高二英语看图作文讲评

1、Tuhua Zuowen De Xiezuo,看图作文的写作,平 罗 中 学 李 萍,lead-in,基本介绍：,看图作文也叫做图画式作文，是一种常见的高考题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。,写作要求：,1、找到联想点,2、联想要合理,3、引入要自然,4、思路要开阔,5、详略要得当,写作方法：,4、联系实际,1、观察图画,3、展开联想,2、提出观点,为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。,注意：1、日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使日记连贯。 2、词数：120左右。 3、日期已给出。

2、Sunday，October 13，2003 Fine,1、审 题 体裁： 主要时态： 人称： 要点： 注意日记的格式。,日记文体,一般过去时，描述 我 一 天上午的经历,第一人称,记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。,2、简译 为迎接高考，“我”常常复习功课到深夜。 I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination,I woke up at nine oclock this morning .,I got dressed. I rushed into the liv

3、ing room . Mother was preparing breakfast there .,I got on my bike .,When I got to the school, I found the school gate was closed,3、衔接 将图中和图与图之间隐藏的要点挖掘出来。 对第一幅图所反应的内容我们要交待其原因：如：昨天晚上直到12点才睡觉。 Last night I didnt go to bed until 12 O clock 对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出：（起来后）要洗漱： I brushed my teeth and washed my face

4、quickly.,对于第二和第三幅图之间我们也应该根据常识补出下列要点： 图中的母亲有没有讲什么？（因为时间紧张，母亲没有来得及讲什么） 我去上学肯定要拿什么？（书包） Before she could say anything，I got my school-bag,对于第三幅图，我们可以相象一下：“我”骑车往学校赶的路上的心情 害怕迟到受处罚，而拼命地骑车 I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late, so I rode as fast as I could. 对于第四幅图我们可以推测

5、：因为车骑得快，因而心理感到好象没过几分钟就到了学校 It seemed only a few minutes before l got to the school.,4、成文 加上过渡词语、改变一些句式，整理成文。 Sunday，October 13，2003 Fine,5认真核查，注意语言的连贯和得体要做到“四查”：,(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等。 (2)查动词。看谓语动词的时态、语态是否正确，主谓是否一致，非谓语动词形式是否正确等。 (3)查习语、搭配。看是否符合英语表达习惯。 (4)查拼写、词数。看拼写是否有误、词数是否合适。,为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。请根

6、据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。,注意：1、日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使日记连贯。 2、词数：120以上。 3、日期已给出。Sunday，October 13，2003 Fine,Practice,参考范文 Sunday，October 13，2003 Fine I often stay up late to go over my lessons or college entrance examinationIt was not until 12 oclock last night that I went to bed. When I woke up this morning,

7、I found it was already 9 oclock. I got dressed, brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.,Then I rushed into the living-room，where Mother was preparing breakfastBefore she could say anything，I got my school- bag，ran out and got on my bikeI was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher becaus

8、e of being late , so I rode as fast as I could. It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school To my surprise，I found the school gate was closedIt was then that I realized it was Sunday,仔细审题、分析图画。 列出图中要点。 注意图与图，句与句之间的连贯衔接（衔接词）。 认真核查错误,Conclusion,Homework,Write a composition according to the p