整合句子的方法

1、基础写作,高考作文, 特别是基础写作, 提供的信息点多, 但句数有限,如何整合信息使之成为5句话作文？,我们判断一个句子主要看其是否有谓语动词和其结构是否完整。一个句子只要求有一个谓语动词(要注意动词的时态和语态）。 She went to work hurriedly and left her son playing alone. She went to work hurriedly , leaving her son playing alone. When she went to work hurriedly, she left her son playing alone. The wom

2、an who went to work hurriedly left her son playing alone. There is a fact that she often went to work hurriedly and left her son playing alone. I dont understand why she often went to work hurriedly and left her son playing alone,There is a piece of interesting news that on a sunny morning 2 years a

3、go, an 8-yearold Amercian boy Tom , who didnt have a concept of love, fell in love with a Chinese girl with long hair at the school gate and expressed his affection to her without hesitation, surprising all the people around.,信息整合四招,1. 使用介词短语或补语 Prepositional Phrases 2. 使用非谓语动词。 nonfinite verbs 3. 使

4、用连词。 Conjunctions 4. 使用主从复合句。 subordinative compound,用介词短语合并句子有两种情况我们常常可以用到：(1)介词短语作定语, (2)介词短语作状语。,典型例题 用介词短语将下列句子合并成 一句。 (1) Waste water is making the river worse and worse. (2) The waste water is from a factory. 合并： Waste water (from the factory )is making the river worse and worse.,课堂练习用介词短语合并每一

5、组句子 (1)Xiaxi Town is not big but beautiful. (2)It has an area of about 8 square kilometers.,Xiaxi Town, with an area of about 8 square kilometers, is not big but beautiful.,我的父亲，一个意志坚强的七十来岁的老人，总是鼓励我遇到困难不要灰心。 My father,a strong-willed man over 70 years old,always encourages me not to lose heart befor

6、e difficulty. My father, a seventy-year-old man with a strong will, always encourages me not to lose heart before difficulty.,在写作中, 正确使用非谓语动词, 无疑为文章增色不少。非谓语动词包括不定式、现在分词和过去分词。使用时应注意以下几点：,典型例题 用非谓语动词将以下各组 句子分别合成一句话。 1. (1)He worked hard at high school. (2) He wanted to enter a good university. 用不定式合并：

7、,He worked hard at high school to enter a good unversity.,2. (1) I dont like the man. (2) The man is wearing a pair of dark glasses. 用现在分词合并： I dont like the man wearing a pair of dark glasses.,3. (1) The temple is visited by thousands of people every year. (2) It was built 1, 000 years ago. 用过去分词合并

8、： The temple, built 1, 000 years ago, is visited by thousands of people.,Built 1, 000 years ago, The temple is visited by thousands of people.,课堂练习用非谓语动词合并每一组句子,1 We study the grammar hard . 2 We write an excellent composition.,We study the grammar hard to write an excellent composition.,1. (1)A vio

9、lent earthquake struck France on April 11th , 2012. (2) The earthquake caused many deaths .,A violent earthquake struck France on April 11th , 2012, causing many deaths .,2. (1)I was seriously injured. (2)I couldnt stand up.,(Because I was) Seriously injured, I couldnt stand up.,在写作中, 我们运用并列连词合并 句子是

10、最常用的手段。常用的并列连 词有and, but, or, nor, so，yet(但是），for, while(然而，可是) ,as well as, both.and, not only.but (also), either. or, neither.nor, (and) then, since等。,典型例句 用并列连词合并下列各组句子。 1. (1) He is a friend in word.(口头上） (2) He is a friend in deed（实际上）; too. 用as well as合并： He is a friend in word as well as in d

11、eed. 2. (1)I know her. (2)I am her best friend. 用not only.but also合并： Not only do I know her, but (also) I am her best friend.,1 Toms family was poor. 2 Toms parents never complained and tried best to send him to university. 3 Tom was greatly moved and worked hard to reward them. Poor as Toms family

12、 was ,his parents never complained and tried best to send him to university, so Tom was greatly moved and worked hard to reward them.,课堂练习 用并列连词合并每一组句子 1. (1)Nowadays, a lot of attention is focused on education. (2) The fact that many children from migrant workers families(农民工家庭） have dropped out of

13、 school is ignored.,Nowadays, a lot of attention is focused on education, yet(but) the fact that many children from migrant workers families have dropped out of School is ignored,2. The government should be aware of the importance of providing education for all the children. The average people shoul

14、d be aware of the importance, too. （not only but also/ as well as ),The government, as well as the average people should be aware of the importance of providing education for all the children.,Not only the government but also the average people should be aware of the importance of providing educatio

15、n for all the children.,要使文章漂亮, 在写作中不可能不使用主从复合句, 最常用的从句是状语从句、主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和定语从句。,典型例句 1.(1) China is the third largest country in the world. (2)Everyone knows it. 用定语从句/ 宾语从句合并： As everyone knows, China is the third largest country in the world.,China is the third largest country in the world,which

16、 is known to everyone.,Everyone knows that China is the third largest country in the world.,课堂练习 用主从复合句合并每一组句子,1.North Korea launched a rocket and held a military parade in April ,2012 . 2.These activities drew the widespread attention of international society,North Korea launched a rocket and held

