书面表达专项突破5.邮.ppt

文体概述 邮件是一种用电子手段提供信息交换的通信 方式，是互联网应用最广泛的服务。电子邮件可以 是文字、图像、声音等多种形式,它的格式与书面 信件的格式一样，常有称呼、正文、结束语、姓名 和日期等。在写电子邮件时，须具备以下几点内容 ：1. 自我介绍或写信的背景和目的。2. 邮件的具体 内容。3. 表明期望或客套话。 常用语块 1. 在受欢迎 _ 2. 只要 _ 3. 对心存感激 _ 4. 提醒某人某事 _ 5. 和相关 _ be relevant/related to be popular among as long as be grateful for remind sb. of sth. 6. 有趣和信息量大的 _ 7. 期待 _ 8. 收到某人的来信 _ 9. 获得一等奖 _ 10. 保持密切联系 _keep in close touch (with) interesting and informative look forward to hear from sb. win/get the first prize 11. 打算做 _ 12. 赚钱 _ 13. 获得工作经历 _ 14. 谋生 _ 15. 玩得很开心 _ have a great time/have great fun/enjoy oneself very much intend to do make/earn money gain/obtain some work experience make a living/earn ones living 套用句式 1.我想让你为写一篇文章。 2. 我期待很快收到你的来信。 3. 你最近过得怎么样？ Hows everything with you lately? I would like to ask you to write an article for I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 4. 非常抱歉我没有及时回复你上一封邮件是因为 5. 一方面，我会；另一方面，我会以至 于我能够 I am so sorry that I havent replied to your last email in time because On the one hand, I will On the other hand, I will so that I will Dear Peter, I would like to ask you to write a article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Culture” section in our newspaper is very popular between us students. 习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) an among It carries articles writing by foreign friends about the cultures of their home country. Would you please write anything about the culture in your part of the United States? written countries something And we would special welcome articles about what Americans spend their holidays and festivals, but the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant to as long as it is interesting and informative. 400 words would fine. Could we have your articles before June 28? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua specially how and be 1. a an因为article以元音音素开头。 2. between among从us students可知是很多人， 故用among。between表示两者之间。 3. writing written此处write与逻辑主语articles 存在的是被动关系，故用过去分词。 4. country countries根据前面的their可知要用复 数。 5. anything something “would you please”疑问句 希望得到对方的肯定回答时，用something。 6. special specially修饰动词welcome用副词形式 。 7. shat how根据上下文意，此处显然是指“美国 人怎样度过他们的假期和节日”，表“怎样”要用 how引导宾语从句。 8. but and表“顺承”关系用并列连词and。 9. 去掉as long as前的to此处是relevant作后置定语 修饰anything，后面无宾语，无须加to。 10. 在would后加be因为be fine构成系表结构。 课堂练习 假定你是李华，你校和一所美国学校签署了教 师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你的英语老师是 来自这所学校的Norma。不久前，她返回美国任 教。请根据下面要求给她写一封电子邮件，要点 如下： 1. 对她表达感谢之意。 2. 介绍她离开后自己和班级发生的事情。 3. 希望了解她的近况。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Norma, I am Li Hua, one of your students in China. Its almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together. We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. All the best! Yours, Li Hua Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Norma. Will you come back to see Norma? Hows everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch. 课外作业 假定你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友 Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打 算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请你根 据下面要求给他回一封邮件，要点如下： 1. 未及时回信的原因。 2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Tom, Im so sorry that I havent replied to your last email in time because I have been busy preparing for my final exam. Certainly, Id like to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer holiday. As you know, our summer holiday will last about 8 weeks, so Ive intended to do something as follows. First, I plan to do a part-time job in a KFC restaurant for a month. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua On the one hand, Ill make some money in this way. On the other hand, Ill gain some work experience. Besides, Ill go to visit Mount