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一、（2016陕西）假如你是李明，你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩请根据提示语，给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写一封email，邀请他一同前往要求：1参考提示语，可适当发挥；2语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整3文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4词数：不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）提示语：feed animalspick fruit and vegetablesmake tealearn to cookplay gamesDear David，How are you recently？Yours，Li Ming【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】高分句型：句型一：Would you like to go with us？would like to do sth：想要做某事，不定式to后用动词原形，go with sb陪某人一起去句型二：Im looking forward to your reply这是现在进行时态，表示正在进行的动作，结构是：is/am/are+动词的现在分词主语是I，因此be动词用amlook forward to：期盼回信通常用reply【解答】Dear David，How are you recently？（问好）this weekend（说明时间），my parents and I are going to nearby village（说明目的）Would you like to go with us？（发出邀请）【高分句型一】In the morningWe can feed animalsThen，we plan to pick fruit and vegetables in the fields（早上要做的事情）In the afternoon，well watch the villagers make teaAfter that，we will learn to cook meals（下午要做的事情）In the evening，we can play games or chat with the people there（晚上要做的事情）Im sure we will have a good timeIm looking forward to your reply（表达请求）【高分句型二】Yours，Li Ming【点评】写信时需明确写作要点，注意信中人称和时态的使用，运用所给词汇完成写作，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，还要注意写作的格式，习惯的问候语等二、（2016株洲）假如你是李华，暑假将有来自英国的三十位同学来你校交流学习，你给英方负责人MrCave写封电子邮件，申请派一位同学住到你家里开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数邮件内容要求包括以下三个方面：（1）简要描述一下你的家；（2）你希望你想接待的同学是一个什么性格的人；（3）你打算向这位同学介绍中国的什么注意：（1）70词左右；（2）文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息Dear MrCave，I am very happy to have a student in my homeThere are three people in my family，and my parents are very friendlyAlso，it is just takes 15 minuteswalk from my home to schoolI am an outgoing boy who loves sports，especially basketball and football，so I hope he is the same as meTherefore，we can share a lot of interesting things and play sports togetherMy spoken English is quite good，if he comes to my home，I will teach him Chinese，tell him some Chinese culture and introduce him to my friendsI am sure he will enjoy himself at my homeI am looking forward to your replyYours sincerelyLi Hua【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，让我们按要求写一封电子邮件，邮件开头结尾已给出，现在需要补充正文内容，内容需从这三方面去写：简要描述一下你的家；你希望你想接待的同学是一个什么性格的人；你打算向这位同学介绍中国的什么这三方面去写，可作适当拓展；其次写作时要用一般现在时及第一人称重点短语和句型：introduce sbto sb向某人介绍某人enjoy oneself 玩得开心、愉快look forward to 期望、盼望It is just take 15 minuteswalk from my home to school（It takes sbto do sth）从我家步行到学校只要15分钟I am an outgoing boy who loves sports，especially basketball and football（定语从句）我是一个性格外向、喜欢运动的男孩，特别喜欢打篮球和踢足球if he comes to my home，I will teach him Chinese，tell him some Chinese culture and introduce him to my friends（if引导的条件状语从句）如果他来我家，我会教他中文，告诉他关于一些关于中国的文化，并把他介绍给我的朋友们【解答】There are three people in my family，and my parents are very friendlyAlso，it is just takes 15 minuteswalk from my home to schoolI am an outgoing boy who loves sports，especially basketball and football，so I hope he is the same as meTherefore，we can share a lot of interesting things and play sports togetherMy spoken English is quite good，if he comes to my home，I will teach him Chinese，tell him some Chinese culture and introduce him to my friendsI am sure he will enjoy himself at my homeI am looking forward to your reply【点评】对于提纲作文，写作时应先仔细审题，确定好时态、人称，按照提纲内容去写，可作适当发挥其次注意句子结构要完整，语法正确，表达时可多用一些高分型短语和句型，使文章表达更连贯、流畅写完作文后，应认真检查修改，注意单词书写等细节问题三、（2016无锡）假设你是某校九年级（1）班的学生你校英文俱乐部正在举行Young Star Award的评选活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参考，内容要点如下：1高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀；2乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善；3去年，他；4已筹款一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学生；5得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣注意事项：1短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2第3要点的内容须围绕主题，用23句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3词数在90个左右，短文的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4短文内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上参考你词汇：慈善（charity）【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】这是一篇提纲作文内容是介绍你的同学李明时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时人称主要为第三人称写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀；2乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善；3去年，他；4已筹款一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学生；5得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣常用到的重点短语：be good at 擅长take part in 参加get ready to do sth 准备好做某事【高分句型】句型一：He is one of the top students in my classone of+the+最高级+名词复数：最高级的使用，表示最怎样的某某之一句型二：Liming is very helpful，and he often takes an active part in different activities，especially in charities takes an active part in：积极参加 especially in charities作为插入语【解答】Young Star AwardMy classmate Liming is very tall，and he is good at footballHe is one of the top students in my class（高个，擅长篮球，成绩优秀）【高分句型一】Liming is very helpful，and he often takes an active part in different activities，especially in charities（乐于助人，积极参加活动，热衷慈善）【高分句型二】Last year，he held a charity programme for children