高中英语作文技巧ppt课件.ppt

提要：,HowtoImproveWriting,？,1,Doyouwanttogethighscoresinwriting?,2,18？,20？,?,Nothingisimpossible!,3,？,HowtoImproveWriting,4,高考作文谈谈减负前后自己的学习和生活的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitlibraries.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,Icanreadbooksandnewspa-persandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.,信息全面，但句式单一，缺乏组织性,17分,5,Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlythingweshoulddo.Wecouldnotgotobeduntil11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitlibrariesandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.,范文,6,Topicsentence（主题句）,Advancedphrases2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。,28,DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.BestwishesLiHua,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoucanlearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowclassmates.italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.youshouldmakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.,29,DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoucanlearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourclassmates.ithelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersinChinesewheneverpossible.itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs.youshouldmakemoreChinesefriendswhocanhelpyoulearnChinese.,Tostartwith,Besides,Inaddition,Inshort,Isuggest,30,北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一封申请信。注意：1、词数不少于100字。2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,姓名:李华性别:男年龄:17岁学校:长沙市一中其它:爱好音乐,摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化,Consolidation,31,Asampleofwriting,DearSir/MadamMynameisLiHua,andIma17-year-oldboy（1）就读（分词或定语从句）inChangshaiNo.1MiddleSchool.Ihavevarietiesofinterests.Firstofall,（2）我爱听音乐（doing作主语）.（3）过渡词,Imalsointerestedinphotography.Beinggoodatcommunicatingwithothers,Imakemanyfriends.（4）过渡词,Imalwaysreadytohelpothers.IwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampformanyreasons.ThefirstreasonliesinthefactthatIlovelife,natureaswellaspeace.But（5）最重要的原因是结交朋友对我来说很容易tomakefriendswithpeoplefromdifferentcountries.If（6）（省略&非谓语）thechance,Iwillmakefulluseofittobroadenmyhorizonandlearnfromothers.（7）（信的末尾，同学们可以自己完成吧？）Yoursfaithfully,LiHua,32,Asampleofwriting,DearSir/MadamMynameisLiHua,andIma17-year-oldboy(1)inChangshaiNo.1MiddleSchool.Ihavevarietiesofinterests.Firstofall,(2).（3）,Imalsointerestedinphotography.Beinggoodatcommunicatingwithothers,Imakemanyfriends.（4）Imalwaysreadytohelpothers.,就读（分词或定从）,(whois)studying,过渡词,Inaddition,过渡词,Whatsmore,我爱听音乐（doing做主语）,listeningtomusicismyfavorite.,33,Asampleofwriting,IwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampformanyreasons.ThefirstreasonisthefactthatIlovelife,natureaswellaspeace.But（5）tomakefriendswithpeoplefromdifferentcountries.If(6)thechance,Iwillmakefulluseofittobroadenmyhorizonandlearnfromothers.（7）Yoursfaithfully,LiHua,theimportantreasonisthatitis,given/getting,最重要的原因是结交朋友对我来说很,容易,（省略&非谓语）,（信的末尾，同学们可以自己完成吧？）,Lookforwardtoyourreply.,easyforme,34,审要求，列要点,扩成句，连成文,查错误。,英文写作五步法,35,Checkyourcompositionquickly:,