17、a military parade in April ,2012 , which drew the widespread attention of international society,2. (1)An old tower lies in the east of the town. (2)There is a river behind the tower.(使用倒装句，介词加which),In the east of the town lies an old tower, behind which there is a river.,2. The government should ta

18、ke measures to stop the town from being further polluted. It is my opinion.( 宾语从句、 主语从句，表语从句，）,I think that the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted.,It is my opinion that the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted.,My opi

19、nion is that the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted,That the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted is my opinion.,1 The city covers about 2000 squqre meters. 2 The city has more than 1000 years history. 3 The city is lo

20、cated in the Southeast,Located in the Southeast ,the city covers about 2000 squqre meters with a history of more than 1000 years,The city,(which is ) located in the Southeast , has a history of more than 1000 years with an area of about 2000 squqre meters.,课外作业 用介词短语合并每一组句子, 然后将 这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。

21、 1. A professor gave us a talk this morning. He came from Beijing University. He talked about how to learn English well. 2. He told us of his own interesting experiences of learning English. We laughed a lot.,3. His talk lasted an hour. He asked us some questions. 4. His talk was vivid and instructi

22、ve. I learned a lot from his talk. 5. I went back home. I decided to work hard at English.,A professor from Beijing University gave us a talk on how to learn English well this morning. On hearing his own interesting experiences of learning English, we laughed a lot. During the one-hour talk, he aske

23、d us some questions. I learned a lot from his vivid and instructive talk. On my way back home, I decided to work hard at English.,课外作业,课堂练习 用非谓语动词合并每一组句子, 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。 1. Im writing to you. I want to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.,Im writing to you to express my sincere thanks to

24、Good Man.,2. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car. I was walking on the road at that time.,Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walking on the road.,3. I was seriously injured. I couldnt stand up.,Seriously injured, I couldnt stand up.,4. A man saw what had happened to me. He

25、 stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital.,A man stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital when seeing what had happened to me.,Im writing to you to express my sincere thanks to Good Man. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walking on the road. Seriously injured, I couldnt stand up. L

26、uckily, a man stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital when seeing what had happened to me. Not knowing his name, I call him Good Man.,课堂练习,一、合并句子 用以上四种手段合并下列各 组句子, 然后将这5组句子组成一篇通顺自然的短文。,The Titanic hit an iceberg on its first voyage , making it sink into the Atlantic Ocean on April 8th ,1912. what h

27、appened on this day 100 years later.,2012, 4月8日，英国一艘名为“巴尔莫勒尔”号的游轮由南安普顿港出发. 1. On April 8th,2012, an English cruise ship set sail from Southampton. 2. The ship is called Balmoral .,On April 8th,2012, an English cruise ship called Balmoral set sail from Southampton port.,非谓语动词,在复活节这一天重走“泰坦尼克”号百年前的航线，并

28、继续其未完成的航程 1 .On Easter Day, the ship took the route that the Titanic sailed along hundred years ago. 2. It would continue the Titanic unfinished voyage.,On Easter Day, the ship took the route that the Titanic sailed along hundred years ago and would continue the Titanic unfinished voyage.,并列句,英国南安普顿

29、10日举行一系列活动纪念泰坦尼克号邮轮首航百年 1.Southampton held a series of activities. 2. It was in memory of the first voyage centennial of the Titanic cruise ship.,Southampton held a series of activities in memory of the first voyage centennial of the Titanic cruise ship,介词短语,非限制性定语从句,100年前的这一天，这艘当时世界上最大的豪华邮轮正是从这座城市起

30、航，超过500名来自这个城市的船员也在此次航行中丧失了生命。 1. On this day 100 years ago ,theTitanic was the worlds largest cruise ship at that time . 2. It set sail from this city . 3. More than 500 crew from this city were killed on this voyage.,On this day 100 years ago ,theTitanic which was the worlds largest cruise ship at

31、 that time set sail from this city and more than 500 crew from this city were killed on this voyage.,定语从句 、 并列句,据报道， “巴尔莫勒尔”船上1309名乘客人数与当年泰坦尼克号上的人数一样，乘客中包括当年遇难者的亲属。 1 . Balmoral carried 1309 passengers as many as the Titanics. 2. They included the relatives of the victims of the Titanic. 3. The repo

32、rters reported.,It was reported that Balmoral carried 1309 passengers as many as the Titanics, including the relatives of the victims of the Titanic.,主语从句， 非谓语动词,1.On April 8th,2012, an English cruise ship called Balmoral set sail from Southampton. 2.On Easter Day, the ship took the route that the “

33、 Titanic” sailed along hundred years ago and would continue “ Titanic” unfinished voyage. 3.Southampton held a series of activities in memory of the first voyage centennial of the Titanic cruise ship。4. On this day 100 years ago ,theTitanic which was the worlds largest cruise ship at that time set s

34、ail from this city and more than 500 crew from this city were killed on this voyage. 5. It was reported that Balmoral carried 1309 passengers as many as the Titanics,including the relatives of the victims of the Titanic.,Thank you !,1. 昨天, 我们在班里进行了一场讨论。 1. Yesterday we had a discussion in our class. 2. 我们讨论是否应该帮助那些困境中的人。 2. We d