Unit 5 Revealing nature Writing同步练习-2022-2023学年高中英语外研版2019选择性必修第一册

外研版（2019）选择性必修第一册Unit5RevealingnatureWriting以观察某种植物的特性或者生长过程为主题写一篇日记。注意：1.词数80左右；2.注意日记写作格式。提示：1.mimosa含羞草 2.thorn刺（名词）3.stab刺（动词） 4.petiole叶柄 步骤一：审题构思——分析透彻是前提一、审题1.确定体裁：本文为____________；2.确定人称：本文的主要人称为____________；3.确定时态：以____________为主。二、构思第一段：和妈妈去花店买了含羞草。第二段：回到家仔细观察含羞草。步骤二：精挑细选——核心词汇想周全1.____________给……留下深刻的印象2.notice注意到3.____________几十，许多4.tiny极小的5.stem茎6.connect连接7.____________树枝8.hang垂下步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现1.今天是国庆节。（主系表结构）________________________________________________________________________2.我妈妈带我去了一家花店。（主谓宾结构）________________________________________________________________________3.在花店我欣赏了各种各样的花草。（主谓宾结构）________________________________________________________________________4.在这些花草当中，给我印象最深的一种是含羞草。（定语从句）________________________________________________________________________5.在那些高大的绿植中，它似乎很小。（主系表结构）________________________________________________________________________6.在我们离开之前，我请求我妈妈买了含羞草。（asksb.todosth.）________________________________________________________________________7.当我们到家时，我注意到含羞草的叶子是绿色的，由很多细小的叶子组成。（状语从句，宾语从句）________________________________________________________________________8.中间有一根茎连接着叶子。（therebe句型）________________________________________________________________________9.它的每一根枝都有个小刺。（主谓宾结构）________________________________________________________________________10.如果我们不小心碰到它，我们的手就会被刺到流血。（if结构）________________________________________________________________________11.含羞草就像害羞的小女孩。（主系表结构）________________________________________________________________________12.我轻轻地抚摸它的叶子，叶子沿着叶柄收拢起来了。（and连接两个简单句）________________________________________________________________________13.同时它的叶子变得很薄，枝干垂下枝头，仿佛它们害怕见到任何人。（and连接的并列复合句）________________________________________________________________________14.这很有趣！（主系表结构）________________________________________________________________________步骤四：斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点将2、3句合并为复合句________________________________________________________________________步骤五：连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

参考答案步骤一应用文，第一人称,一般现在时、一般过去时步骤二1.impress 3.dozensof 7.branch步骤三1.TodayisNationalDay.2.Mymothertookmetoaflowershop.3.IntheflowershopIenjoyedallkindsofplants.4.Amongtheplants，theonethatimpressedmemostwasthemimosa.5.Itseemedverysmallamongthetallgreenplants.6.Beforeweleft，Iaskedmymothertobuythemimosa.7.Whenwegothome，Inoticedthattheleavesofmimosaaregreenandtheyaremadeupofdozensoftinyleaves.8.Thereisastemconnectingtheleavesinthemiddle.9.Eachofitsbrancheshasasmallthorn.10.Ifweaccidentallytouchit，ourhandswillbestabbedtobleeding.11.Themimosaislikeashylittlegirl.12.Itoucheditsleavesgently，andtheleavesclosedupalongthepetiole.13.Atthesametimeitsleavesbecameverythin，anditsbrancheshungdowntheirheadsasiftheywereafraidtoseeanyone.14.Thisisfun!步骤四Mymothertookmetoaflowershop，whereIenjoyedallkindsofplants.步骤五October1stFriday FineTodayisNationalDay.Mymothertookmetoaflowershop，whereIenjoyedallkindsofplants.Amongtheplants，theonethatimpressedmemostwasthemimosa.Itseemedverysmallamongthetallgreenplants，andbeforeweleft，Iaskedmymothertobuythemimosa.Whenwegothome，Inoticedthattheleavesofthemimosaaregreenandtheyaremadeupofdozensoftinyleaves.Thereisastemconnectingtheleavesinthemiddle.Eachofitsbrancheshasasmallthorn.Ifweaccidentallytouchit，ourhandswillbestabbedtobleeding.Themimosaislikeashylittlegirl.I