高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文课件定稿

高考新题型之概要写作Summary

WritingWhat

is

a

summary?A

summaryisa

brief

statement

thatgives

only

the

main

points

of

sth,not

thedetails(牛津高阶英汉双解词典)How

much

do

you

know

aboutsummary

writing?《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数少于40的和多余80的，从总分中减去2分《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：理解准确，涵盖全部要点；能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；完全使用自己的语言；有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。complete(内容完整)coherent(衔接连贯)correct(语言正确)评分原则concise(用词简洁)60词左右complete

correct

coherent

concise高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿“4C”principle(“4C”原则)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿How

to

write

a

good

summary?1.ReadPolishRevise高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿——structure,

key

points2.Paraphrase

——rewrite

in

your

own

words——make

itcoherent——spelling、grammar、vocabulary、words、punctuation（标点）高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿概要写作（满分25分）高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para

1

)These

days

our

society

develops

rapidlyand

forces

people

to

rush.

It

appears

that

peoplehave

got

used

to

being

in

a

hurry.

However,

it'sbetter

for

people

to

take

their

time

and

live

their

lifeat

a

slower

pace

than

to

hurry

to

get

things

done.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

2

)The

main

reason

that

convinces

us

to

opposedoing

work

in

a

hurry

is

the

possibility

of

making

mistakes

ina

rush.

When

people

do

their

jobs

or

take

action

in

ahurry,they

can't

make

a

sound

decision

and

probably

regret

later.As

the

saying

goes,“Haste

makes

waste.”

We

shouldthinkcarefully

before

making

a

decision

and

do

our

work

lessquickly.

We

should

not

make

mistakes

by

doing

workhurriedly.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

3

)Slowing

down

the

pace

of

life

helps

peopleenjoytheir

life

better.

For

example,

taking

a

train

to

some

placecertainly

will

take

more

time

than

taking

a

plane.However,taking

a

train

makes

people

have

enough

time

to

get

to

knowa

lot

of

new

friends.

Besides,

it

allows

people

to

fully

enjoythe

beautiful

scenery

along

the

way.

On

the

contrary,

being

ina

hurry

will

make

us

lose

chances

of

enjoying

our

lives.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

4

)Finally,

slower

life

pace

provides

betterhealthconditions

for

us.

As

is

known

to

all,

taking

action

in

ahurrybothers

people

and

raises

their

stress.

People

think

if

they

arenot

in

a

hurry,

they

will

become

a

loser

and

that

annoys

them.But

being

in

a

hurry

can

hurt

people

both

physically

andmentally.

According

to

some

studies,

people

who

have

aslower

pace

suffer

fewer

diseases,

tend

to

be

happier

and

livemuch

longer

than

those

whose

life

is

tense,

even

if

theformerfinish

jobs

more

slowly

than

thelatter.(Para

5

)In

short,

working

quickly

will

bring

about

morematerial

benefits

to

make

our

society

more

advanced.

Yet,much

stress

can't

bring

enjoyment,

friends

and

health,whichare

much

more

important

than

money

and

other

materialadvantages.

Therefore,

take

your

time

and

live

your

life

at

aslower

pace.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

1:

Read①read

for

structureSkim

the

passage

and

answer

the

following

questions.Q1:Is

it

the

passage

a(an)A.narration(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)Q2:How

many

parts

can

the

passage

be

divided

into?B.4(para1;para2--3;para4--5)C.2(para1;para2--5)√C.argumentation(议论文)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿√A.3(para1;para2--4;para5)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

1:

ReadArgumentation高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(议论文）Topic:

Para1Supporting

ideas:

Para2--Para4Conclusion:

Para5高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

1:

Read②

read

for

keypointsUnderline

the

topic

sentence

or

key

points

of

eachparagraphfocus

on

the

first

sentence

and

payspecial

attention

to

such

wordsas:however,

on

the

contrary,but,

yet,

therefore高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

1

)These

days

our

society

develops

rapidlyand

forces

people

to

rush.

It

appears

that

people

havegot

used

to

being

in

a

hurry.

