2012三模文.ppt

1、2012届三模作文讲评,A survey shows about 61% of the teenagers have difficulty in dealing with interpersonal relationship. To account for this phenomenon, there exist two reasons, one of which bases on the fact that many students are from one-child families, who mostly have difficulty in getting along well w

2、ith others. The other reason is that most schools overemphasize the students grades and ignore the abiltiy of communication. To solve this problem, the teenagers can consult their psychological teachers at school and talk to their parents at home. Besides, they should take an active part in group or

3、 class activities so as to develop harmonious relations with the people around them.,审题：你是谁？你要做什么？ Edwin ; 写博客记录当天的事(开头，经过，结果)和发表感想 题目：你对父亲给你机会做决定 注意人称的转换，原文材料是从父亲角度写，但是题目的要求从儿子的角度写。 Summary： Today I asked my father whether I could play an online game which he had refused to allow before. Unexpected

4、ly, he let me make a decision. Finally, I made up my mind not to play that game.,第二段:大部分父母不让孩子做决定的原因 Many parents forbid us from making decisions as they think we are so young and naive that we will make wrong decisions which lead to serious mistakes.,第三段:给孩子作决定的权利有哪些益处 However, if we never have a c

5、hance to do that, how can we grow up? （说理）Even a mistake is a good teacher that can help us make better decisions. We will have the valuable opportunity to become independent, learn how to deal with problems, know the importance of considering matters carefully and own a sense of responsibility. All

6、 of these contribute a lot to our healthy growth.,第四段:你对父亲的感激 Thank you, father, for giving me the chance to make decisions by myself. It is the first time that I have realized that Im no longer a little boy but a man who must account for his own conduct.(对自己行为负责),一模大作make a plan 的好句：,例子引入： So impre

7、ssed did I feel after reading the story that I long to voice my opinion. The experience which happened to me can be in favor of my point of view. My experience can serve as a convincing example to prove it. This story reminds me of my experience, which can never escape from my memory.,说理： （ creative

8、 ideas） Because plans can make us think about what is right to do and give us a goal to struggle, which can avoid wasting our energy in the wrong direction. Its urgent and essential for us to make a plan before we do everything. If we can attach great importance to making a good plan, we can obtain huge benefit and achieve greater goal sooner or later.,With perseverance and efforts, I finally got a good academic achievement and reached my desired destination. Its obvious that making a plan c