouriststobuythings,

t