However,

it's

better

forpeople

to

take

their

time

and

live

their

life

at

a

slower

pace

than

to

hurry

to

get

things

done.

Step

1:

Read(for

key

points)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

1:

Read(for

key

points)(Para

2

)The

main

reason

that

convinces

us

to

oppose

doing

work

in

a

hurry

is

the

possibility

of

makingmistakesin

a

rush.

When

people

do

their

jobs

or

takeaction

in

a

hurry,

they

can't

make

a

sounddecisionand

probably

regret

later.

As

the

saying

goes,

“Hastemakes

waste.”

We

should

think

carefully

beforemaking

a

decision

and

do

our

work

less

quickly.

Weshould

not

make

mistakes

by

doing

work

hurriedly.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

1:

Read(for

key

points)(Para

3

)Slowing

down

the

pace

of

life

helps

people

enjoy

their

life

better.

For

example,

taking

a

train

tosome

place

certainly

will

take

more

time

than

taking

aplane.

However,

taking

a

train

makes

people

haveenough

time

to

get

to

know

a

lot

of

new

friends.Besides,

it

allows

people

to

fully

enjoy

the

beautifulscenery

along

the

way.

On

the

contrary,

being

in

ahurry

will

make

us

lose

chances

of

enjoying

our

lives.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

1:

Read(for

key

points)(Para

4

)Finally,

slower

life

pace

provides

better

health

conditions

for

us.

As

is

known

to

all,

takingaction

in

a

hurry

bothers

people

and

raises

theirstress.People

think

if

they

are

not

in

a

hurry,

they

willbecome

a

loser

and

that

annoys

them.

But

being

in

ahurry

can

hurt

people

both

physically

and

mentally.According

to

some

studies,

people

who

have

a

slowerpace

suffer

fewer

diseases,

tend

to

be

happier

and

livemuch

longer

than

those

whose

life

is

tense,

even

if

theformer

finish

jobs

more

slowly

than

thelatter.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

1:

Read(for

key

points)(Para

5

)In

short,

working

quickly

will

bringaboutmore

material

benefits

to

make

our

society

moreadvanced.

Yet,

much

stress

can't

bring

enjoyment,friends

and

health,

which

are

much

more

importantthan

money

and

other

material

advantages.

Therefore,take

your

time

and

live

your

life

at

a

slower

pace.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿①

It

appears

that

people

have

got

used

to

being

in

ahurry.However,

it's

better

for

people

to

take

their

time

and

live

theirlife

at

a

slower

pacethan

to

hurry

to

get

things

done.got

accustomed

tolive

a

slower

life策略2：简化句子▲

Although

people

have

got

accustomed

to

being

in

ahurry,

it's

better

to

live

a

slower

life.策略3：句型转换▲

Although

people

have

got

accustomed

to

being

in

ahurry,

leading

a

slower

life

is

better.Step

2:

Paraphrase策略1：同义转换高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿②

The

main

reason

that

convinces

us

to

opposedoingwork

in

a

hurry

is

the

possibility

of

making

mistakes

inStep

2:

Paraphrase高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿a

rush.slowdown▲The

main

reason

for

slowing

down

is

to

reducethe

chance

of

committing

errors.chance committing

errors高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

2:

ParaphraseA

slow

pace

of

lifeopportunities

to

enjoy

life③

Slowing

down

the

pace

of

life

helps

peopleenjoy

their

life

better.On

the

contrary,

being

in

ahurry

will

make

us

lose

chances

of

enjoying

ourlives.opportunities▲

More

opportunities

to

enjoy

life

are

allowedby

a

slower

pace

of

life.策略6：语态转换策略4：反义转换slowing

down

win/get/have策略5：合并句子▲

A

slower

pace

of

life

allows

people

to

have

more高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Some

strategies

to

use

to

paraphrase策略1：同义转换策略4：句型转换策略2：反义转换策略5：简化句子策略6：合并句子words(单词层面)sentences(句子层面)策略3：语态转换高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

2:

Paraphrase高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿offers④Finally,

slower

life

pace

provides

better

healthconditions

for

us.

