高中英语写作指导.ppt

1、Guidance on writing,Learning objectives:,After this lesson, you are expected to master the following writing skills to achieve the necessary effectiveness of your writing. 1. How to interpret the title 2. Using some advanced structures. 3. Using some proper connective words,高考考纲对书面表达的要求,Criteria and

2、 requirements for NMET .,第五档（很好）（2125分）：,覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。,审题,Logic（逻辑性）,Key words （信息词）,Key sentences (信息句）,Genre(体裁）,Person(人称）,Tense(时态）,请仔细观看左边漫画，结合 自己的实际生活，写一篇 关于“节能环保”的英语短文。,要求： 1 简要描述图中的现 象； 2 分析产生这种现象 的原因（如：没有良 好的习惯等）；

3、 3提出你的建议。 提示：图中在睡觉的是 小明，妇女是他的母亲,As can be seen in the picture, Late at mid- night, Xiao Ming_asleep with TV _, which always annoys his mother. And his mother enters, _ him for forgetting to turn TV off.,Task1:A model with some missing key words. Answers varies.,falls,on,complaining,Para.1,case,sense

4、 / awareness,Para.2,The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that we are wasting electricity and ignore the importance of saving _ resources. What is it that accounts for the _ above? Firstly, Lack of _ of saving Energy is a major cause, which, of course, leads to such a bad habit. Secondly, t

5、here being no strict laws to obey in society, the public will easily forget their duty.,energy,environmentally,Para.3,Therefore, if we intend to live an _ friendly life, we should make it our habit to turn off electrical equipment. In a word, what we should do is to _our environment through small th

6、ings in our daily life. Every tiny action counts.,protect,With the development of science, our earth is becoming dirtier than before, But many people have not realized the problem now.,To judge whether they can be used in the writing,illogical,The picture is talking about mother and the son. The son

7、 is sleeping and the mother is trying to turn off the TV.,Hearing the sound of “ZZZ”, Xiaomings mother came to the TV and shouted angrily, “ Why do you always forget to turn off TV!” But the reply from Xiaoming was just more “ZZZZZ.”,too simple,informal,Task2: Make a list of key sentences in the mod

8、el writing.,1. As can be seen in the picture, The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that.,2. What is it that accounts for the above case? Firstly, .Secondly,.,3. Therefore, if you intend to. In short, / In a word, what we should do is . Every tiny action counts.,be valuable,Task3: Lets imit

9、ate more key sentences!,1 Xiao Ming falls asleep with/ leaving TV on, which always annoys his mother.,模仿要点： with +n. +宾补,模仿1：Somebody is sleeping in the class now. His eyes are open. Somebody is sleeping in the class now, _.,with his eyes open,模仿2：,The pig is standing here, _.,with sunglasses on,2 h

10、is mother entered, complaining him for forgetting to turn TV off。,模仿要点：主句 + 现在分词（作状语）,模仿1：The children watched the game and stood for an hour. The children stood for an hour,_ the game.,watching,模仿2：,The baby jumps into the air, _ score a goal.,score a goal 进球,hoping to/ attempting to/ aiming to,模仿3

11、：男孩手拿一本书坐在桌边，正努力在 书中寻找如何解开粽子的方法。 The boy is sitting at the table _, _find how to _ zongzi.,模仿要点:with复合句，+ 现在分词（作状语）,with a book in his hand,trying to,unwrap,3 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that we are wasting electricity .,模仿要点：句型 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that

12、(同位语从句）,模仿1：这幅画试图让我们相信这样一个事实：很多年轻人正失去日常生活中的动手能力 The picture is trying to _ that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.,convince us of a fact,模仿2：老师想要让我们相信：通过努力我们可以成为最棒的学生。,The teacher is trying to convince us of a fact that we can be top students through hard wor

13、k/efforts.,4 What ( is it that) accounts for the case above?,模仿要点：强调句的特殊疑问句,模仿1：到底谁愿意借这么大一笔钱呢？,_ _ _ _is willing to lend you such a large sum of money?,Who is it that,模仿2：到底在哪儿你才能借到这么大一笔钱呢？,_ _ _ _ you can borrow such a large sum of money?,Where is it that,5 we should make it our habit to turn off e

