外研版英语必修第一册 第二部分　第1周　应用文写作 建议信 教师用书

写作周周练第二部分写作周练提能第1周应用文写作建议信建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，一定要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力，并注意礼貌当先。具体写作结构如下：1．开头句(1)Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/offeryousomeadviceon/abouthowto.../expressmyviewsconcerning...我写信就如何……给你一些建议/忠告/表达我关于……的看法。(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceon/about...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。(3)I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...我很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。(4)Forsomefurtherimprovement，I’dliketosharethefollowingsuggestions.为了进一步改进，我想分享以下建议。(5)Herearesometips/suggestionstohelpyou.以下是几条能帮到你的建议。(6)Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowthefollowingadvice/theadvicebelow.如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。(7)Withregardtotheproblemyoumentionedinyourlastletter，mysuggestionsareasfollows.关于你上一封信中提到的问题，我的建议如下。2．中间句(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...我认为对你来说最适合的……是……(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建议……(3)You’dbetter.../It’sbestto...你最好……/最好是……(4)AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion/Asforme/Frommypointofview，itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。(5)Foronething...；foranother...一方面……；另一方面……(6)IfIwereyou，Iwould...如果我是你，我会……(7)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。(8)Itisadvisableto...……是可取的。(9)Itwouldbebetterifyoucould...如果你能……就更好了。3．结尾句(1)Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration/takemyadviceseriously.我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。(2)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。(3)Iwillbemorethanhappy/delightedtoseeyourimprovementsinthisregard.若能看到你在这一方面取得进步，我将不胜欣喜。(4)Idohopemysuggestionswillbeadoptedandyour...willbecomeevenmore...我真的希望我的建议能被采纳，你的……会变得更加……对点练习根据汉语提示补全句子1．Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/offeryousomeadvice(给你一些建议)onhowtocallonmorepeopletoparticipateinmarineprotection.2．YouhaveaskedformyadviceonhowtoprotecttraditionalculturalheritagewithdigitaltechnologyandIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestions(尽力提出一些有用的建议)here.3．Withregardtotheproblemyoumentionedinyourlastletter(关于你在上一封信中提到的问题)abouthowtosolveprivacyrisksbroughtbytechnologicaldevelopment，mysuggestionsareasfollows(我的建议如下)．4．AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion/Asforme/Frommypointofview(在我看来)，itwouldbewisetolaunchcommunitysportsactivitiesregularlytoencouragepeopletotakephysicalexercise.5．Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration/takemyadviceseriously(认真考虑我的建议)onpreventingoverfishingincoastalareasandmakesomechanges.6．Iwillbemorethanhappy/delighted(我将非常高兴)toseetechnologicaldevelopmentplayagreaterroleinenvironmentalgovernanceinthisregard.(2024·北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的AsiaToday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：1．建议投稿内容；2．就以上建议简要说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。范文赏读DearJim，Iamgladtolearnthatyouarescheduledto[1]contributetotheAsiaTodaycolumnofyourschoolnewspaperonthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople’sRepublicofChina.Withregardtothesubjectyoumentionedinyourletter，mysuggestionsareasfollows.(点明写信目的)Firstly，IwouldliketosuggestthatyoufocusonChina’s[2]povertyalleviationachievement.Thisisbecauseit’sagreataccomplishmentthathas[3]liftedhundredsofmillionsofpeopleoutofpoverty，settingagoodexamplefortheworld.Secondly，itwouldbebetterifyoucouldintroduceChina’shigh-speedraildevelopment.AsfarasIamconcerned，[4]notonlydoesitshowChina’sadvancedtechnologybutitalso[5]bringsgreatconveniencetopeople’slives.Finally，youcanmentionChina’sachievementsin[6]spaceexploration，liketheTianwen-1mission，whichreflectsChina’spowerfulscientificstrength.(提出建议并说明理由)Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoreadingyourarticle！(希望采纳建议并表达愿望)Yours，LiHua亮词美句[1]为……投稿[2]扶贫成就[3]让数亿人摆脱了贫困[4]notonly...位于句首的倒装句[5]给……带去极大的便利[6]太空探索(2025·浙江台州一模)你所在的国际学校拟在教室门口安装一款多功能智慧屏，现向学生征集建议。假定你是李华，请你给负责人MrHall写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1．建议开发的功能；2．说明理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearMrHall，I’mLiHuafromClass3，Grade3.Yourssincerely，LiHua参考范文DearMrHall，I’mLiHuafromClass3，Grade3.Iamreallyexcitedabouttheupcominginstallationofamultifunctionalsmartscreenattheentrancetoourclassroomandwouldliketoshareacoupleofsuggestions.Firstly，aninteractivemessageboardwouldbeavaluableaddition.Itwillstreamlinecommunicationbyallowingustopostimportantannouncementsandreminders，thusfosteringamoreconnectedandengagedcommunity.Secondly，it’sbettertoupdatethedailymenusofthestudentcanteenwithclearingredientlabelsandnutritionaldetails，whichwouldempowerustomakemoreinformedandhealthierdietarychoices.Finally，itisadvisabletoaddahomew