module4writing专项.ppt

1、How to describe a place,基础写作技巧指导,地点描写,Suppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists, what subjects (主题）will you introduce ?,Possible subjects：,1.介绍地理位置（Location） be located in be situated in lie in,常用词语,1. 日本在中国的东方。 2. 这房子朝南。 3.新教学坐落在学校的中央。,翻译,Japan is/lies to the east of China.,The house

2、faces (to) the south.,The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.,4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。,China, located/ lying in the east of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world.,2.介绍人口（Population）:,has a population of, （a city） with a population of,Beijing, the capital of China, is a la

3、rge city with a population of over 12,000,000.,北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）,Australia has a population of about 20 million.,澳大利亚 人口 2，000万,中国 发展中国家 人口 13.5 亿,China is a developing country with a population of 1.35 billion.,China is a developing country, _ (人口)1300 million.,China is a developing

4、country, _ (人口)1300 million.,China is a developing country, _ (人口)1300 million.,China is a developing country, _ (人口)1300 million.,3.介绍面积（Area）,has/covers an area ofsquare kilometers （a city） with an area ofsquare kilometers,城镇 面积 100多平方公里,Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers,4.介绍历史

5、（History）:,has a long history (of years) with a long history (of years),历史悠久,中国有5000 多年的历史。,China has a history of more than 5000 years.,它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。,It is a modern city with a long history.,5.介绍交通（Transportation）,take a bus, a train or a plane to go to by bus/train/plane,坐汽车、火车、飞机到,交通便利 has co

6、nvenient transportation （a city） with convenient transportation both on land and water,随着经济的发展 经济迅速发展 economy has been developing rapidly,6、介绍经济（economy）,With the development of economy,7. 名胜古迹,有很多名胜古迹： places of interest/ historical spots,承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是44个风景名胜之一。 Chengde City is not only one o

7、f the well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also one of the 44 major scenic spots in China.,xxx, known as ,attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.,Hongkong , known as “a Pearl of the East”, attracts a lot of tourists from all over the world.,香港，被誉为“东方之珠”，每年都吸引大量来自世界各地的游客。,b

8、e famous/well-known for its/as a ,以/作为而出名,杭州以美丽的西湖出名。,Hangzhou is famous for beautiful West Lake.,著名旅游景点之一 _ 吸引许多外国游客 _,one of the famous scenic spots; one of the famous places of interest; one of the famous tourist attractions,attract many foreign visitors,Now lets try!,能力提高 1. 请根据中文提示, 完成有关地点介绍的语汇

9、积累。 (1) 位于 _ (2) 靠近 _ _,next to / close to, in the neighborhood of, neighboring.,be located /situated in；lie(s)in,I would like to introduce my hometown to you. 我向你介绍一下我的家乡。 My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province. 我的家乡, 毗邻香港, 位于广东省。,(3)有(多少)人口 _ (4)有(多久)历史 _,It has a pop

10、ulation of . ; With a population of ., sth. .; The population has reached.,It has a history of .; With a history of .，,(5) 占(多大)面积 _ _ (6) 表达“容量” The hotel _(拥有)120 rooms; The building can _(容纳)5000 people.,cover an area of .(square kilometers / square meters),possesses,hold,(8) 著名景点 a place of_, a

11、historical _, a scenic spot (9) 表达“吸引、著名” sth. _sb.; sth. be_ (形容词); be famous _(因而著名); be famous _(作为而著名),as,interest,attraction,attract,attractive / wonderful,for,title if necessary(标题） tense and voice （时态和语态） person （人称） the important points （要点要全）,1.How to analyze the directions (审题)?,一般现在,第三人称,

12、1.中国第三大城市；别称：花城；广东省省会，政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心。,The third largest city City of Flowers the capital city the centre of,Guangzhou，the third largest city in China，also known as City of Flowers，serves as the capital city of Guangdong Province and the centre of its political，economic，scientific，educational，and c

13、ultural life.,Step2: List the important points out如何列要点,2.全市面积7 434.4平方公里；人口1 100多万。,It covers an area of 7 434.4 square kilometres. It has a population of 11 million,It covers an area of 7 434.4 square kilometres and has a populationof 11 million,先写成简单句：,如何连接简单句？,3.地理：广东省中部；气候温暖湿润。,Guangzhou is loc

14、ated in the middle of Guangdong Province Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate.,It,4.历史: 2 200多年历史的名城，历史上海上丝绸之路的始发港。,it is a famous city with a history of more than 2,200 years and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road.,5.旅游:风光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。,It has beautiful scenery. Guangzhou is rich in traveling

15、 resources.,With its beautiful scenery，Guangzhou is also rich in traveling resources.,Guangzhou，the third largest city in China，also known as City of Flowers，serves as the capital city of Guangdong Province and the centre of its political，economic，scientific，educational，and cultural life. Covering a

16、n area of 7,434.4 square kilometres，it is home to more than 11 million people. Located in the middle of Guangdong，Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. Besides，it is a famous city with a history of more than 2,200 years and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery，Gua

17、ngzhou is also rich in traveling resources.,如何连句成篇？,Lets share!,南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖 Antarctica, is the coldest continent in the world. Antarctica, is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.,1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达,which is covered with cold,thick ice and deep snow all（the) year round,the coldest continent in the world,* 语法，句法高分tips,夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来就很大。 It hardly ever rain in summer _it rains heavily.,2.运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表结构,我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港 My hometown,_ is located in Guangdong Province