Unit 1 The Changing World（单元同步写作讲义）（原卷版）

Unit1TheChangingWorld单元同步写作讲义本单元教材写作情境为“生活中的变化”,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群,涉及子主题“家乡和社会的变迁,历史的发展,对未来的畅想”。该单元常见的写作任务是描述个人生活、家乡、校园等方面的今昔变化,阐述这些变化带来的感受与思考。体裁多为记叙文或说明文。文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。词汇积累核心词汇development发展transportation交通environment环境condition条件progress进步pollution污染community社区convenient便利的wide宽阔的comfortable舒适的modern现代化的polluted受污染的核心短语takeplace发生inthepast在过去inrecentyears近年来livingconditions生活条件publictransport公共交通cleanup清理makegreatprogress取得巨大进步句型积累【开头型】1.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepasttenyears.过去十年间，我的家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化。2.Myhometownisnolongerthesmallvillagethatitusedtobe.我的家乡已不再是过去的那个小村庄了。3.Ourhometownhaschangedanddevelopedquicklyinrecentyears.我们的家乡近年来发生了迅速的变化4.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceintheworldaroundus.我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。5.Ourworldischangingfasterthaneverbefore.我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。6.Ifwecomparethepastwiththepresent,wecanseemanydifferences.对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。7.Timesarechangingandourlifehaschangedalot.时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。8.Withtimegoingby,theworldhaschangedgreatly.随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。【中间句】1.Thereusedtobenarrowdirtroadsandshabbylowhouseseverywhere.过去到处都是狭窄的土路和破旧的低矮房屋。2.Wehavebuiltwideasphaltroadsandmanytallapartmentbuildingssince2016.自2016年以来，我们已修建了宽阔的沥青道路及众多高层公寓楼。3.Peopleusedtowalkorrideoldbikestogoout,butmostfamilieshaveownedprivatecarsnow.过去人们出行多步行或骑旧自行车，但如今大多数家庭都拥有私家车。4.Thereusedtobeclearriversandfreshairaroundourcommunity.我们社区周围曾经有清澈的河流和清新的空气。5.Weshouldtakesmalldailyactionstoprotectourbeautifulhometown.我们应该每天采取一些小行动来保护我们美丽的家乡。6.Peopleusedtogooutonfootorbybike.人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。7.Nowmorepeoplechoosecarsandhigh-speedtrainstotravel.如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。8.Inthepast,peoplecommunicatedbyletters.过去人们靠书信交流。9.Nowadayswechatonlineanytimeandanywhere.如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。10.Lifewassimplebuthardmanyyearsago.多年前生活简单却很艰苦。11.Atpresent,ourlifeismuchmorecomfortableandconvenient.现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。12.Technologymakesourdailylifemucheasier.科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。13.Ourhometownlooksquitedifferentfromwhatitwasbefore.我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。14.People’slifestylehaschangedcompletelyovertheyears.这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。15.Therapiddevelopmentbringsusbothadvantagesandnewchallenges.快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。【结尾句】1.Itakegreatprideineverywonderfulchangethathasappearedaroundus.我对周围发生的每一个美好变化都感到无比自豪。2.Ifirmlybelievemyhometownwillbecomecleanerandmorelivelyinthecomingyears.我坚信，在未来几年里，我的家乡将会变得更加整洁、更加充满活力。3.Let’sworktogethertomakeourchanginghometowncleanerthanever.让我们共同努力，把不断变化的家乡建设得比以往更加清洁。4.I’mproudofthegreatchangesinourworld.我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。5.Ibelieveourworldwillbecomeevenbetterinthefuture.我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。6.Weshouldacceptchangesandkeeplearningallthetime.我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。7.Changesmakeourlifecolorfulandmeaningful.变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。8.Astheworldchanges,wealsoneedtoimproveourselves.世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。【名言积累】1.Bethechangethatyouwishtoseeintheworld.欲变世界,先变自身。2.Changeyourthoughtsandyouchangeyourworld.改变想法,你就能改变世界。3.Changeistheopportunitytocreateabetterfuture.改变是创造更美好未来的契机。