But

being

in

a

hurry

can

hurtpeopleboth

physically

and

mentally.

slowing

down

can

helppsychologically▲

Finally,better

health

condition

physically

andpsychologically

is

offered

by

a

slower

life

pace.▲

Finally,better

health

condition

physically

andpsychologically

is

what

a

slower

life

pace

offers.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

2:

Paraphrase高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿⑤Therefore,

take

your

time

and

live

your

life

at

aslower

pace.Therefore,

let's

take

a

slower

life

from

now

on高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

3:

Polish

—make

it

coherent

byadding

someconnectives高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：for

example/such

as对比：on

the

contrary,

bycontrast结论：in

short,inconclusion高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿①Althogh

people

have

got

accustomed

to

being

in

ahurry,

leading

a

slower

life

is

better.②

The

main

reason

for

slowing

down

is

to

reduce

the高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿chance

of

committing

errors.Firstly,Secondlyly,③

More

opportunities

to

enjoy

life

are

allowedbya

slower

pace

of

life.④Finally,better

health

condition

physically

andpsychologically

is

what

a

slower

life

pace

offers.⑤Therefore,

let's

take

a

slower

life

from

now

onStep

3:

Polish

—make

it

coherent

byadding

someconnectives高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Despite

being

accustomed

to

being

in

a

hurry,peopleare

recommended

to

lead

a

slower

life.(要点

1)Firstly,slowing

down

reduces

the

chance

ofcommitting

errors.(要点2)Secondly,Moreopportunities

to

enjoy

life

are

allowedby

a

slowerpace

of

life.(要点3)Finally,better

health

conditionphysically

and

psychologically

is

also

what

a

slowerlife

paceoffers.(要点4)Therefore,let's

take

aslowerlife

from

now

on(要点5)(63w)Step

4:

Revise高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿4

“C”

:

complete,

concisecoherent,

correct高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para

1

)Getting

rid

of

dirt,

in

the

opinion

ofmost

people,

is

a

good

thing.However,

thereis

nothing

fixed

about

attitudes

to

dirt.Time

for

practice高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

2

)In

the

early

16th

century,

people

thought

that

dirt

on

the

skin高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿was

a

means

to

block

out

disease,

as

medical

opinion

had

it

that

washingoff

dirt

with

hot

water

could

open

up

the

skin

and

let

ills

in.

Aparticulardanger

was

thought

to

lie

in

public

baths.

By

1538,

the

French

king

hadclosed

the

bath

houses

in

his

kingdom.

So

did

the

king

of

England

in1546.

Thus

began

a

long

time

when

the

rich

and

the

poor

in

Europelivedwith

dirt

in

a

friendly

way.

Henry

IV,

King

of

France,

wasfamouslydirty.

Upon

learning

that

a

nobleman

had

taken

a

bath,

the

king

orderedthat,

to

avoid

the

attack

of

disease,

the

nobleman

should

not

go

out.(Para

3)Though

the

belief

in

the

of

dirt

was

long-lived,

dirt

has

nolonger

been

regarded

as

a

nice

neighbor

ever

since

the

18th

century.Scientifically

speaking,

cleaning

away

dirt

is

good

to

health.

Clean

watersupply

and

hand

washing

are

practical

means

of

preventing

disease.

Yet,it

seems

that

standards

of

cleanliness

have

moved

beyond

science

sinceWorld

War

Ⅱ.

Advertisements

repeatedly

sell

the

idea;

clothes

need

to

bewhiter

than

white,

cloths

ever

softer,

surfaces

to

shine.

Has

the

hate

fordirt,

however,

gone

too

far?(Para

4)Attitudes

to

dirt

still

differ

hugely

nowadays.

Many

first-timeparents

nervously

try

to

warn

their

children

off

touching

dirt,whichmight

be

responsible

for

the

spread

of

disease.On

the

contrary,

MaryRuebush,

an

American

immunologist(免疫学家),encourages

children

toplay

in

the

dirt

to

build

up

a

strong

immune

system.And

thelatterposition

is

gaining

some

ground.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

1

)Getting

rid

of

dirt,

in

the

opinion

of

mostpeople,

is

a

good

thing.However,

there

isnothing

fixed

about

attitudes

todirt.Step

1:

Read高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

2

)In

the

early

16th

century,

peoplethoughtthat

dirt

on

the

skin

was

a

means

to

block

outdisease,

as

medical

opinion

had

it

that

washing

offdirt

with

hot

water

could

open

up

the

skin

and

letills

in.

A

particular

danger

was

thought

to

lie

inpublic

baths.

By

1538,

the

French

king

had

closedthe

bath

houses

in

his

kingdom.

So

did

the

king

ofEngland

in

1546.

Thus

began

a

long

time

when

therich

and

the

poor

in

Europe

lived

with

dirt

in

afriendly

way.

Henry

IV,

King

of

France,

wasfamously

dirty.

Upon

learning

that

a

nobleman

hadtaken

a

bath,

the

king

ordered

that,

to

avoid

theattack

of

disease,

the

nobleman

should

not

go

out.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

3)Though

the

belief

in

the

merit

of

dirt

waslong-lived,

dirt

has

nolonger

beenregarded

as

a

niceneighbor

ever

since

the

18th

century.Scientificallyspeaking,

cleaning

away

dirt

is

good

to

health.Cleanwater

supply

and

hand

washing

are

practical

meansof

preventing

disease.

Yet,

it

seems

that

standards

ofcleanliness

have

moved

beyond

science

since

WorldWar

Ⅱ.

Advertisements

repeatedly

sell

the

idea;clothes

need

to

be

whiter

than

white,

cloths

eversofter,

surfaces

to

shine.

Has

the

hate

for

dirt,however,

gone

too

far?高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿(Para

4)Attitudes

to

dirt

still

differ

hugelynowadays.Many

first-time

parents

nervously

try

to

warntheirchildren

off

touching

dirt,

which

might

beresponsible

for

the

spread

of

disease.

On

thecontrary,

Mary

Ruebush,

anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrento

play

in

the

dirt

to

build

up

a

strong

immunesystem.And

the

latter

position

is

gaining

some

ground.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

2:

Paraphrase高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿①

However,

there

is

nothing

fixed

about

attitudes

todirt.②

In

the

early

16th

century,

people

thought

that

dirt

on

theskin

was

a

means

to

block

outdisease③dirt

has

no

longer

been

regarded

as

a

nice

neighbor

eversince

the

18th

century.

scientifically

speaking,

cleaningawaydirt

is

good

tohealth.④Attitudes

differ

hugely

nowadays……encourages

childrento

play

in

the

dirt

to

build

up

a

strong

immune

system.

Andthe

latter

position

is

gaining

some

ground.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

3:

Polish高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：for

example/such

as对比：on

the

contrary,

bycontrast结论：in

short,inconclusion高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step

4:

Revise高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿One

possible

version:People

have

mixed

opinions

toward

dirt.Intheearly

16th

century,people

of

some

Europeancountries,

France,

for

example,believed

that

dirton

the

skin

could

prevent

people

from

gettingill.However,Since

the

18th

century,people

havebeen

told

that

washing

dirt

off

our

body

cankeepus

healthy.But

now

some

scientists

believe

thatexposure

to

some

dirt

may

help

make

our

immunesystem

strong.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ConclusionWhat

is

asummary?What

strategies

can

we

use

to

paraphrase?What

is

“4C”

principle

?√√What

are

the

steps

to

write

a

summary?√It

is

a

brief

statement

that

gives

only

the

mainpoints

of

sth,

not

the

details策略1：同义转换策略2：反义转换策略3：语态转换策略4：句型转换策略5：简化句子√高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿策略6：合并句子高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Finish

the

summarywriting

of

the

followingPassageHomework高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿阅高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿

读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Getting

up

early

has

been

regarded

as

a

good

habitsince

ancient

times.Many

years

ago,

people

thought

that

ifwe

went

to

bed

early

and

get

up

early,

we

would

beenergetic(充满活力的)the

whole

day.So,getting

up

earlyis

of

great

importance