写作提升：定语从句与写作.ppt

1、The Attributive Clause 定语从句在写作中的运用,She is the girl_lives next door.,Attributive clause,关系词,先行词,定语从句的结构,who,注意事项: 1.从句的位置: 2.翻译方法:,先行词 之后,“.的”,Brainstorm: Practice of the Attributive clause,1.A plane is a machine _can fly . 2.The car _my uncle bought last week was stolen. 3.The man_is walking on the

2、playground is my old friend. 4.The woman _ you saw in the park is our English teacher .,which/that,(which/that),who/that,(who/that),5. I saw a woman _bag was stolen. 6. The reason _he was late was that he got up late. 7. I still remember the day _I first came to Beijing. 8. It is an important day _

3、I will never forget. 9. The park _ they paid a visit to is beautiful.,whose,why,when,which,which,10.His father, _ works in Beijing, came back yesterday. 11. Shanghai, _is in East China, is developing quickly. 12.My mother, _ you met last year, keeps telling me not to take them because they are dange

4、rous. 13.He failed in the exam , _ made his parents angry. 14._ we had expected , he failed in the exam.,who,which,whom,which,As,定语从句之,定语从句在作文中的简单运用,Join the following sentences: A plane is a machine. The machine can fly.,先行词和关系词的关系,Join the following sentences: A plane is a machine. The machine can

5、 fly. A plane is can fly.,关系代词的实质,the machine,a machine,Join the following sentences: A plane is a machine. The machine can fly. A plane is can fly.,关系代词的实质,a machine,that /which,关系代词的实质,Join the following sentences: The girl is Mary. We saw her yesterday.,关系代词的实质,Join the following sentences: The g

6、irl is Mary. We saw her yesterday. we saw yesterday is Mary.,her,The girl,关系代词的实质,Join the following sentences: The girl is Mary. We saw her yesterday. we saw yesterday is Mary.,her,The girl,关系代词的实质,Join the following sentences: The girl is Mary. We saw her yesterday. we saw yesterday is Mary.,her,T

7、he girl,关系代词的实质,Join the following sentences: The girl is Mary. We saw her yesterday. we saw yesterday is Mary.,her,The girl,关系代词的实质,Join the following sentences: The girl is Mary. We saw her yesterday. we saw yesterday is Mary.,her,The girl,关系代词的实质,Join the following sentences: The girl is Mary. We

8、 saw her yesterday. we saw yesterday is Mary.,her,The girl,关系代词的实质,Join the following sentences: The girl is Mary. We saw her yesterday. The girl that / who we saw yesterday is Mary.,用定语从句翻译短语,1.一个叫做Tom的男孩,a boy who is called Tom,2.教我们英语的老师,the teacher who teaches us English,3.昨天我妈妈给我的钱,The money th

9、at my mother gave me yesterday,4.矗立在河边的楼房,The building which stands by the river,7.她工作的地方,the place where she works,8. 她没有教作业的原因,the reason why she didnt hand in the homework,1.The girl who studies hard is very beautiful .,2.I know the girl who studies hard .,3.This is the girl who studies hard .,总结

10、：定语从句可以修饰主句的不同成分主语， 宾语，表语,翻译下列句子,1.不努力学习的学生不会通过考试的。,The students who dont study hard will not pass the exam.,2.她上周买的房子非常好看。,The house ,which she bought last week ,is very nice .,3.这就是他爸爸工作的地方。,This is the place where his father works.,4.你们已经取得了很大的进步，这使老师非常高兴.,You have made great progress, which make

11、s your teacher very happy.,5.众所周知，他是一个好学生。,As is known to us all, he is a good student.,6.北京是中国的首都，它是一座美丽的城市。,Beijing,which is the capital city of China ,is a very beautiful .,7.鲁迅的原名(real name)是周树人。在他的一生中他写了很多小说和散文（prose),Luxun,whose real name is ZhouShuren,wrote many novels and proses in his whole

12、 life .,8.杰克来自加拿大，他在我们学校已经学习了3年, 他不仅经常帮助我们学英语，而且中文也讲的很不错。,Jack is from Canada.He has studied in our school for three years .He often helps us learn English .He speaks Chinese very well.,Jack is a student of our school ,who comes from Canada.He has studied in our school for three years .He often help

13、s us learn English ,and he speaks Chinese very well.,Jack comes from Canada. He is a student of our school where he has studied for 3 years .Not only does he often help us learn English but he speaks Chinese fluently as well.,改写句子 “I see many running creatures. They are made of metal and glass. Thei

14、r feet are round. They have four eyes. Two of the four eyes are red. Inside I see soft shapes. They can move.”,I see many running creatures which / that are made of metal and glass. Their feet are round and they have four eyes, two of which are red. Inside I see soft shapes that can move.,What is it?,Our class is a big family. It is made up of 36 girls and 9 boys. All of them are very diligent and warm-hearted. Zou Xiaohui is our monitor. He is always ready to help others. He is such a good boy that we all like him very much.,Our class i