How to improve your writing.ppt

1、How to improve your writing,一描写一个人（朋友，父母，老师等） 1. Miss Li is our class teacher/my friend. 李老师是我们的班主任/我的朋友。 2. She is about 30 years old. 她大概30岁了。 3. She was born in Shanghai in 1989.她1989年出身在上海。 4. She is good at English/basketball / swimming。 我擅长于 英语/篮球/游泳 5. My parents work very hard. 我的父母非常努力工作。 6

2、. They are friendly to me. 他们对我很友好。 7. We often play together. 我们经常一起玩耍。,8. I think she is not only my good teacher, but also my friend. 我认为她不仅是我的好老师，也是我的朋友。 9. Although he is not clever, he studies very hard. 尽管他不聪明，他学习很努力。 10. He is one of the tallest students in our class. 他是我们班最高的学生之一。 11We ofte

3、n help each other and learn from each other. 我们常常互相帮助互相学习。 12With the help of teachers and my friends, I have made great progress. 在老师和我朋友的帮助下， 我已经取得了很大的进步。 13In a word , I like her/him very much. 总而言之，我非常喜欢她/他,二描写个人的兴趣，爱好等。,I like reading different kinds of books. 我喜欢看不同种类的书。 I think books are my g

4、ood friends. 我认为书是我的好朋友。 I often spend my money on books. 我常常化钱买书 I like swimming very much. 我非常喜欢游泳。 We can learn a lot from it/them。 我们从中能够学到很多。 It makes me healthy/happy. 它使我健康/欢乐 I can get not only much knowledge but also a lot of fun from it/them.我不仅能从中得到很多知识而且很多乐趣。,三 描写我的愿望或者有关学英语的重要性。,1.My dr

5、eam is to be a teacher . 我的梦想是成为一个老师 2.I am good at English/basketball / swimming。 我擅长于英语/篮球/游泳 3.English will become more and more important。英语将变得越来越重要 4.It is important to learn English well. 学好英语是重要的。 5.English is so useful that we must learn it well.英语是如此的重要以至我们必须学好它 6.We should work hard in ord

6、er to find a good job in the future. 我们应该努力学习为了在将来找到一份好工作。 7.I often spend much time reading English every day. 我常常花费很多时间每天读英语。,8I am sure I will have a bright future if I try my best to study hard. 假如我尽我最大努力认真学习，我相信我将有灿烂的未来。 9knowledge is power. If a person hasnt much knowledge, it is impossible fo

7、r him to find a good job. 知识就是力量。 假如一个人没有很多知识，对他来说找一份好工作是不可能的。 10.I believe that hard work will bring me success. 我相信艰苦的学习（劳动）将给我带来成功。,四描写我的家乡上海或介绍上海。,1.There are a lot of big shops and busy streets in Shanghai. 在上海有许多大商店和繁忙的街道。 2.There are many people there. 在那里有很多人。 3. As we all know ，Shanghai is

8、famous for the Bund. 上海以外滩而闻名 4.We are proud of Shanghai/him. 我们以上海/他而感到自豪 5.I think Shanghai will become more and more beautiful in the future. 我认为上海将变的越来越美丽。,五描写物或者景,1. There are two classroom buildings in our school. 在我们学校有两幢教学楼。 2. Its very large and beautiful. 它非常大和美丽。 3. We can see green trees

9、 and nice flowers everywhere. 我们能够到处看到绿树和鲜花。 4.My school life is full of fun. 我的学校生活充满着乐趣。 5. My favorite animals are dogs.我最喜欢的动物是狗 6.They can help us in many ways.它们在许多方面能帮助我们。,六“过去发生的事情”一类作文的写法：或者一次去.的旅行。,1It was fine last Sunday. 上星期天天气很好。 2 I went to LuXun park with my parents last Sunday. 上星期天

10、我去了鲁迅公园。 3.We went there by bus. 我们坐车去哪儿 4.There are many interesting places in Beijing. 在北京有很多有趣的地方 5.We visited the Great Wall. 我们参观了长城。 6.The Great Wall is very nice. 长城非常好。 7We took a lot of nice pictures. 我们拍了很多好看的照片。 8After that, we bought a lot of interesting books in the shop. 那以后，我们买了很多有趣的书

