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1、Attributive clause and writing,Our Aims,1.Combine sentences with the attributive clause.,Today, we are going to ,2.Make sentences with the attributive clause.,根据所掌握的定语从句的知识，熟练地使用定语从句也是高考英语写作的一项基本要求。定语从句属于较为复杂的语法结构，根据内容要点在短文中适当地运用定语从句有助于提高写作的得分。,高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：,2. Here Id like to introduce you some w

2、ays which might help you improve your listening ability.,1. So far, we have done some unforgettable things, one of which was talking with foreigners in the Central Park.,4. In this way we may make friends with those who have a lot in common with us both in characters and in interests.,3. We will go

3、to take part in the summer camp held by your school this July, which makes us very excited.,5. Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75% are men and 25% are women.,写作中定语从句的主要作用:,1. 增加词数（100词左右）,2. 可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子， 避免单词的重复和句式单一。,3. 补充细节，以丰富文章内容。,一、句子的合并 题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。 Solution

4、:,如何写出定语从句,3. 确定关系词,2. 再确定主句：根据文章所描述的主题 来确定较重要的信息为主句。,1. 找两句中共同的名词或代词，将其 定为先行词。,两个句子间的合并, I went to Hangzhou for three days. During that time I visited the whole West Lake.,I went to Hangzhou for three days, during which I visited the whole West Lake.,Task 1 预习自测, At present there are more and more

5、students. Their eyesight is poorer and poorer.,At present there are more and more students, whose eyesight is poorer and poorer., He had given up such a good chance. I didnt know the reason.,I didnt know the reason why he had given up such a good chance., This is the museum. We saw an exhibition in

6、the museum the other day.,This is the museum where/ in which we saw an exhibition the other day.,两个以上句子间的合并, John is my best friend. John gave me a gift. He bought this gift from USA.,John, my best friend, gave me a gift, which he bought from USA.,Task 2 合作探究:, Kate is a new student. She comes from

7、a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,Practice more,王蒙，女，25岁，黑龙江人； 10岁开始滑冰训练,Wang Meng, a girl of 25 who was born in Hei Longjiang Province, began her skat

8、ing training at the age of 10.,Iphone，苹果公司制造, 深受青少年欢迎。,Iphone , a kind of cellphone which was made by Apple, is quite popular among teenagers.,二、插入语的使用,众所周知： 如上所述： 情况常常如此 ,As we all know/ As is known to us all As is mentioned above As is often the case ,1. As we all know, life is full of dreams and

9、having a good dream is of great importance in our daily life.,我们都知道，生活充满了梦想。在我们日常生活中拥有一个美好的梦想是很重要的。,Task 3 翻译下列句子,2. 如上所述，我支持后者的观点。,I, as is mentioned above, am in favor of the latter view.,3. 正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名。,She, as we had expected, got the first prize.,4. As is often the case, the fact that some

10、thing is cheap doesnt necessarily mean its of low quality.,情况往往如此，便宜的东西未必就质量不好。,Solution: 找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。 For example: 汉语是一门受欢迎的语言。 Chinese is a popular language.,Chinese is a popular language, which is now spoken and used by more and more people all around the world .,怎么受欢迎？为谁所欢迎？,三、在要点增加上的

11、使用,题干中只有一个孤立的简单句,派对将于十二月二十五号举行。,The party will be held on December 25th .,The party，which is designed to welcome the foreigners from other countries ，will be held on December 25th.,(派对的目的),Task 4 Practice,李明是一个热心肠的人。 Li Ming is a warm-hearted man .,Li Ming is a warm-hearted man, who always helps oth

12、ers when they are in trouble.,(具体化),温馨提示：用which引导的非限制定语从句可以增添做这些事情的原因或结果。,1. In this summer vacation, I would like to do a part- time job，,which will help me gain money and working experience.,2. You looked upset in class yesterday,which made me worried.,3. I would like to do voluntary work,which wi

13、ll help those in need.,Task 5 补充细节，丰富文章内容。,能力提升 （2011全国2卷),假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1说明你是该报的忠实读者 2赞赏该报优点： 1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事 3提出建议： 刊登指导英语学习的文章注意： 1词数100左右，开头语己为你写好； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,1)兼顾国内外新闻 可以让我见识广阔。 It covers both national and international news, which

14、helps me to know more about the world. 2)介绍名人成功故事 这会激励我努力学习。 It introduces many stories of the celebrities, which can inspire me to study hard.,假定你是李华, 2022年冬季奥运会将在你所居住的城市张家口举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。 内容应包括： 1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助 人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务 注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节

15、，以使行文连贯； 生词：申请apply (v. ), application (n.) 志愿者volunteer,巩固练习 Homework:,Tips:,定语从句虽好, 但不宜过多 容易超出字数限制 学会将定语从句浓缩为非谓语动词则是写作的最高境界,个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 I am 16 years old. I am a girl. I study in Zhang Jiakou No.1 middle school.,I, 16 years old girl, study in Zhang Jiakou No.1 middle school,which is one of the b

16、est senior schools in Zhang Jiakou.,Thank you!,Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Olympic Games. I, 16 years old girl, study in Zhang Jiakou No.1middle school, which is one of the best senior schools in Zhang Jiakou. With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I am good at communicating and I am considered to be an outgoing