四级作文现象解释型.ppt

1、英语四级作文,现象解释型,Contens,现象解释型作文特点 真题例文 写作步骤 模板 练习,现象解释型作文特点,现象解释型作文就是，命题内容是关于社会现象或社会问题的，要求作者分析该问题产生的原因或造成的后果，这类作文属于说明文体。作文通常要求考生使用“因果法”或“比较法”的写作技巧来成文 关键点：分析现象，阐述其成因利弊，题目实例如下：,真题,2003年1月四级作文考题： Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Ho

2、nest. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象； 2. 诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实,范文,It Pays to Be Honest Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to the

3、ir consumers; some students cheat in the exams.Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot.Those wh

4、o always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person wit

5、h a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest,写作步骤,第一步：提出问题或现象。针对命题，概括性地提所要论述的社会问题和现

6、象的主要特点。 第二步：找出、分析问题的原因或后果。说明问题产生的原因是什么，并且要分析说明原因造成的后果是什么。 第三步：提出建议或解决问题的方法，或对目前无法解决的问题提出展望。,模板,文章按照开头、正文和结尾三个部分呈现,模板一,Part One : The Model of Beginning Paragraph 1. Last (week/ month), I visited a friend of mine and found that - . The (case/story/incident) is not rare. It has now drawn much nationwi

7、de attention to the issue/problem of -. We may trace this problem back to -, but it does not answer the question of why-. 2. Perhaps nothing is more (dominant/popular/important/harmful/dangerous )in (the modern world/Chinese family/school/society) than -. According to a recent (study/investigation/p

8、oll)80% teenagers (people/women) are (addicted to/indulged in /interested in) doing-. True, it does some good to us, but when we applaud its benefits, we must acknowledge its enormous potential to affect us.,Part Two: The Model of the Body paragraph,1.分析原因: In my opinion, the (phenomenon/problem/fai

9、lure/change) in - (is partly/ mainly /largely attributable to/due to/owing to.) -. The fact that - has several factors. First,-. Second, -. Finally, - 2. 分析结果: It is important for people /teenagers to realize that- ,for it will( produce/ exert/have)a remarkable (impact/influence/effect) on-. First o

10、f all, -. Also,-. Finally,-.,Part Three; The Model of ConcludingParagraph,1.There is(no denying/little doubt)that (special/adequate/considerable/further)attention must be paid/called/devoted to the problem of -.If we ignore/fall in/ are blind to the problem, it is very likely that -. 2. We must look

11、 for /search for/call for an immediate attention/action/method/measure because the present/current situation/state of -. 3. It is suggested/ recommended/hoped that great /persistent/contiuous efforts should be made to halt/ control/check the danger of-. Anyhow, wider education/ more publicity should

12、 be given to the serious consequences/ effects of -. Only by recognizing/ realizing the -, necessity/importance/dangerous effect of - can we-.,现象解释型作文模板二,第一段 Recently, . 描述现象，引起话题 What amazes us most is . 表现较为典型的一个方面 It is true that . 对于现象做出的评论 第二段 There are many reasons explaining . 承上启下,解释这一现象的原因

13、The main reason is . 说明原因一 What is more, . 原因二 Thirdly, . 原因三 第三段 As a result, . 讲述导致的结果 Considering all these, . 作者的态度 For one thing, . 观点一 11For another, . 11观点二 12In conclusion, . 12总结全文,模板三,With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into realit

14、y. Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of _ (主题现象) is an example of the former / latter one. There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects. To start with, _ (原因1). Furthermore, _ (原因2). Eventual

15、ly, _ (原因3). Good as _ (主题现象) is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages. The apparent example is that _ (缺点例子1). In addition, _ (缺点例子2). On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society. There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate _ (主题现象) and m

16、ake our life more comfortable.,表示主题句的例句,1. Recent years, become more and more .Its estimated that . 2. Currently, people have to face the problem of . 3. Nowadays more and more people are beginning to realize that . For example, .,表示原因的例句,1. Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phe

