Unit 4 Our Memory（写作提升）（解析版）

/Unit4OurMemory.(写作提升）写一则介绍如何提高记忆力⭐典例导引⭐⭐典例导引⭐本单元以“记忆力”为话题，要求我们能够了解常用的提高记忆力的方法，并能够向别人介绍一些提高记忆力的方法。写这类作文时，可用表示顺序的first,second,what'smore,lastbutnotleast来逐条介绍提高记忆力的方法，最后表达自己的希望或祝福。[教材典句]1、Tostartwith,itisimportanttounder-standhowmemoryworks.2、First,payattention.3、Themoreyoureviewwhatyoulearn,themorelikelyyouwillrememberit.4、Lastbutnotleast,boostyourmemorybystayinghealthy.⭐典例剖析⭐⭐典例剖析⭐假设你是Mary的好友Bill,Mary昨晚给你发了一封电子邮件，她向你请教如何才能提高记忆力，请你根据以下提示，给Mary回复一封电子邮件。提示：改变日常习惯；努力记忆新东西饮食均衡；睡眠充足其他提高记忆力的方法（请补充）要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实个人信息。DearMary,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Bill⭐思维导图⭐⭐思维导图⭐ 提高记忆力开篇点题：提高记忆力的重要性Thankyoufor...,importanttoimprove,Therearemanyways...展开表述：介绍提高记忆力的方法First:trytochangeyourdailyhabits;Second:keepabalanceddiet,getenoughsleep;What'smore:learntorelax,takeexercise;Lastbutnotleast:connect...with...enoughtime,abalanceddiet结尾:表达自己的祝愿Ibelieve,improveyourmemory⭐范文介绍⭐⭐范文介绍⭐DearMary,Thankyouforyouremail!Itisimportanttoimproveyourmemory.Therearemanywaystoimproveit.First,trytochangeyourdailyhabits.Themoreyoutrytoremembernewthings,thebetteryourmemorywillbe.Second,it'simportanttokeepabalanceddietandgetenoughsleep,becausetheygiveyourbrainenoughenergy.What'smore,youshouldlearntorelaxandtakeexerciseoftentoreducestress.Lastbutnotleast,youcanconnectnewinformationwithwhatyoualreadyknow,whichhelpsyourememberthingslonger.Ibelievethatyoucanimproveyourmemorysoon.Yours,Bill[亮点点评]①用“Itis+形容词+todosth.”点明了提高记忆力的重要性。②用First,..Second,...What'smore,...Lastbutnotleast,..层次分明地介绍了改善记忆的方法。③用“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构说明努力记忆新东西的好处。④用“Ibelieve+that从句”给予鼓励，让朋友有成功的信心。⭐素材宝库⭐⭐素材宝库⭐词汇积累词汇积累核心单词①memoryn.记忆力②improvev.提高；改善③brainn.大脑④healthyadj.健康的⑤relaxv.放松⑥restn.&v.休息⑦exercisen.&v.锻炼⑧repeatv.重复⑨reviewv.复习⑩focusv.集中注意力⑪enoughadj.充足的⑫sleepn.睡眠⑬dietn.饮食⑭mindn.心思；头脑⑮skilln.技巧⑯dailyadj.日常的⑰knowledgen.知识⑱forgetv.忘记⑲rememberv.记住⑳confidencen.信心必备短语①improvememory提高记忆力②dosports做运动③haveenoughsleep拥有充足睡眠④keephealthy保持健康⑤relaxoneself放松自己⑥takeregularexercise坚持规律锻炼⑦repeatmanytimes多次重复⑧reviewintime及时复习⑨payattentionto集中注意力⑩haveabalanceddiet均衡饮食⑪developgoodhabits养成好习惯⑫clearone’smind理清思绪⑬learnbyheart牢记；背诵⑭dailypractice日常练习⑮stayactive保持思维活跃句型积累句型积累开头句①It’sveryimportantforstudentstoimprovememory.对学生来说提升记忆力十分重要。②Goodmemorymakesourstudyeasierandmoreeffective.好的记忆力让我们学习更轻松高效。③Manystudentsaretroubledbypoormemoryinstudy.许多学生苦于学习中记忆力差。④Thereareplentyofusefulwaystodevelopourmemory.有许多实用方法可以培养记忆力。⑤Astrongmemoryhelpsuslearnmoreknowledgequickly.超强记忆力助我们快速掌握更多知识。中间句①Weneedtosleepovereighthourseverysingleday.我们每天需要保证八小时以上睡眠。②Doingsportscanmakeourbrainbecomestronger.坚持运动能让我们的大脑更强健。③Weshouldeatmorefruitsandvegetablesforhealth.我们应多吃蔬果，保持饮食健康。④Whenstudying,wemustfocusourattentionfully.学习时我们一定要全身心集中注意力。⑤Repeatingtextsproperlyisgoodforlong-termmemory.适度背诵利于形成长久记忆。⑥Itiswisetogooverlearnedknowledgeintime.及时温习已学知识是明智之举。