四级作文常见错误分析

四级作文常见错误分析1.标题的书写2.连接词的使用3.比较级的使用4.谓语动词与非谓语动词5.标点符号6.其他1.标题的书写一般的原则是，实词的首字母大写。e.g.(The)ImpactofMobilePhonesonPeople’sLifeAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofMobilePhonesAboutMobilePhones2.连接词的使用Trytodetectmistakesanderrorsinthefollowingsentences:1)Thoughalmosteveryoneusesiteveryday,butdifferentpeopleholddifferentopinions.2)Inmyopinion,everythinghastwosides.Buttomobilephone,Ipreferitsgoodside.3)But,howdoesitinfluenceonourdailylife?4)Ononehand,…onotherhand,…5)Cellphoneshavebroughtpeoplealotofbenefits,butthemostimportantisthattheyareconvenient.6)…Otherwise,thesealsobringmoreandmoredebatesfor…7)Eventhough,severalproblemscannotbeignoredatthesametime.3.比较级的使用e.g.Sotheyconsiderthatmobilephonehasmadetheirlivesmoreeasierandmorehappier.

…weshouldusemobilephonesaslessaspossible4.动词的使用1)Therearealsosomeoneholdsuchopinionsthatmobilephonehasmadetheenvironmentweliveinmoreandmorenoisy.2)Itsaysthateverythinghasitstwosides.3)Inmyopinion,themobilephonewillpopularizethesocietysoonerorlater.4)Whymobilephonesopopularinoursociety?5)Cellphonesmaynotgoodforourhealth.6)Wemustaffordmuchtimeandmoneyonit.7)Doesmobilephonereallyusefulandhelpful?8)Ifwewerestuckwithdanger,wecanuseitpressingrescuenumber.9)High-technologicalproducts,suchasTVset,computer,MP4,mobilephoneandsoon.10)…therecomestomanydiscussionupontheuseofamobilephone.11)What’sworse,thesuddenlyringingofamobilephonesduringameetingreallydisturbsothers.12)Giventhesideeffectsthemobilephonebringingtous,weshouldusethemobilephonesproperly.13.Theythinkcellphonedoesn’tlikeitseemtobe.14)Itisreallyusefuladdinghappinesstopeople’slives.15)Atthesametime,mobilephonesoftencanfunctionasmp3sorcameras,whichmakesourlifemorecolorful.5.标点符号既不能写一个字打一点，也不能一逗到底。句号后要注意下一句首字母大写，英语中的逗号使用须十分慎重。6.其他1)like2)agree3)what’smorewhat’sworse4)becausebecauseofe.g.…justbecausetheconvenienceitbringtopeople5)absent-mindeddouble-edged6)Nomatte