14、lectrical equipment.,模仿要点:(feel. think, make, find, consider） itadj. / n. to do sth.,think it necessary feel it urgent .,make it a rule make it our duty make it a habit ,模仿1：我规定自己每天晚饭后散步,I make _ _ _to have a walk after supper every day.,it a rule,模仿2：我们有责任培养自我独立意识,We should make _ _ _to develop our

15、selves to be independent.,it our duty,Task4 How to use the proper connective words,1.你给了我许多帮助，也给了我许多鼓舞。总之，没有你我不能成功。 You gave me much help and encouragement. _ _ _, I couldnt have succeeded without you.,根据中文意思，将下列英文句子补充完整。,In a word,2.总的说来，你的回答不太令人满意。 _ _ _, your answer is not so satisfying.,All in a

16、ll,3.一般说来物理比数学难学得多。 , physics is much more difficult than mathematics. 4. 这辆自行车真的很漂亮，然而我没钱买。 This bike is really very beautiful. _, I have no money to buy it.,Nevertheless,Generally speaking,5.他首先去了法国，然后又去了美国。 First, he went to France; _ he went to America. 6.一开始他反对我的计划， 但最后他支持我的计划了。 At first he was

17、 against my plan, but _ _ _ he was for it.,then,in the end,二. 行文逻辑训练,阅读短文，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空。,first, whats worse/more, besides/ in addition, now, in my opinion, As far as Im concerned, in my view, from the point of my view.,_1_ many middle school students are fat and there are reasons for it. Some eat too

18、 much meat and too many snacks. Some sit too long but seldom exercise. Getting fat has quite a few disadvantages. _2_, being fat makes it difficult for one to walk or move as others.,Now,First,_3_, to be fat usually means to be weak, and it is easy for a fat person to suffer from many kinds of disea

19、ses. At the same time. A fat person gets tired easily, which decreases his study efficiency. _4_, to be fat is not a good thing for us middle students. We should try to eat less meat but more vegetables. _5_ we should try our best to take part in all kinds of sports. If so, we are sure to lose weigh

20、t and stay healthy.,Whats more,In my opinion,Besides,Lets practice,随着生活的不断现代化，很多年轻人逐渐失去了动手实践 的能力。仔细观察下图，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇 120-150词的英语短文，描述漫画内容，分析原因，提出 你的建议。(动手能力 hands-on ability),1. paragraph 1: to describe the picture paragraph 2: to analyze the reasons paragraph 3: to give your opinions 2. key words?

21、 3. key sentences?,Suggested drafting:,随着生活的不断现代化，很多年轻人逐渐失去 了动手实践的能力。仔细观察下图，结合自己 的生活实际，写一篇120-150词的英语短文， 描述漫画内容，分析原因，提出你的建议。 (动手能力 hands-on ability),Key Words & Phrases,interesting / ridiculous have no idea / be at a loss unwrap no chances/ opportunities over-protective : care too much independent p

22、ractice/ experience awareness on ones own hands-on ability,Key Words & Phrases,Can you use the sentence patterns to write the composition,1 with +n. +宾补,2 主句 + 现在分词（作状语） 3 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that.（同从） 4 what is it that? 5 we should make it our duty to,Key sentences:,6 so.

23、that. 7 What we should do is ,示例:,1 The boy is sitting at the table with a book in his hand, trying to find how to unwrap zongzi.,2 The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.,3 We should make it our duty to develop

24、ourselves to be independent. .,As can be seen in the picture, sit before a plate of zongzi, the boy is at a loss of how to open them and eventually turns to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing his basic hands-on ability in everyda

25、y life. What is it accounts for the interesting case above? Firstly, a lack of awareness of practice is a major cause, which, of course,Ten mistakes!,leads to such an embarrassed situation. Secondly, parents are such over-protective that their children had no chances to deal with problems independen

26、tly in daily life. However, if we intend to live an independent life, we should make it is our duty to explore things on our own. Meantime, what our parents should do is give us more chances to improve our basic skills through small things. Every tiny action counts.,As can be seen in the picture, sit before a plate of zongzi, the boy is at a loss of how to open them and eventually turns to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing his basic hands-on ability in everyday life.,si