17、nomenon. 2. Several reasons can account for this phenomenon, 3. In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows. 4. Have you ever thought of the famous proverb “A man is known by the company he keeps”? To me, it is meaningful and significant in three respects. Firstly

18、,Secondly,Thirdly, For one thing,For another,Finally, In the first place,In the second place,Finally, On one hand,On the other hand, First of all,In addition,Consequently, To begin with, whats more, last but not the least,模仿练习1,Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags 1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2.造成的问题 3.限制

19、使用的意义,范文,Disposable plastic bags were once widely used in China. When we went shopping at supermarkets and departments stores, shopping assistants often provided free plastic bags for our convenience. For a while, life without them seemed unimaginable for most of us. However, disposable plastic bags

20、 do bring severe damage to our environment. Costumers away after use, and because they are thin and hard to decompose, these plastic products will exist for a long time. This is an immediate threat to our earth and water. Nowadays, the government has passed relevant regulations for limiting the use

21、of disposable plastic bags: they are not free any more. In some shopping places, in order to invoke the public awareness of environmental protection, plastic bags are offered in a much higher price. As a result, people are changing their behavior: paper that vanished for a long time come back to our

22、 daily life. It is true that by limiting its usage, everyone in this societ contributes some effort to the improvement of the environment.,模仿练习2,Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled On Power Failure. You should write at least 120 words according to the

23、 following guidelines(given in Chinese): 1很多城市缺电现象严重 2分析原因 3提出建议,范文,On Power Failure Recently, every morning when I wake up, I find my air-conditioner automatically turned off . I didnt understand why at first, but soon I learned that there was a great shortage of electricity supply in our city C my

24、 air-conditioner turned off because of a power failure midnight. With the rapidly developing industry and the ever-increasing population, demand for electricity supply is soaring. Besides, summers in recent years are much hotter than before, so most working places and households are air-conditioned,

25、 which consumes additional electricity. Face with such a hard nut, we have to find ways to crack it . Above all, in western areas China, there is surplus of electricity supply. So, cities that are thirsty for electricity may ask for remote help. Then, when we have electricity, we should remember to

26、save it . Set your air-conditioners at 27C and you wont feel less comfortable than when they are at 26C . In fact, some factories already shift their working hours to avoid the peak time of electricity consuming. My parents dont work from Monday to Friday as before C they work form Saturday to Wedne

27、sday and have the following two days off instead. This is also a way out, isnt it?,练习3,Online Education 1.目前网络教育形成热潮 2.我认为这股热潮的的原因是 3.我对网络教育的评价,范文,Being online is no longer something strange in our life. To some degree, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as

28、searching for information and communicating with friends far and near. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”. That is online education. Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the internet

29、should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with lightening speed. To catch up with this development we all fe

30、el an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern society, many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid. Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. Its indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educatio

31、nal means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Most of all,with online education, we can sick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge,练习4,Away from Net-bar Campaign 1.新闻媒体披露,徐州某中学1000多名学生签名,庄严承诺“远离网吧” 2.分析“远离网吧”运动的原因 3.作

32、出对比的评论,范文,Away from Net-bar Campaign It has been reported that a middle school in Xuzhou City has recently launched a campaign named “Away from Net-bar”. More than a thousand students have signed for their solemn promise that they will not spend a single minute in the net-bars. With the nearing of t

33、he summer vacation, this campaign is especially meaningful for the healthy development of the minors. The internet has brought people great convenience in getting information, entertainment and contact with others, and it has also benefited some businessmen, especially the owner of net-bars. While i

34、t is true that most net-bars are running legally, it is also true that some are offering unhealthy programs that involve violence and sex content. Since most middle school students are prone to be influenced and they can hardly tell which bars are doing well and which ones are not, it is only advisable that they stay away from all. Besides, staying away from net-bars also does good to students physical health. By passively sitting too long in front of the computer screen, both their eyesight and physique suffer. Obviously, the Away from Net-bars Campaign is an