高考英语作文写作公开课

1、英语写作训练,英语看图类作文： 1.记叙文 2.议论文 3.说明文（含图表）,遇到不会写的单词怎么办？,2种方法：（1）同义替换,遇到不会写的单词怎么办？,(1）这人很变态： BT? be different from normal people strange/odd/peculiar （2）难民 difficult people？ the people who suffered from a disaster,X,X,遇到不会写的单词怎么办？,（3）老百姓 old hundred sex the general public ordinary people people from all

2、walks of life 四喜丸子 four happy meatballs meatballs,X,X,遇到不会写的单词怎么办？,（2）上义词或下义词代替 上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明 下义词是事物的具体表现形式。,遇到不会写的单词怎么办？,（3）铁锹、锄头、镐： the tools which are used to plant trees 拐杖： The tool which is used to help the disabled to stand/walk 二氧化碳： carbon dioxide 一氧化碳： carbon oxide poisonous gases,spad

3、e, hoe, pick,stick,没有不会写的，只有不会想的！,残疾人： the people who can not move/speak/think normally,大众媒体,大众媒体的具体表现形式是TV，radio, newspaper, internet,the disabled,mass media,北京很迷人 。 Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here. Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here every year. Beijing is so beau

4、tiful that thousands of people come here every year. Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world. Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people, no matter young or old, men or women, come here every year from all around the world.,高考英语看图作文五步曲 一“

5、抓”为抓主题。 二“列”为列要点。 三“变”为变要点为句子。 四“连”为连句成篇。 五“检”为文章检查。,假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(95) Dear Peter, Were so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you can find us. Li Hua,一“抓”为抓主题。,Type: Person: Tense: What:

6、 When: Where:,说明文 （书信）,第一人称,一般现在时，一般将来时,通过看示意图来野餐,星期天,人民公园,the key points to be included,在人民公园野餐 从公园正门进 进门后朝前走 到小河过桥 向右拐后朝前走 绕/爬过小山 我们在（湖畔）小树林里,have a picnic, in Peoples Park enter park, by main gate walk straight cross stream turn right to the other side of hill in small woods, by lake,二“列”为列要点。,Ex

7、pand the key points have a picnic, in Peoples Park,We will have our picnic in the Peoples Park. We are going to the Peoples park for a picnic. We are going to the Peoples park, where we will have a picnic.,三“变”为变要点为句子。,enter park, by main gate,Enter the park by the main gate.,Go through the main gat

8、e of the park.,walk straight,Walk straight on till you come to a stream.,Walk along the road until you get to a bridge over the stream.,cross stream,Cross the stream.,Go over the bridge.,turn right,Turn right.,to the other side of hill,Walk round to the other side of the hill.,Climb the hill.,in sma

9、ll woods, by the lake,Well have our picnic in the small woods by the lake.,确定提示要点的益处：,4）便于使用恰当的连接词。,1）不丢重要信息点。,2）避免中文式英文。,3）连词成句时能够注意到时态、语态等问题。,连句成篇,Dear Peter, Were so glad youre coming to join us on Sunday.Here is how you can find us. Well have our picnic in the Peoples Park. You know where that i

10、s , dont you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while, you will come to a hill.,Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. Well have our picnic in the small woods by th

11、e lake. Im sure youll have no trouble finding us. Do come!,Possible version,Dear Peter, Were so glad youre coming to join us on Sunday.Here is how you can find us. Well have our picnic in the Peoples Park. You know where that is , dont you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on

12、 till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while, you will come to a hill.,Possible version,Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. Well have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. Im sure youll have no trouble finding us. Do com

13、e! Li Hua,仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。情景：假定你叫李红，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园(Central Park)聚会。现请你写封信邀请Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。 参考词汇：have a gathering party(聚会)这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。 Dear Mrs Brown, We are so glad that youre coming to join us on Saturday. He

14、re is how you can find us.,Type: Person: Tense: What: When: Where:,Dear Mrs Brown， We are so glad that youre coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. Well have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe youve been there，havent you？ Go straight on when you get out of the school

15、 gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and youll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. Well have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing！ Do come on ti

16、me. Well wait for you at the park gate Yours， Li Hua,2009年高考全国卷II英语作文,假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容： 1.简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 2.位置：天安门广场南面； 3.交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。 参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car地铁 subway 注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以

17、使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。 Dear sarah. Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it.,Dear Sarah,Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it。Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old

18、. Along this 800-metre street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tiananmen Square, its very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but t

19、here are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life, Im sure youll like it。,(06湖北) 受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。 调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种。 调查范围：湖北省的10所中学 调

20、查对象：高中生 调查人数：1000 调查方式：访谈 调查结果：（见下图）,【参考范文】 Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten in Hubei Province were interviewed. T

21、hey were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods. The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English st

22、ories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.,最近，你校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。主题是：要不要集中进行晚自习。根据下图提供的信息，写一篇140字左右的英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，注意要涵盖所有要点。,【参考范文】 Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening se