Task-writing.ppt

1、Task-writing,How to develop a narrative,On April 13th,2007,The writing template of the description article (叙述类文章写作模板)： 1. Title (2分) 2. Sum upAbout the original passage( 30words or so) (5分) 3. A transitional sentence or paragraph (3分) 4. A narrative (About the same topic) (10分) 5. An ending paragra

2、ph (Point out the main idea) (5分),The results of the first task-writing:,A guide to task- writing(一): 1. What style of the original passage :,Narrative.,2. Ask us to write what style of a story:,Narrative, too.,3. Whats the title that we should use?,1.Patience Is the Secret of Success,2.Patience Is

3、Important,3.The Importance of Patience,10.Patience Is Necessary,4.The Key to Success Patience,5.How Important Patience Is!,6.Patience Leads to/ Results in Success,7.Our Life Needs Patience,8.Be / Keep Patient,9.Do Everything Patiently,All of the above are chosen from your writings.,Suggestions:,What

4、 should you pay attention to when writing a title?,We should use a noun phrase or a sentence as a title. 2.The first letter of every word in a title should be written in a capital letter except articles, prepositions and conjunctions. 3. The number of a title had better not be more than 12 words.,4.

5、 How to summarize a story:,Skill: Combination of five elements要素串联法,was taught a lesson by an old man,the writer and an old man,when going fishing,on the bank of the lake,Patience is important. Patience is the secret of success.,You may begin like these:,1.The passage is about the writers unforgetta

6、ble lesson from an old man.,2.The writer tells us about his unforgettable lesson from an old man.,3.The story is about the writer who was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,4.The author tells us that he was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,故事性阅读材料，应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水，而

7、且最好讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。,1.The passage mainly tells us a story that the writer realized the importance of patience when meeting an old man fishing many fish, and at last got a lot of fish after waiting patiently. (34 words 谭燕梅）,.This passage mainly tells us that the writer realized that the key to suc

8、cess was nothing but patience, after he talked with an old man when he gave up going on fishing, preparing to go back home last Sunday. (39 words 叶水亮）,Show good summaries:,3.The writer said he had an experience of fishing on the bank of a lake. During the first two hours, he got nothing, but asking

9、an old man, he knew importance of patience and got some fish.(39 words 吕睿）,Summary:,The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success. (39

10、 words),Possible version,1. Mainly use the words and phrases in the original passage. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use our own words. 2. Write it in the third person .（第三人称） 3.Control the number of words between 20 and 40.,Suggestions:,What should you pay attention to when writing

11、 a summary?,5. How to write a transitional sentence or paragraph,1.There is a story about me realizing the importance of patience.Take me for example. 2.I had a similar experience at one time, too. 3.As far as I am concerned, I have a similar experience . 4.I have such a similar experience. 5.I have

12、 a similar experience to the writers. 6.I also have a similar experience.,You may write like these:,Show good transitional sentences or paragraphs: 1.It occurs to me that a similar story of mine happened 3 years ago and taught me a lesson. (19 words 谭燕梅） 2.Like the writer, I also have an unforgettab

13、le experience that taught me to keep patient. (15 words 杨玲玉）,.As we all know, patience is very important to everybody. Here is a story of mine about patience. (18 words 莫国维） .I also have a story about patience. Would you like to share it with me? (15 words 罗铭华） 5. To myself, I also have an experienc

14、e that told me the importance of patience. (14 words 张龙君）,6.Make up your similar story:,Skill: Combination of five elements要素串联法,Take waiting for a bus for example:,waited for a bus,I,when going to school,at the bus stop,Patience is important,I have a similar experience. Once I waited for the bus at

15、 the stop for 30 minutes, no bus came. I couldnt wait any longer and decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only th

16、en did I realize the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patience also plays an important part in our study and work. With it we can achieve greater. (110 words ),7. How to write an ending paragraph,. All in all, patience is very important. Everyone

17、should have patience to do everything.(words) 莫国维）,1.In my opinion, without patience, we may miss a lot of successful chances in our life. So we should try our best to build the good of patience. (29 words 黎秋平）,(Point out the main idea),Show good ending paragraphs:,Possible version: Now, whenever I

18、am to lose my patience, Ill think of the experience of waiting for a bus. (18 words),3.From my own experience, I think patience can help us overcome the difficulties in our lives and studies. So we should be patient whatever we do. (26 words 吴锦镖）,Lets enjoy three good task-writings!,Possible version

19、:,Patience is the secret of success The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success. (39 words),I have a similar experience. Once I waited for the bus