⑦Wecanrememberthingswellbyreasonableassociation.我们可以借助合理联想牢记事物。⑧Neverstayuplate,itwillbadlyaffectmemory.切勿熬夜，这会严重影响记忆力。⑨Takingshortbreakscanrefreshourtiredbrain.短暂休息能让疲惫的大脑恢复活力。⑩Weshouldkeepusingourbraineverydayactively.平日里我们要勤于动脑、活跃思维。结尾句①Inaword,goodhabitsarethebestwaytoimprovememory.总之，好习惯是提升记忆力最好的途径。②Aslongaswesticktotheseways,wewillgetbettermemory.只要坚持这些方法，我们的记忆力定会变好。③Idecidetochangemylifestyletobuildgoodmemory.我决定调整生活方式，练就良好记忆力。④Bettermemorywillbringusgreatprogressinstudy.良好的记忆力会让我们在学习中取得巨大进步。⑤Let’stakeactionnowandmakeourmemorybetterandbetter.让我们即刻行动，让记忆力越来越好。英语谚语英语谚语①Reciteoften,rememberlong.常背诵，记得牢。②Reviewoldthingstolearnnewknowledge.温故而知新。③Keepyourbrainactive,keepmemoriesfresh.勤于用脑，记忆长存。④Properrestsharpensyourmemory.适度休息，增强记忆。⑤Associationhelpseasymemory.联想记忆，事半功倍。⑥Neverstopusingyourmind.常用头脑，不忘不忘。⑦Goodmoodimproveslearningandmemory.心情愉悦，益于记诵。⑧Littlebylittleonegoesfar;daybydaymemorygrows.日积月累，记忆渐强。⑨Clearthoughtsbringclearmemories.思路清晰，记忆分明。⑩Earlylearningstayslongerinmind.早学知识，经久不忘。⭐专项训练⭐⭐专项训练⭐1．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“Thewaystoimprovememory”的短文。要点提示：（1）要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章；（2）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等；（3）及时复习，防止遗忘；（4）多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。要求：（1）可以适当自由发挥；（2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；（3）词数80个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThewaystoimprovememoryMemoryisveryimportantinourdailylifeandstudy.Herearesomewaystoimproveit.Firstly,whenyoustudy,youshouldfocusyourattentionanddon’tthinkaboutotherthings.Secondly,youshouldunderstandwhatyouarelearning.Ifso,youcanrememberthingsforalongtime.Thirdly,ifyougooverwhatyouhavelearnedintime,youwillnotforgetthethingseasily.Fourthly,eatmorefood,suchaseggs,milkandfish.Theyaregoodforyourbrains.Finally,youshoulddomoreexercise,getenoughsleepandenoughrestafterhardwork.It’sthekeytoimprovingyourmemory.Ifyoucandoso,youwillhaveagoodmemory.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容详细介绍如何提高记忆力，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据提示要点详细介绍如何提高记忆力；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①goover复习②intime及时③suchas例如④thekeytodoingsth.做某事的关键[高分句型]①Firstly,whenyoustudy,youshouldfocusyourattentionanddon’tthinkaboutotherthings.(when引导的时间状语从句)②Thirdly,ifyougooverwhatyouhavelearnedintime,youwillnotforgetthethingseasily.(if引导的条件状语从句)2．根据要求完成大作文：80-100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。很多学生都抱怨总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示写一篇题“TheWaystoImproveMemory”的短文。（1）集中精神做事；(focusyourattention)（2）要想记得长久，必须先理解文章；（3）及时复习，防止遗忘；（4）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等；（5）多做运动、保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。TheWaystoImproveMemoryMemoryisveryimportantinourdailylifeandstudy.Herearesomewaystoimproveit.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

