郭-如何写好段落主题句.ppt

1、,如何写好段落主题句三水中学 郭春霞,Teaching aims(教学目标):,掌握根据不同的写作要点写段落主题句的技巧。,高考的读写任务的 “发表看法”部分，通常是三个要点，建议将三个要点依次设为_段，每段写一个_句，放在段首，然后再围绕主题句进行展开。这样可使写作内容一目了然，既可避免写作时出现走题或偏题，又方便改卷老师落实要点是否齐全。 写主题句的主要方法有：,三,主题,1、直接回答。 对含有特殊问句性质的要点，问什么答什么。 如:(1) 假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？（2009广东） (2) 你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。（2007汕头一模） (3)如何解决这个问题(

2、当下年轻人缺乏独立性)。,If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me.,As far as I am concerned, a good teacher should possess the following qualities.,As far as I am concerned, in order to solve this problem, there are some suggestions that we should kee

3、p in mind.,(4) 怎样才能更好地与同学沟通？,Some simple but effective measures can be adopted to help communicate with our classmates better.,(5) 如何增强自己的信心？,Here are some workable measures to strengthen our confidence.,Here are some workable suggestions which can help to strengthen our confidence.,2、肯否分明。 对带有一般问句性

4、质，要求考生作出肯定或否定回答的要点，考生要明确表示支持还是反对、赞同还是不赞同、该还是不该等，或表明会不会做某事。 如:（1）你是否赞成（熄灯一小时活动）这种做法并说明理由；（2011深圳二模要点（1） （2）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。（2009广东）,I am strongly for this activity, which is really meaningful and helpful. (赞成),I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned. (应该),(3) 你认为是否应该帮助陌生人？,I am st

5、rongly convinced that helping strangers is necessary because it feels great when you offer or are offered help.,3、直接翻译。 对不含提问性质的要点，一般将其译成英语即可。必要时，可增加关联词。如： （1）其它督促学生认真学习的办法。（2011佛山一模） （2）中学生活和大学生活的差别。（2008广东）,However, there are other ways to make students work hard.,From my point of view, college li

6、fe will be different from the life in high school.,4、表明看法。 对“你对的看法/态度”之类的写作要点，考生可用_, _, _等开头，直接表明自己的看法。如： (1) 你对留堂制度(detention)的看法(2011佛山一模) (2) 我对大学扩招的看法。（2011汕头一模）,In my opinion, detention has its advantages in educating misbehaved students.,In my point of view, this tendency should be continued,

7、as we need more capable people to contribute to the fast-growing economy.,In my opinion / point of view,Personally, I think,As far as Im concerned,5、说明重要性。 对“谈谈的重要性/必要性/意义”就直接说“很重要/很有必要/有重要意义”。如： (1) 谈谈耐心的重要性。 (2) 建设绿色校园的重要性。（2011汕头一模） (3) 责任心的重要性 (4) 独立的重要性,It is true that patience plays an importa

8、nt part in our study and work.,It is of great importance / significance to build a green campus.,There is no doubt that responsibility is essential to us.,It goes without saying that it is necessary for us to be independent.,6、引出经历。 对 “请讲述你自己或身边朋友的经历”，可用以下句式引出。 (1) This article / passage reminds me

9、of ones experience + 时间. (2) The experience / story of sb. reminds me of sb. who / whose (3) It suddenly occurred to me that I once had an unforgettable experience of doing (4) I couldnt help thinking about one of my experiences that 如：(1)你或你同学的留堂经历；（2011佛山一模）,This passage / article reminds me of my

10、 friend Li Huas experience in primary school.,(3) 描述你经历过的让你改变生活态度的人和事；,The story reminds me of my friend, John, who used to complain a lot whenever something unpleasant happened to him.,(4) 分享你的一次因耐心而收获成功的经历；,I couldnt help thinking about one of my experiences that I achieved success because of my p

11、atience.,The story of Abraham Lincoln reminds me of a friend of mine whose dream was to speak fluent English.,(2)列举自己或身边朋友克服困难、梦想成真的一件事例.,(5) 请你描述你或你朋友经历过的一次灾难；,I _ a similar experience when I was trapped in a terrible earthquake. It _ I had an unforgettable experience when I was once caught in a fi

12、re.,couldnt help thinking about,suddenly occurred to me that,7、谈谈感受。 对 “谈谈你读完的感受”，可用以下句式引出： Having read the experience of I am deeply moved and motivated by sb. who, teaching me Knowing the story of sb. who , I was deeply moved because,表示心情感受的词有：,失望的 羞愧的 印象深刻的 受启发/鼓舞的 遗憾的 悲伤的/伤心的,disappointed ashame

13、d impressed inspired regretful sorrowful,1、具体回答。 对含有特殊问句性质的要点，问什么答什么。 2、肯否明确。 对带有一般问句性质，要求考生作出肯定或否定回答的要点，考生要明确表示支持还是反对、赞同还是不赞同、该还是不该等，或表明会不会做某事。 3、直接翻译。 对不含提问性质的要点，一般将其译成英语即可。必要时，可增加关联词。,段落主题句的模式,4、表明看法。 对“你对的看法/态度”之类的写作要点，考生可用in my opinion，as far as I am concerned等开头，直接表明自己的看法。 5、说明重要性。 对“谈谈的重要性/必要

14、性/意义”就直接说“很重要/很有必要/有重要意义”。 6、引出经历。 对 “请讲述你自己或身边朋友的经历”，可用句式“This reminds me of ones experience +时间”引出。 7、谈谈感受。 The article reminds me of (P182),(1)以“Dream And Success”为主题，写一篇120字左右的短文，要点包括： 1)阅读文章(林肯虽经多次失败不放弃梦想)给你的感悟；,Having read the article, I am deeply moved and motivated by Lincoln, who set a good

15、 example to me, teaching me the relationship between dream and success.,(2)得知菊萍救婴事迹后的感受；,Knowing the story of Wu Juping who has been praised as “the most beautiful mother” by the netizens, I was deeply moved because she was not only brave but also kind-hearted.,(3) 你读完Frolence Chadwick故事的感受；,参考写法-读完

16、Frolence的故事后，我意识到了目标对成功的重要性。,Having read the story of Frolence, I realize the importance of a goal in ones success.,After reading the story, I realize that the goal is of great significance to our study and life.,Jane was annoyed because her friend Mary interrupted her by chatting on line and playin

17、g music loudly while she was reviewing lessons, which made her wonder whether she should continue their friendship or not. (34),2012深圳一模,超级仿写：,超级仿写： (1) 你对Mary行为的看法，并说明理由； (2) 假如你是Jane，你会如何处理这件事； (3) 以你的经历谈谈你和朋友相处的体会。,In my opinion, what Mary did is too much for anyone in the world to bear.,If I wer

18、e Jane, I would find time to have a face-to-face talk with Mary.,The article reminds me of my experience of living in the school.,Once in my dormitory, there was a boy who acted like Mary too.,（发表看法）,（直接回答）,（引出经历）,超级仿写： 以约120词就“朋友和家人”进行议论，内容包括: (1)朋友、家人在人们生活中的重要性;(说明重要性) (2)朋友、家人能给你带来什么；(具体回答) (3)应该如何与朋友、家人保持良好的关系。（具体回答）,It is true that family and friends pla