如何让你的作文更有亮点

1、WELCOME,WELCOME,如何让你的作文更有亮点,2012年湖南卷.书面表达 生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，期间有烦恼，有惊喜，有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文。 主要内容包括：1.丢失的物品；2.物品失而复得的经过；3.你的感想。 注意： 词数不少于120个； 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称,Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscrib

2、ed. Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back. When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I

3、 found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me,wearing a smile on his face. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. From this story, I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society.,How to

4、polish(润色) your composition?,一 遣词 努力使用高级词汇,1.Atweekends,wehavealotofhomeworktodo.,Atweekends,wehave_homeworktodo.,endless,2. I had a good idea.,A good idea_ me.,struck,3.As a result, the plan was a failure. The plan _ _ to be a failure.,4.She went to Austria in order to study music. She went to Aust

5、ria _ _ _ _studying music.,turned,out,for,the,purpose,of,5.She cant correctly pronounce the word. She _ _ _ pronouncing the word.,has,trouble/difficulty,in,2学会使用恰当的过渡词：,1）表示转折关系,but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), otherwise, in spite of, despite , regardless of(不管,不顾), although, though, while.,3）

6、表示对比关系,on the contrary; Instead of; on one handon the other hand; for one thing ,for another thing.,2） 表示递进、强调关系,besides, furthermore , whats more, in addition, moreover , worse still, to make matters /things worse,6）表示解释、说明关系,7）表示结论,namely (也就是), actually, in fact, as a matter of fact, such as, for

7、 example/for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this,in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion,4） 表示因果关系,as a result /consequence (of), owing to, due to, thanks to, on account of(由于), so

8、, therefore, because, since ,as,5） 表示时间、顺序关系,shortly afterwards(不久之后), first, second, then, next, finally, in the end, eventually.,二 造句- 灵活多变的句式结构,1.使用强调句,2) l didnt realize the importance of learning English well until then. _ _ _ _then _ I realized the importance of learning English well.,It,was,n

9、ot,until,that,1)The dog has saved my little brother. _,It is the dog that has saved my little brother.,2.使用倒装句,You can learn to write English well only in this way. _,Only in this way can you learn to write English well.,Though I am weak, I will make the efforts. _ _ _ _, I will make the efforts.,We

10、ak,as,I,am,3.使用非谓语动词,The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news. _ _ _ _, the young man couldnt help crying.,Hearing,the,bad,news,She walked out of the room and many students followed her. _ _ many students, she walked out of the room .,Followed,by,He didnt turn up. And it disappoi

11、nted everybody. _ _ everybody _ he didnt turn up.,It,disappointed,that,4.使用名词性从句,定从,_ _ everybody _ _he didnt turn up.,disappointed,that,was,what,He didnt turn up, _ disappointed everybody.,which,5. 改变语态,People suggest that the conference be put off. _ _ _that the conference be put off.,It,is,suggested,6.使用并列句,If you give him an inch,he will take a yard. _ _ an inch, _ he will take a yard.,the,more,excited,When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. The more he spoke,