专题8 第34课时 (半)开放作文精品课件 大纲人教版(.ppt

1、,专,题,书面表达,第34课时 (半) 开放作文,八,(2011湖北卷) 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。 Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.,注

2、意： 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例； 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为100左右。,标杆作文,Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didnt realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I

3、did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and had everyone do their part in class

4、.,It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and makes my work more efficient.,(半)开放作文是一种比传统的“书面表达”限制更少，留给考生自由发挥空间更多的书面表达题型。这样的考试模式注重突出语言的应用、突出在语境中对学生语言能力的考查。与传统的“书面表达”相比，这种“开放作文”对学生构思、表达、写作以及语句的组织应用能力有了更高的要求。它要求考生在写开放作文时，要注意审题，尽可能做到内容充实、逻辑清晰、表达得体、语言准确。这样的考试模式能让考生发挥出自己的

5、特长，有利于高校选拔优秀学生。,对于(半)开放作文，同学们写作时要注意以下事项。 1. 认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态； 2. 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应； 3. 注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者意识； 4. 要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑； 5. 要有主次之分，详略得当； 6. 要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑； 7. 要做到思想健康，积极向上。,一、提供建议型 Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to 书信主题. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is impor

6、tant to第一件应该做的事情， as youll be able to 手段. Then, it also helps to第二件应该做的事情. Besides, it should be a good idea to第三件应该做的事情. You can also第四件要做的事情. 这样做的好处 Best wishes.,二、释疑解惑型 As a 作者身份， I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers/students. However, 作者的基本看法或观点.

7、Here are a few suggestions. First, 第一个建议. 这样做的理由 Second, 第二个建议. 这样做的理由 Hope you get better soon and make great progress.,三、主题演讲型 Ladies and gentlemen， Today I will talk about 演讲主题. As you know, there are many advantages of 演讲主题 First of all, 分要点一. 展开一句或两句. Besides, 分要点二. 展开一句或两句. Last but not least, 分要点三. 展开一句或两句 In a word (In my opinion/Personally), 重申主题/总结主题.,四、阐述谚语/名言型 A famous saying goes that名言或谚语， which reminds us that释义. Indeed, we can learn many things from it