11、在书店。,9. We held a class meeting/（sports meet） in our classroom last Friday.我们上星期五在我们的教室开了一个班会/运动会。 10. We sang and danced together. 我们在一起唱歌和跳舞。 11. I entered for the high jump. 我报名参加了跳高。 12. We played basketball after school yesterday. 我们昨天放学后打篮球。 13. I planted a lot of trees last Sunday. 上星期天我种植了很多

12、树. After that, we watered the trees. 那以后我们给树浇了水. Trees can make air clan. 树能够使空气干净. 14. I helped my grandma to clean the house. 我帮助我的奶奶打扫房子. 15I had to go over my English lessons at home. 我不得不在家里复习我的英语功课。 16. I didnt go to bed until I finished my homework last night. 我一直没有上床睡觉直到我昨天完成我的家庭作业。 17In a w

13、ord, we had a good time. 总而言之，我们玩的很愉快。,七“将来发生的一件事情” 一类作文的写法。,1I will go to LuXun park with my parents next Sunday. 下星期天我要去鲁迅公园。 2. We will go there by bus. 我们将坐车去哪儿. 3We will visit the Great Wall. 我们将参观长城。 （把上面过去时态的句子转换成一般将来时就可以） 八句与句间好的连词： First，（首先） After that ,（那以后） However, (然而) , Whats more,（而且

14、） on the other hand. finally, at last, In a word, （总而言之）,九 其他,1. I want to visit my uncle. 我想要看望我的叔叔。 2. Thank you for your letter. 谢谢你的来信 3. It is bad/good /for us. 它对我们有好处（坏处） 4. It is as important as air. 它和空气一样重要。 5. It is widely used in our life. 在我们的生活中它被广泛使用。 6I can know much more about the w

15、orld, and I can make more friends as well. 我能够了解更多世界，和交到更多的朋友。 7With the help of computers, we can keep in touch with the world. 在电脑的帮助下，我们能够和世界保持联系。,8I have a lot of homework to do ,so I have no time to play. 我有许多作业要做，所以我没有时间玩耍。 9. We should eat more vegetables and less meat in order to keep health

16、y. 我们应该吃更多的蔬菜和更少的肉为了保持健康。 10.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上无难事只要肯攀登。 11. If everyone can give his hand, There will be more flowers and sunlight in the world. 假如每个人能伸出一只手，世界上将会有更多的鲜花和阳光。,Skills of making a passage better,Learning to write beautiful sentences 正确构建简单句 恰当使用复合句(三个左右) 恰当

17、使用分词结构 长短句结合 尝试特殊句型(感叹句,倒装句等),英语范文,一A Visit to (Yu Garden / Nan pu bridge /birthday party) （写过去发生的事情或活动） Last Sunday, my parents and I visited Yu Garden. It was fine. We went there by bus. It took us one hour to get there. We saw many nice things. There were many people there. We took a lot of nice

18、pictures. Yu Garden is famous for its snack so we ate a lot of nice food. (Nanpu bridge is very famous in Shanghai ). YuGarden was so beautiful that we enjoyed it very much.,二 A plan of winter holidays（写将来的事情或计划）,Winter holidays will come. Many students are looking forward to it. I will visit a lot

19、of nice places with my parents. I will have time to watch cartoons. I will buy many interesting books in the shop. I will eat a lot of nice food. Of course, I will have to finish my homework. In a word, I will have a good time during the winter holidays.,三 Spring festival （写节日的文章）,Spring Festival is

20、 the most important festival in China. Before Spring Festival, people usually clean their houses .And they go to the supermarket to buy something .During Spring Festival , parents usually give lucky money to children. People often get together and have a big dineer. Some people eat dumplings for din

21、ner.,四 Pollution （写污染一类的文章）,There are three kinds of pollution: air pollution, water pollution and noise pollution. They are all harmful to peoples health. Today, pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do our best to fight it. We can plant more trees to make the air clean. Cars should use a new kind of fuel. Factories cant let out dirty water. In a word, we must protect our earth and make it more beautiful.,五Sports （写运动或奥运会一类的文章）,Everyone enjoys sports. If we want to keep healthy and happy and live longer, we must take an active part in sports. As