佳句仿写1.1.NowthatIamolder,mylifeisdifferentfromwhenIwasinprimaryschool.【教材SectionB3a】仿写：现在我们的社会发展很快,我的日常生活已经变得很不一样了。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.在过去的几年里,我的日常生活发生了巨大的变化。翻译：___________________________________________________________3..Forexample,myprimaryschoolwasnearmyhome…【教材SectionB3a】仿写：例如,过去我常常乘公共汽车上学。__________________________________________________________________________________________4.Thismakesmydailytripfastandcomfortable.（用比较级升格,突出对比）_________________________________________________________________5.如今,这片土地上绿树成荫,河流也清澈见底。【教材SectionB2c】翻译：___________________________________________________________6.Shoppingismucheasiernow.（用besides升格,衔接上下文）_________________________________________________________________7.Ithasimprovedlocallives.【教材SectionA2c】仿写：所有这些变化极大地改善了我的日常生活。_________________________________________________________________8.他们比以前富裕多了,也快乐多了。【教材SectionA4c】翻译：__________________________________________________（Unit（Unit1SectionB3d）审题指导文体：记叙文2.人称：第一人称3.时态：一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时教材写作品读①Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmylifesinceprimaryschool.Myneighbourhoodhaschangedquitealot.②Withsupportfromthegovernment,wehaveanewsportspark.Mygrandmadoessquaredancingthere.AndmylittlebrotherplayshappilyandIcanexercisethere.③Asaresult,ourfreetimeactivitiesbecomericher.Myschoollifeismuchbetternow.We④usedtohavelotsofhomeworkandtests.Now,withthe“doublereduction”policy,wehavemoretimeforsportsandhobbiesafterclass.Allstudents⑤benefitfromthisgreatchange.Mywayofstudyinghaschangedalottoo.Weusesmartwhiteboardsanddigitaltoolsinclass.Itisveryconvenienttolearn,andwelearn⑥withease.⑦Althoughmanythingshavechanged,onethinghasstayedthesame.Istillhavewarmlovefrommyfamily,andtheyalwaysgivemestrengthinmyheart.教材原句①【SectionA4c】Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplace.（takeplace发生）②【SectionB2c】Withsupportfromthegovernment,WangShanghailedagroupof369people…（withsupportfrom…在……的支持下）③【SectionA4c】Asaresult,thelivesoflocalpeopleimproved.（asaresult作结果状语）④【SectionA2d】Theareausedtobecoveredwithsand.（usedto对比过去的动作或状态）⑤【SectionB1b】LocalKenyanshavebenefitedalotfromthenewrailway.（benefitfrom从……中获益）⑥【SectionB1b】Iamableto…makebusinessdealswithease.（withease轻而易举地）⑦【SectionB1b】AlthoughChinaandKenyaarefaraway…（although引导让步状语从句）生活中处处都有变化。请你以“ChangesinMyDailyLife”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,描述2-3个你生活中发生的具体变化（比如出行、环境、购物、学习方式等）,并谈谈这些变化给你带来的感受。【基础版】ChangesinMyDailyLifeNowthatoursocietyisdevelopingfast,mydailylifeisnotthesameasbefore.Forexample,Iusedtotakethebustoschool.Itoftentookmealongtimetogetthere.Nowourcityhasanewsubway.Ittakesmeonly15minutestogotoschool.It’sfasternow.Mylivingenvironmenthasalsoimproved.Someplacesnearmyhomeweresandybefore.Butnowtherearemanytreesandflowersthere.Besides,shoppingiseasiernow.Wehavefreshfruitandvegetablesallyear.Wecanalsobuythingsonline.It’sconvenient.Thesechangesmakemylifebetter.Ifeelluckytoliveinsuchagoodtime.【提升版】ChangesinMyDailyLifeNowthatoursocietyisdevelopingfast,mydailylifehasbecomequitedifferent.Forexample,Iusedtotakethebustoschool.Thetripoftentookalongtimebecauseofheavytraffic.Nowourcityhasanewsubway.Itcutsmytraveltimefrom40minutestojust15minutes.Thismakesmydailytripmuchfasterandmorecomfortable.Mylivingenvironmenthasalsoimproved.Inthepast,someareasnearmyhomeweresandy.Butwithgreeningefforts,nowthelandiscoveredwithgreentreesandbeautifulflowers.Besides,shoppingismucheasiernow.High-techgreenhousesnowprovidefreshfruitandvegetablesallyear.Wecanalsobuydifferentproductsonline.Howconvenientitis!Allthesechangeshavegreatlyimprovedmydailylife.Ifeelluckytoliveinsuchawonderfultime.总体分析基础版✅优点：结构清晰，三段式逻辑（出行→环境→购物→总结），要点齐全；词汇简单、句式简短，几乎没有复杂语法，通俗易懂，适合初中基础薄弱学生；紧扣主题，无偏题，观点明确，语法错误少。❌不足：句式单一，大量简单句堆砌，缺少细节，描写干瘪；表达重复：多次使用now；描述比较笼统，缺少对比数据；缺少衔接升级、情感渲染，语言平淡，很难拿到高分。提升版✅亮点：细节扩充：增加堵车原因、通勤时长对比（40分钟缩短至15分钟）、绿化工程、高科技大棚等细节，内容更充实；句式丰富：并列句、原因状语、感叹句交替使用，摆脱清一色简单句；用词升级，替换简单词汇；逻辑衔接更自然；对比感更强，突出“变化”这一核心主题；结尾升华更有力度。二、亮点词汇&短语对比基础版普通表达提升版升级替换isnotthesameasbeforehasbecomequitedifferentItoftentookmealongtimeThetripoftentookalongtimebecauseofheavytraffic（增加原因）It’sfasternowmuchfasterandmorecomfortable（增加感受）therearemanytreesandflowersthelandiscoveredwithgreentreesandbeautifulflowersshoppingiseasiernowshoppingismucheasiernowThesechangesmakemylifebetterAllthesechangeshavegreatlyimprovedmydailylifesuchagoodtimesuchawonderfultime提升版优化手法增加原因状语原：Iusedtotakethebustoschool.Itoftentookmealongtime.改：Iusedtotakethebustoschool.Thetripoftentookalongtimebecauseofheavytraffic.巧用数据对比，强化“变化”Itcutsmytraveltimefrom40minutestojust15minutes.加入人文背景，丰富内容Butwithgreeningefforts,nowthelandiscoveredwithgreentreesandbeautifulflowers.陈述句改为感叹句，增强情感It’sconvenient.→Howconvenientitis!时态升级：一般现在时→现在完成时（加分语法）Thesechangesmakemylifebetter.→Allthesechangeshavegreatlyimprovedmydailylife.1（25-26九年级上·河南驻马店·期中）“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护。假设你是阳光中学的李华,你校英语俱乐部正以“TheGreatChangesinMyHometown”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动，介绍家乡的环境变化，并描绘自己对美好未来的期待。提示：要求：(1)短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；(3)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.Myhometownhaschangedgreatlytheseyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是中学生李华，你校将举办“科技改变生活”征文活动，请你根据以下表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈AI产品对青少年学习和生活的影响，词数80词左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。I’mLiHuafromGrade9.Iwantto______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．改革开放以来，中国已飞速发展，但同时也存在一些问题，假如你是新时代的中学生Leo，请你根据以下图表的提示写一封信给市长，简要介绍中国的发展变化，分析当前存在的社会问题，并提出你的建议。ChangesinChinaAmazingachievementmodern,richer,convenientProblemswefacetrafficenvironmentjobopportunitiesForabetterfuturetakemeasures,offer,publictransportationwestudents…要求：1.内容完整，语句通顺，结构清晰；2.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。DearMayor,I’mLeo,amiddleschoolstudent.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“TheChangesinMyHometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。TheChangesinMyHometownInrecentyears,myhometownhasgreatchanges.Nowletmesharesomewithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．随着社会的快速发展，我们的生活发生着巨大的变化，尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动等方面。John是你的一位美国朋友，他是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”，尤其对近些年来中国的变化非常感兴趣。请你以“TheGreatChangesHaveTakenPlaceAroundMe”为题，写一篇短文向他详细介绍这些变化。Feeling…注意事项：（1）必须包含所有图中提示信息，可适当发挥，词数80左右；（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；（3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。TheGreatChangesHaveTakenPlaceAroundme___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．“双减”政策实施后，同学们的课余活动有了变化。某英文网站正面向全市中学生开展以“ChangingFree-timeActivities”为主题的征文活动，请用所给提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述所发生的变化及你的感受。Inthepast:domyhomework;notimeforfree-timeactivities;attendmanytrainingcourses;Now:develophobbies;dothehousework;dosomevolunteerwork;...Benefits(益处):relax;learnknowledgeandskills;...Youropinions:注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。ChangingFree-timeActivities______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你是Tom，请根据下表的提示，写一封信给你的笔友Mary，谈谈福州的变化。概况历史悠久，人口800多万。过去1.空气清新，鸟语花香；2.生活清贫，道路狭窄。现在1.工厂多，为许多年轻人提供了工作机会；2.超市多，购物方便；3.公共交通发达。现存问题……（至少一点）建议……（至少一点）要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，可适当发挥；（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（4）不得使用真实姓名和校名。DearMary,IhavebeeninFuzhoufortenyears.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutit.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________