WCET writing分析及辅导.ppt

1、Writing,CET 4,大学英语四级满分710分，其中写作占15%，满分为106分。 能在阅读难度与课文相仿的书面材料时做笔记、回答问题和写提纲，能就一定的话题或提纲在半小时内写出120-150词的短文，能写短信或便条，表达意思清楚，无重大语言错误。,测试基本点,大学英语四级作文主要考查: 1、学生组织英语语言的能力 2、和用英语表达思想的能力 对于语言知识点的测试，主要体现在 1、测试基本词汇运用能力 2、测试基本语法点 英语四级考试作文的评分依据是：文章切题，条理清楚语言准确和字数符合要求，四级作文的字数要求一般是不少于100字。,计分标准介绍：,大学英语四级的具体评分标准 2分条理不

2、清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 (注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。),1、基本形式 三段落式：按照题目提纲划分段落，提纲即是每段中心句。 四级作文考试就是主题提纲写作。 2、评分标准及注意事项 切题：围绕该段所给的中心句（

3、提纲）来写相关内容。 语言：（后面环节详解）。 连贯：运用列举法，使段落结构清晰；要避免使用一些过于熟悉的词汇和短语；参考星火范文。 3、备考策略 备考目标：由句到段才是四、六级考查的核心问题，由段中心拓展出分中心。 拓展手段：运用列举分类、细节说明、比较对照、正反论证等手段，具体可以参看别人的范文。 4、临场写作技巧：黄金三原则 翻译提纲句作为中心句，放在段首；确定主体段落，主体段落要列举和分类，并运用连接词；加入醒目、吸引评卷人眼球的细节信息，句子要正确、出彩,2013年12月四级作文1,作文一： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to w

4、rite a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 wor

5、ds.,“Dear Andy-How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat, Love, Mom and Dad.”,作文2,For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a sh

6、ort essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,“Once I learn how to use

7、Google, isnt that all the education I really need?”,作文3,For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and explain the consequence of overusing it.

8、 You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.,社会现象题模版1描述现象：段首句+现状+定性2之分析原因(题中出现解释原因或因素要求)：段首句+for one thing,国家角度. for another,个人角度之分析影响(题中出现说明危害或意义要求)：段首句+for one thing,国家角度. for

9、another,个人角度3建议：段首句+firstly, 国家建议. Secondly, 个人建议文章模板Recently it is widely accepted that / Currently wherever you go, you will hardly fail to find that A is becoming increasingly popular. 现象现状. It brings benefits to us(积极现象)/it does great harm to us(消极现象)/ is a delicate problem worth of discussion(客

10、观现象)中间段选择一(原因段)There are several reasons accounting for it. for one thing,国家角度原因. for another,个人角度中间段选择二(影响段)The phenomenon results in the following consequences. for one thing,国家角度原因. for another,个人角度It is urgent/imperative/necessary that attention should be paid to the issue to do sth./ There is n

11、o denying that the tendency analyzed above will continue in the near future. firstly, 国家建议. Secondly, 个人建议. With proper laws and alert public, it will become a past as a matter of time.( 消极现象)/ With proper laws and alert public, it will be carried on in a good way. (积极或客观现象),For this part, you are a

12、llowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words bu

13、t no more than 180 words.,“Dear Andy-How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat, Love, Mom and Dad.”,Due to the wide use of computers and

14、the development of Internet, more and more people like to chat on the Internet. We tend to pay more attention to electronic communication than to face-to-face contact. As electronic communication is not limited by space, we can chat with others where there is Internet with our tools such as computer

15、s, mobile phones and pads. However, when we chat with others online, we cannot express our feelings fully. Just as the picture shows, the parents cannot touch or hug their child. We know that body language plays an important role in our communication, but the electronic communication cannot do this.

16、 For example, when we are sad, we need more love and warmth, a real hug from our parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic communication. Therefore, though electronic communication brings convenience to our life, I still dont think the electronic communication ca

17、n replace face-to-face contact.,一、 正反题模版1支持及理由：段首句+优点一. What is more, 优点二2反对及理由：段首句+对应理由一. Furthermore, 对应理由二3个人看法之中庸法：段首句+ on the one hand,看法一. on the other hand看法二个人看法之一边倒：段首句+First of all, 看法一.Next, 看法二文章模版When asked about., most people believe that ., but others regard it as .优点一. what is more,

18、优点二But others may not agree, they maintain that/ As opposed to all the points mentioned above, others argue that . 对应理由一. Furthermore, 对应理由二结尾段选择一(中庸法)Just as a sward has two blades, its advantages co-exsit with its disadvantages./ Obviously it has more than one face. We should preserve sth. While a

19、t the same time making it qualified. on the one hand,看法一. on the other hand看法二结尾段选择二(一边倒)For the reasons presented above, it is not difficult to get the conclusion that / On the whole, if we take a careful consideration, it is safely to draw the conclusion that,三、 图表题1描述数据变化2分析原因段首句+for one thing,国家

20、角度. for another,个人角度3(积极或消极现象)建议：段首句+firstly, 国家建议. Secondly, 个人建议(客观现象)个人看法：段首句+ on the one hand,看法一. on the other hand看法二文章模板According to the figures in the chart, increased dramatically, which revealed that.There are several reasons accounting for it. for one thing,国家角度原因. for another,个人角度选择一(建议)

21、参见社会现象题3选择二(个人看法)参见正反题3,图表题开头段常用10大句型,1.从1991年起，出国留学的中国学生大幅度增加，一直到2002年逐渐趋于稳定，之后有所减少。Since 1991, the number of Chinese students going abroad increased dramatically.It reached the plateau in 2002, then was on the decline afterwards. 2. 南京大学的论文发表数量高居榜首，清华大学和复旦大学分别是第二和第三。With regard to the number of ac

22、ademic essays published, Nanking University topped the list, with Qinghua and Fudan University respectively ranking the secondand the third.3. 2002年，考研的人数大幅度增加，远远超过了50万人，几乎是1999年的两倍。2002 saw a sharp increase in the number of NETEM test-takers which wasfar beyond half a million and was approximately

23、twice as many as that in 1999.4. 上海的GDP一直保持在10%以上。The GDP (General Development Product) of Shanghai remains higher than 10%.5. 中文系，浙江的学生占了45%，比安徽的学生多了整整10%。At Chinese Department, the students from Zhejiang account for 45%,precisely 10% more than those from Anhui.,6. 由于残酷的市场竞争，2002年这种汽车的销售量降到了低谷。 On account of/Owing to the cruel market competition, in 2002,