高中英语读后续写高分开头技巧

高中英语读后续写高分开头技巧高分开头仿写句式一无灵主语开头(没有生命的名词作主语)【示例】久别重逢让这对夫妻很开心。Thereunionafterlongseparationbroughtgreatdelighttothecouple.[仿写1]Hefeltabitsadinsidehim.翻译：他的内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。改写：Aripple/flush/wave/surgeofsadnesswelledupinsidehim.[仿写2]Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shecouldn'tsayaword.翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。改写：Wordsfailedher,withtearsstreamingdownherface.[仿写3]Suddenlyshefeltveryexcitedwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.翻译：突然她看到一个熟悉的身影，内心涌起一阵兴奋。改写：Suddenlyawaveofexcitementseized/tookholdof/sweptoverherwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.[仿写4]Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Inoticedaflashofmovement.翻译：我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。一瞬间的动作引起了我的注意。改写：Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.[仿写5]WhenthehostannouncedthatIwonthefirstprize,Ifeltveryexcited.翻译：当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心怦怦跳。改写：WhenthehostannouncedthatIwonthefirstprize,myheartwasthumping/poundingwithexcitement．仿写句式二倒装句开头【示例】只有这样你才能学好英语。OnlyinthiswaycanyoulearnEnglishwell.[仿写1]Ayoungmansatbythelakewithabookinhishand.翻译：一位年轻的男士坐在湖边，手里拿着一本书。改写：Bythelakesatayoungmanwithabookinhishand.[仿写2]Whentheygothome,theymadealotofpopcornandputitinthespecialbags.翻译：他们一回到家就做了很多爆米花，并将其放在特殊的袋子里。改写：Hardlyhadtheygothomewhentheymadealotofpopcornandputitinthespecialbags.[仿写3]Theirmotherneverexpectedherdaytostartwithsuchawarmgift.翻译：他们的母亲绝对不会想到她的一天是以这样的暖心礼物开始的。改写：Undernocircumstancesdidtheirmotherexpectherdaytostartwithsuchawarmgift.[仿写4]Jennawassoashamedthatsheshedguiltytearswithherheaddrooping.翻译：詹娜羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。改写：SoashamedwasJennathatsheshedguiltytearswithherheaddrooping.[仿写5]Iwillneverforgetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.翻译：我永远不会忘记他们被给予食物时看着我的样子。改写：NeverwillIforgetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.仿写句式三对话或独白开头【示例】“太可怕了，”这个年轻人用颤抖的声音回答道。“Howterribleitis，”theyoungmanansweredinatremblingvoice.[仿写1]RachelcalledtoseewhogottherefirstasshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。改写：“Let'sseewhogetstherefirst！”Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.[仿写2]Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.PaulshoutedatMacandtoldhimtogetintothecar.翻译：汽车突然停在他面前。“上车！”保罗对马克喊道。改写：Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.“Getintothecar，”PaulshoutedatMac.[仿写3]Theirfathertoldthemnottopanicandhandedeachofthemawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessupquickly.翻译：“别慌！”父亲告诉他们并递给每人一块湿毛巾，帮他们迅速收拾残局。改写：“Don'tpanic！”theirfathertoldthemandhandedeachofthemawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessupquickly.[仿写4]Thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptthankinghertwins.翻译：“谢谢你们，我的宝贝们，”这位世界上最幸福的妈妈不停地重复着这句话。改写：“Thankyou,mydears，”thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptrepeatingthesewords.[仿写5]Theyshoutedenthusiasticallyandcheeredforhim.翻译：他们都热情地叫喊着，“加油！你能做到！我们为你自豪！”改写：“Comeon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou！”theyshoutedenthusiastically.仿写句式四介词短语开头【示例】孩子们高兴地找到了出路。Indelight,childrenfoundtheirwayout.[仿写1]Theykepttheireyesopentoreadtheresultssurprisingly.翻译：他们惊讶地睁大眼睛查看结果。改写：Insurprise,theykepttheireyesopentoreadtheresults.[仿写2]Themandidn'tsayawordandpickedJimupoffthemotorbike.翻译：那个男人一言不发地把吉姆从摩托车上扶下来。改写：Withoutsayingaword,themanpickedJimupoffthemotorbike.[仿写3]Soonthekitchenwasfilledwithsweetsmell.翻译：刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。改写：Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.[仿写4]Wewererelievedthattheysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmysmile.翻译：让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。改写：Toourrelief,theysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmysmile.[仿写5]ItiswithyourrecognitionandguidancethatIwrotethearticlewell.翻译：没有你的认可和指导，我就不会写好这篇文章。改写：Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn'thavewrittenthisarticlewell.仿写句式五独立主格结构开头【示例】她的衬衫被钉子钩住了，她动弹不得。Hershirtcaughtonanail,shecouldnotmove.[仿写1]Ashisfriendswillcometonight,heisbusypreparingthedinner.翻译：他的朋友今晚要来，他正忙着准备晚餐。改写：Hisfriendstocometonight,heisbusypreparingthedinner.[仿写2]Astherewasnobus,wehadtowalkhome.翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。改写：Therebeingnobus,wehadtowalkhome.[仿写3]Ifweatherpermits,weshallgothereonfoot.翻译：如果天气允许，我们将步行去那里。改写：Weatherpermitting,weshallgothereonfoot.[仿写4]SoonBernardreturnedwithanemptybasketandsomecoinswereinhishand.翻译：伯纳德很快带着空篮子回来了，手里拿着一些硬币。改写：Coinsinhand,Bernardsoonreturnedwithanemptybasket.[仿写5]Wheneverythingwassettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.翻译：一切安排妥当，父亲离开厨房，答应他们会保密。改写：Everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.仿写句式六形容词开头【示例】又累又饿，安妮跪了下来。Tiredandhungry,Annekneltdown.[仿写1]Samwascurioustoknowwhoshewas,sohetiptoedintotheroom.翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此他踮着脚走进了屋子里。改写：Curioustoknowwhoshewas,Samtiptoedintotheroom.[仿写2]Bobwasunabletosayawordandwasfrozenbecauseofthehorriblescene.翻译：那可怕的场面让鲍勃一句话也说不出来，他惊呆了。改写：Unabletosayaword,Bobwasfrozenbecauseofthehorriblescene.[仿写3]Thoughshewasweak,Jennystruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.翻译：尽管很虚弱，但珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。改写：Weakthough/asshewas,Jennystruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.[仿写4]Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AsIwasafraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.翻译：突然一只小兔子从我的马匹前跳出来。由于担心会伤到这只可爱的小动物，我不由自主地大喊一声让马停下来。改写：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.[仿写5]Asshewasspeechlessandhappy,Mumheldthetwinstightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.翻译：妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。改写：Speechlessandhappy,Mumheldthetwinstightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.仿写句式七副词开头【示例】悄悄地，他一句话没说离开了。Quietly,heleftwithoutsayingaword.[仿写1]Arthurskippedupthestreetjoyfully.翻译：亚瑟高兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。改写：Joyfully,Arthurskippedupthestreet.[仿写2]Soontheforestbecameverydark.翻译：黑暗立刻笼罩了整个森林。改写：Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.[仿写3]Aslongasweworkhard,wecancertainlyovercomethedifficultiesweface.翻译：当然，只要我们努力，我们就能克服我们面临的困难。改写：Certainly,wecanovercomethedifficultieswefaceaslongasweworkhard.[仿写4]Itisapparentthatheisoneoftheseextremesportsnuts.翻译：很显然他是极限运动的铁杆爱好者。改写：Apparently,heisoneoftheseextremesportsnuts.[仿写5]IproudlytookoutmyownmoneyandhandedittoDad.翻译：我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。改写：Proudly,ItookoutmyownmoneyandhandedittoDad.仿写句式八现在分词开头【示例】好奇地四处闲逛后，吉姆溜进了厨房。Wanderingaroundwithcuriosity,Jimslippedintothekitchen.[仿写1]Heslowlywalkedacrossthegrassland,aimedatthelionandshot.翻译：他慢慢地走过草地，把枪对准了狮子后射击了。改写：Slowlywalkingacrossthegrassland,heaimedatthelionandshot.[仿写2]Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.ThoughJanefeltdisappointed,shehadtostayaloneforanothernight.翻译：但是再也没有直升机飞来，天又黑了。简感到很失望，不得不一个人再待一个晚上。改写：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Feelingdisappointed,Janehadtostayaloneforanothernight.[仿写3]ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Asshefeltrefreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.翻译：简醒来的时候天已经亮了。她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪行走，寻找出去的路。改写：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Feelingrefreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.[仿写4]Afterlookingatthewell‑preparedbreakfast,thethreeexchangedanunderstandingsmile.翻译：看着备好的早餐，三人会意地笑了。改写：Lookingatthewell‑preparedbreakfast,thethreeexchangedanunderstandingsmile.[仿写5]Heheldmyhandsandsaid,“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”翻译：他握着我的手说，“祝贺你！你是一位优秀的作家，要一直写下去！”改写：Holdingmyhands,hesaid,“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”仿写句式九过去分词开头【示例】这篇文章写得很匆忙，错误百出。Writteninahurry,theessaywasfullofmanymistakes.[仿写1]Ashewassurroundedbyhisgrandchildren,theoldmanfeltjoyful.翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。改写：Surroundedbyhisgrandchildren,theoldmanfeltjoyful.[仿写2]Thegirlwaslostinthought,soshedidn'tnoticetheapproachingdanger.翻译：那个女孩陷入沉思，因此没有注意到危险正在靠近。改写：Lostinthought,thegirldidn'tnoticetheapproachingdanger.[仿写3]Ashewastornbysorrowandcompassion,Franklinstoodsilently,weighingwhattosay.翻译：富兰克林默默地站着，悲伤和同情让他心碎，他斟酌着该说些什么。改写：Tornbysorrowandcompassion,Franklinstoodsilently,weighingwhattosay.[仿写4]Fatherwasshockedbytheunexpectedscene,andhewasrootedonthefloor,staringatthescenewitheyebrowsfrowning.翻译：被这突如其来的场景震惊，父亲愣在