英语基础写作―学会用复合句和非谓语动词

1、基础写作训练,你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。 写作内容 请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍： 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 1896：第一次成为奥运项目 1904：中断 1928：中断 1932：重回奥运会 1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。, Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century

2、. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has g

3、rown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,广东08高考基础写作范文：,句子表达有何亮点？,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm., The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep

4、calm in the storm.,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子, The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face., The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass.,3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然,There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday., Ove

5、r fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday., The hall is different from all other buildings , which is made of glass., The old man thought of his son, with tears coming down from his face.,4.过多地使用并列句组合信息, We were driving out into the country, and we saw our

6、 English teacher taking a bus,and the bus was crowded., It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing., It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing., As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher taking a crowded bus.,My English Learn

7、ing It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English. But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. Difficult as it is, I have made up

8、my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.,请看范例,从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英 语句子”。其实， “规范的英语句子” 就是我们经常讲的三种句子：,A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.,B) Compound sentence A: He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.,C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothin

9、g to do with me.,=When he heard the news, he was happy.,Here are 3 ways to make sentences:,I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1)借助名词短语做同位语,如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。,Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.,2)借助介词短语做定语,如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。,Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white ja

10、cket.,如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。,With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.,4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语,如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.,3)借助介词短语做状语,II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：,如：他给我钱，我不要。,I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.,如：我刚到拐角处，就见到

11、你了。,He gave me a lot money but I refused.,III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：,1) 名词性从句,如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。,That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.,2) 定语从句,如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。,China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natura

12、l resources.,3) 状语从句,如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。,I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词, Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new student from a northern pr

13、ovince, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。 小学生同时学汉语和英语。 这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句, Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time., This w

14、ill affect their Chinese study., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will aff

15、ect their Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning English., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary school start to learn Engli

16、sh and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇： 错别字: wrongly-written characters 网络语言：web language,要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容 2. 两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。, There are many wrongl

17、y-written characters in students compositions.,The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.,合并句子：, They often use web languages when chatting on line.,1.They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters,第二句: 1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。, They have much homework to do every day.,2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,3. Because they have so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.,合并句子：, They fa