TheWaystoImproveMemory

Memoryisveryimportantinourdailylifeandstudy.Herearesomewaystoimproveit.

Firstly,whenyoustudy,youshouldfocusyourattentionanddon’tthinkaboutotherthings.Secondly,youshouldunderstandwhatyouarelearning.Ifso,youcanrememberthingsforalongtime.Thirdly,ifyougooverwhatyouhavelearnedintime,youwillnotforgetthethingseasily.Fourthly,havemorefood,suchaseggs,milkandfish.Theycanimproveyourmemory.Finally,youshoulddomoreexercise,getenoughsleepandenoughrestafterhardwork.It’sthekeytoimprovingyourmemory.

Ifyoucandoso,youwillhaveagoodmemory.【详解】[总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍提高记忆的方法；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章应该包括所有提示内容，不要遗漏，要求语法正确，语句通顺连贯。[写作步骤］第一步，承接短文开头，引入主题；第二步，介绍提高记忆的五种方法；第三步，总结。[亮点词汇］①focusone’sattention集中某人注意力②thinkabout考虑③goover复习④intime及时⑤It’sthekeytodoingsth是做某事的关键[高分句型］①Thirdly,ifyougooverwhatyouhavelearnedintime,youwillnotforgetthethingseasily.(if引导条件状语从句，what引导宾语从句)3．某英文报刊为中学生开辟专栏，请以“Howtoimproveyourmemory”为题目写一篇英语短文，为报社投稿。内容提示：1.记忆力很重要；2.改善记忆力的方法。要点：1.词数80-100；2.字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；3.短文包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtoimproveyourmemoryMemoryisveryimportant.Ifyouwanttohaveabettermemory,hereissomeadviceforyou.First,you’dbetterunderstanditbeforeyouremembersomething.Youcanimagineapictureofitinyourmind.Second,it’simportanttoexerciseeveryday.Whenyouexerciseyourbody,youalsoexerciseyourbrain.Third,liveahealthylife.Youmusthaveabalanceddietandhaveenoughtimetoresteveryday.Ifyouhavethesegoodhabits,yourmemorywillbeimproved.Youwilldobetterinyourstudiesandinyourlife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示中给出的关键信息，以“Howtoimproveyourmemory”写一篇短文。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍记忆力的重要性并引出如何改善记忆力；第二步，分条介绍如何改善记忆力；第三步，给出总结。[亮点词汇]①imagine想象②haveabalanceddiet保持均衡饮食[高分句型]①Ifyouwanttohaveabettermemory,hereissomeadviceforyou.（if引导条件状语从句）②First,you’dbetterunderstanditbeforeyouremembersomething.（before引导时间状语从句）4．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给他写封回信，提出你的建议。短文需要包含以下要点。要求：1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearTom,I’mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourmemory.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourimprovement.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTom,I’mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourmemory.Firstofall,inordertotrainyourbrain,it’sagoodideatodosomenewthingsandchangeyourdailyhabits.Inthisway,youcanmakeyourbrainmoreactiveandcreative.Besides,livingahealthylifestylealsomakessense,whichrequiresabalanceddietandenoughtimeforyourbraintorelaxafterabusyday.What’smore,Isuggestyounotbetoonervousandkeeprelaxed,oryoucan’tfocusonyourstudythenextday.Finally,ifyouhaveanytrouble,pleasetalktoyourfriendsandteachersanytimeyouneed.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourimprovement.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍锻炼大脑的方法；第二步，介绍健康生活的方法；第三步，介绍保持放松的方法并注意适当补充。[亮点词汇]①makessense有道理②abalanceddiet平衡饮食③focus专注[高分句型]①Besides,livingahealthylifestylealsomakessense,whichrequiresabalanceddietandenoughtimeforyourbraintorelaxafterabusyday.（which引导定语从句）②What’smore,Isuggestyounotbetoonervousandkeeprelaxed,oryoucan’tfocusonyourstudythenextday.（suggest后接同位语从句）5．你的朋友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下内容要点，以“Howtoimproveyourmemory”为题，给Tom一些建议。要点：1.在你记忆之前，最好先理解它；2.记的时候可以试着在脑海里形成画面；3.健康的饮食、充足的睡眠和适当的运动对提高记忆力也很有帮助。提示词：想象imagine活跃的active放松的relaxed要求：1.80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。Howtoimproveyourmemory________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtoimproveyourmemoryIfyouwanttohaveabettermemory,hereissomeadviceforyoutoimproveyourmemory.First,you’dbetterunderstanditbeforeyouremembersomething.Youcanimagineapictureofitinyourmind.Second,it’simportanttoexerciseeveryday.Whenyouexerciseyourbody,youalsoexerciseyourbrain.Third,liveahealthylife.Youmusthaveabalanceddietandhaveenoughtimetoresteveryday.Ifyouhavethesegoodhabits,yourmemorywillbeimproved.Youwilldobetterinyourstudiesandinyourlife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：记叙文②时态：一般现在时③提示：题目要求根据提示给汤姆提一些提高记忆力的建议，写作时注意分清条理，不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，表明写作目的。第二步，根据所给要点，依次提出提高记忆力的建议。第三步，最后表达祝愿。[亮点词汇]①improveone’smemory提高某人的记忆力②liveahealthylife过健康的生活③haveabalanceddiet拥有平衡的饮食[高分句型]①First,you’dbetterunderstanditbeforeyouremembersomething.（用hadbetter提出建议）②Second,it’simportanttoexerciseeveryday.（用it作形式主语）③Ifyouhavethesegoodhabits,yourmemorywillbeimproved.（用if引导条件状语从句）6．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信，提出你的建议。短文需包括以下要点。注意：

1.词数：80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearMary,I’mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourmemory.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMary,I’mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourmemory.First,beforeyouremembersomething,you’dbetterspendsometimeunderstandingit.Second,it’sagoodwaytoconnectwhatyouwanttorememberwithwhatyouhaveknown.Itcanhelpyourememberthingsforalongtime.What’smore,youcantrymakingapictureofitinyourmind.Itisveryhelpful.Finally,healthyfood,enoughsleepandexercisearealsoimportantforimprovingyourmemory.Ihopemyadvicewillhelpyou.Andyoucanwritebacktomeifyouhaveanyproblems.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，引出主题；第二步，根据提示内容给出相应的建议；第三步，希望自己的建议能有帮助。[亮点词汇]①what’smore并且②beimportantfor对……重要③hadbetterdosth最好做某事[高分句型]①I’mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourmemory.（疑问词+动词不定式作宾语）②Ihopemyadvicewillhelpyou.（宾语从句）7．假设你是李华，你们班要举行一个关于“如何提高记忆力”的讨论会，请根据下面的内容提示写一篇发言稿。内容提示：1.多锻炼大脑:尝试学一门新的语言或玩一种新的乐器;2.记忆东西时，可反复记忆；3.过健康的生活：均衡饮食，充足睡眠;4.自己补充一条方法。注意：1.词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：乐器instrument

Dearfriends,

Hello,everyone!Ithinkmemoryisveryimportantinourlives.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Dearfriends,Hello,everyone!Ithinkmemoryisveryimportantinourlives.Herearesomepracticalwaystoimproveourmemory.Firstofall,weneedtoexerciseourbrainregularlytokeepitactive.Forexample,wecantrylearninganewlanguageorplayinganewmusicalinstrument.Besides,tobettermemorizesomethinginashorttime,wehadbettermemorizeitforseveraltimes.Inaddition,ifwewantourbraintoworkwell,livingahealthylifeisworthatry.Weshouldhaveabalanceddietandgetenoughsleep.Theyaregoodforourbrain.Lastbutnotleast,weneedtostayrelaxedsothatwecanmemorizethingsmorequickly.Hopefully,myadvicecanbehelpfultoyou.That’sall.Thankyou!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述提高记忆力的方法。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提高记忆力的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。8．假如你是学生李华，想给学校《英语周报》学习与健康栏目稿就如何提高同学们的记忆力问题写一封建议信。要点如下：1.提高记忆力的好处；2.提高记忆力的方法（如锻炼大脑健康饮食充足睡眠等）；3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加节，以使行文连贯。Dearfellowstudents,Memoryplaysanimportantpartinstudying._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Dearfellowstudents,Memoryplaysanimportantpartinstudying.Iwritethislettertoexpressmyideasontheproblemabouthowtoimprovestudents’memory.Ifstudentshaveagoodmemory,wecanstudybetterandbetter.Andbesides,wecanmakethemostofthetimesothatwecanhaveagoodbalancebetweenhobbiesandschoolwork.Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtoimproveourmemory.First,wecanexerciseourbrainsmore.Second,weshouldhaveahealthydiet.Last,wemusthaveenoughsleep.Ifso,allthestudentscandowellinthesubjects.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourimprovement.Yours,LiHua【详解】题干解读：题目要求给学校《英语周报》写一封建议信；要求包含所有要点提示。写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式：第一段：介绍提高记忆力的好处；第二段：介绍提高记忆力的方法；第三段：表达祝愿。9．众所周知，记忆力是一个人学习、生活、工作的必备能力。学校英语俱乐部为帮助大家提高记忆力，将举办“Howtoimproveourmemory？”的征文比赛，请你根据征文要点和写作要求写一篇英语短文参赛。写作要点：1.Doyouhaveagoodmemory?2.Whydoyouthinkso?3.Haveyouevertriedanygoodwaystoimproveyourmemory?How?要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数80-120，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Memoryisveryimportantinourlife.HereI’dliketosharesomethingaboutmymemory.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

HowtoImproveOurMemory？

Memoryisveryimportantinourlife.HereI’dliketosharesomethingaboutmymemory.

Ihaveagoodmemory.IcanremembernewwordsandknowledgeeasilyeverydaybecauseIhavegoodlivingandstudyinghabits.Ikeephealthyandstudycarefully.

Ihavetriedsomeeasywaystoimprovemymemory.First,Irepeatthingsmanytimestorememberthemwell.Second,Isleepwelleverynighttomakemybrainactive.Third,Ioftendosportstokeepfit.Goodhealthhelpsmehaveabettermemory.

Ibelieveifwekeeppracticing,ourmemorycangetbetterstepbystep.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：征文说明文，以一般现在时为主，描述个人情况及日常习惯明确要点：是否拥有良好记忆力以及原因、列举实用的记忆力提升方法确定人称：第一人称（I/my）注意事项：不出现真实人名和地名，词数控制在80-1