英语专四作文写作辅导 (2)ppt课件

1、专四写作辅导2,商英教研室,1,内容,一复习 二模板识记、积累 may, maybe, perhaps, probably; sometimes, to some extent, to some degree,8,亮点词语改写练习 Id like to make every effort to let more people know the idea that waste is disgraceful, and call on all my schoolmates to fight against waste.(用更具体的词) Im sure you will soon find a goo

2、d candidate for the position.(用更具体的词) People who are good at dealing with social relations admit their mistakes, and take their share of blame. (用介词短语改写),9,如何制造亮点句型,10,长句短句搭配使用 在实际写作中,一味地采用长句或短句都是不可取的,要长短句交替使用。 开头&结尾：用长句，吸引阅卷老师注意力 正文：一般来说,写作中是以简单句为基础,适当配以并列句和复合句。,11,1.长句的用法 长句含有许多修饰语,适合表达准确而复杂的思想,解释

3、观点或理论,描写细致的事物。 写作时,考生要注意前后句子之间是否存在联系,善于发现各简单句之间的关联,用恰当的连接方式(esp并列、从句、介词短语、非谓语动词短语)将简单句连接起来,组成准确地道的复杂长句,增加文章的气势。 原句: Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it becomes a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact. 优化: It i

4、s widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future, though it is unlikely to be true.,12,学会使用并列结构 平行结构指的是将结构相同或相似、意义并重、语气一致的语言成分并行排列的一种修辞手法。这种结构层次清晰、语意顺畅,能够起到加强语气、增强表达效果的作用。 原句: This phenomenon, in my opinion, has

5、upgraded the quality of peoples life. And it has also improved the valve of consumption of our modern society 优化：This phenomenon, in my opinion, has not only upgraded the quality peoples life but also improved the valve of consumption of our modern society,13,学会使用介词短语 汉语中几乎较少用介词短语，而英语中较多。此外，介词短语简洁有力

6、，可以极大地增强文章的表现力 原句：Pirated products often cost much less than the original ones, so they enjoy unbeatable advantage in price though their quality is relatively poor. 优化：despite their relatively poor quality.,14,学会使用非谓语动词短语 原句: Many people get up early to jog along country lanes, or in order to observ

7、e the wonder of nature. And some also just watch the sun rise. 优化: Many people get up early to jog along country lanes, to observe the wonder of nature, or just to watch the sun rise.,15,2.短句的用法 长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想,但如果片面追求复杂句式,华而不实,反而会成为表达的累赘。因此,写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要,有话则长,无话则短。 短句比较简洁、明快、有力,适合陈述重要的事实或想法。短句不

8、仅指句子长度较短,也指句子结构精炼。 原句: Many automobile parts that are made of plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long. 优化: Many automobile parts made of plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long.,16,从句适当变换非谓语动词短语 非谓语动词包括:动词不定式、动名词、现在分词和过去分词。有时候我们可以适当使用非谓语动词短语代替从句,这样就能够在有限的空间内容纳更多的信息,使句

9、子结构紧凑、逻辑严谨。 原句: It must be realized that people should be cautious when they decide which books they should choose to read since if they read bad books, it will be time wasting and harmful 优化: It must be realized that people should be cautious when deciding which books to read since reading bad book

10、s is time - wasting and harmful 原句: Because one of my parents is laid off, my family cant possibly afford all my expenses at college 优化：With one of my parents being laid off, my family cant possibly afford all my expenses at college,17,3.会运用插入语 插入语有时表达说话者的态度和看法,有时起强调的作用,有时是为了引起对方的注意,有时起转移话题或说明事由的作用,

11、有时还可以承上启下,使句子衔接得更紧密。 写作中常用到的插入语包括: 副词和副词短语: indeed(的确), surely(无疑), however(然而),frankly(坦率地说), obviously(显然), naturally(自然地), luckily/ happily for sb.(算某人幸运), fortunately(幸好), strangely(奇怪), briefly(简单地说), personally(依个人之见)。 形容词或形容词短语:true(真的), funny(真可笑), needless to say(不用说), most important of all

12、(最为重要), worse still(更糟糕的), even better更好),18,介词短语: in conclusion(总之), in a word(简而言之), in short in brief(简而言之), in general(一般说来), In a sense(在某种意义上), In one s view(在某人看来), In one s opinion(按照某人的看法), in fact(事实上), at first(首先), in addition(此外), of course(当然), to one s surprise(使某人惊奇的是), to one s regr

13、et(使某人遗憾的是), for example(例如), on the contrary(相反), in other words(换句话说), on the other hand(然而)。 分词短语: strictly speaking(严格地说), considering/takinginto consideration(考虑到,鉴于), judging from(根据判断)。 不定式短语: to be sure(无疑), to sum up(概括地说), to tell the truth(说实话), to be frank/ to be honest(说实在的,老实地说), to ma

14、ke matters worse(更糟的是), to start with/ to begin with(首先,第一)。,19,原句: I think that computer games can also do some good to young people. 优化: Computer games, in my opinion , can also do some good to young people. 原句: The above - mentioned show that it is no doubt that college students should often atte

15、nd sports activities. 优化: Considering the above - mentioned, it is no doubt that college students should often attend sports activities.,20,4.倒装句和强调句适当穿插 什么是倒装句 句子成分在句子中都有一定的位置,但有时可以把某些句子成分前后倒置,以达到突出强调的作用。英语中倒装主要有两种:全部倒装和部分倒装. 全部倒装是指主语和谓语完全倒置,常用于记叙或描写。 部分倒装是指只将助动词提到主语前面,而主要动词仍然保留在原来的位置上,常用于议论或说明。 原句: By reading widely, one can really make remarkable achievements in his study. 优化: Only by reading widely can he really make remar