历年上海高考英语作文 筛选版一.doc

历年上海高考英语作文 筛选版一 xx高考英语作文预测汇总 xx高考英语作文常用加分句型汇总 详细描述用餐的情况 简要表述你对这次午餐的感受 这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。 范文： Theinstantthebellindicatingtheendofthelastclassrang,outofthe classroompouredallstudentsbutone。 Unlikemypeers,Iwasinnohurrytomakearunfortheschoolcanteen,to rushthroughlunchandtoreturntotheclassroomforhomework.Iarrivedatthe canteenwhenamassivequeuehadformed.Waitingformyturnpatiently,Ismelledthe aromaoftheappetizingfood.Greasyassomedishesmightbe,thewiderangeof foodpreparedbytheschoolwassuperiorinnutritionalval-uetothatfound elsewhere。 Thetypicalscheduleofahighschoolerisextraordinarilyhecticandthus lunchbreakisararetimewhenoverworkedstudentscanwinddownandenjoythe pleasureprovidedbytheflavorfulfood.Imakeitapointtopampermytastebuds bysavoringeverylittlebitoftasteinfood.WhatIusuallyliketodooverlunch ishaveamindlessconversa-tionwithacoupleofstudentswhohavealsolearntto smelltherosesalongthebonebreakingjourneythroughhighschool.Werounded offourlunchwithadessert,re-freshedandsatisfied。 Cometothinkofit,itisnotthefoodbutmyattitudetowardslifethat affordsmepleasureandempowersmeinfacinguptovarious challenges。(219words) 一、语法解构 现在分词作定语thebellindicatingtheendofthelastclassrang 倒装句 (1)outoftheclassroompouredallstudentsbutone (2)Greasyassomedishesmightbe 不定式Iwasinnohurrytomakearunfortheschoolcanteen 状语从句Ia