in poor areas（去年句型了一次慈善活动）Since last year，he has raised more than 1，000 yuanNow he gets ready to send the money to the children in poor areas（已筹款一千多元，准备寄给贫困地区学生） His action has won high praise from our schoolHe is our pride（得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣）【点评】考生在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意人称和时态的使用，做到句式灵活，表达流畅四、（2016包头）假设你是Li Hua，请你用英文给你校外教Jim发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1今天下午，你上体育课时伤了左脚，明天不能去上他的课2邀请他参加下周的英语俱乐部活动时间：下周五下午4点地点：初三一班活动内容：用英文讨论粉吸计划，并希望他能给同学们一些如何提高英语的建议3如果有问题，可以打电话或发电子邮件联系注意：1文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯3词数70110，开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数Dear Jim，Im Li Hua，one of the students in your spoken English classIm sorry to tell you that I cant go to your class tomorrowThe reason why I ask for leave is that I hurt my left foot in the PEclass this afternoonBesides，Id like to invite you to join in the activity in our English club next FridayItll start at 4 pmin Class1，Grade 3Well talk about the plan for the coming summer vacation in EnglishAnd well be very glad if you can give us some advice on how to improve our EnglishCall me or send me an email if you have any questionsIm looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】此作文要求写一封信通过阅读材料可知这篇作文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，题中包含了这些要点：今天下午，你上体育课时伤了左脚，明天不能去上他的课；邀请他参加下周的英语俱乐部活动；如果有问题，可以打电话或发电子邮件联系注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误高分句型一：The reason why I ask for leave is that I hurt my left foot in the PEclass this afternoon我请假的原因是今天下午的体育课上伤了左脚这是Why引导的定语从句，先行词是reason，后面的that I hurt my left foot in the PEclass this afternoon是that引导的表语从句高分句型二：And well be very glad if you can give us some advice on how to improve our English如果你能给我们一些关于如何提高我们的英语的建议，我们将非常高兴这是一个if引导的条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时【解答】Dear Jim， Im Li Hua，one of the students in your spoken English classIm sorry to tell you that I cant go to your class tomorrowThe reason why I ask for leave is that I hurt my left foot in the PEclass this afternoon【高分句型一，注意定语从句的使用】【要点一】 Besides，Id like to invite you to join in the activity in our English club next FridayItll start at 4 pmin Class1，Grade 3Well talk about the plan for the coming summer vacation in EnglishAnd well be very glad if you can give us some advice on how to improve our English【高分句型二，if引导的条件状语从句】【要点二】Call me or send me an email if you have any questions【要点三】 Im looking forward to your early reply Yours， Li Hua【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系上下文之间可以适当使用连接词如but，so，then等五、（2016永州）在初中三年的学习过程中，不同的学生获得的英语课堂知识或多或少各不相同请你写一篇英语日记，记叙你所上的一堂英语课的过程和感受耍求如下：1、语句完整，意思连贯，语法正确2、字数6080词，日记的开头和结尾己给出，不计入词量总数要点词汇：sing a song； come into； say hello to； ask sb questions； praise sb for sth； teach sb sth； discuss in groups； help each other； play games； do exercises； with the help of； learn a lot【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一写自己对初中三年中的一堂英语课的过程和感受的回忆由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，根据让我们写日记这一要求可知本篇短文的时态主要是过去时态和一般现在时，人称是第一人称，还应注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题写作中，应注意描述的全面性；尽量运用要求中的短语句型；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯【解答】Monday June 6th This morning we had an English classBefore class，we sang a beautiful song happilyWe said hello to MrsLi，our English teacher when she came into the classroomMrsLi asked me a question and I answered it correctlyShe was very happy and praised me for itThen she taught us the new lesson and let us discuss a problem in groupsShe said we should learn to help each otherIn the class，we also played games and did some exercisesIn the class，we were all very happy With the help of MrsLi，I did well in English and I learned a lot I like EnglishI like my English teacherLets sayThank you very muchto our English teachers!【点评】以提纲提供情景的作文要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节写作时，要先确定好时态，再注意谓语动词形式的变化另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅六、（2016重庆）随着外国游客日益增多，未来科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解任务科技馆需要应征者提交英文自荐信假如你叫袁新，你有能力并希望成为一名讲解员请按要求写一封自荐信要求：1必须写出三点及以上的自荐理由；2词数：80120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数参考要点：1擅长英语（英语水平，沟通能力）；2热爱科学（科学知识，创新能力）；3Dear sir，Im a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua SchoolId like to become one of your guidesI would be most thankful if you could give me the chanceThank you!Yours，Yuan Xin【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】这是一篇提纲作文内容是写一封自荐信应征未来科技馆英语讲解员注意信件的格式时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时人称主要为第一人称写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1.擅长英语（英语水平，沟通能力）；2.热爱科学（科学知识，创新能力）；3.其他常用到的重点短语：spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事be good at 擅长that is to say 那也就是说make sth+adj 让某物怎样make friends with sb 与某人交朋友come from 来自get along well with sb 与某人相处的好【高分句型】1That is to say，its not difficut for me to talk with people in Englishthat is to say 那也就是说，做插入语it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语talk with sb 与某人交流2Some new ideas oftencome out of my mind，which has encouraged me a lotcome out of从出来which引导的非限制定语从句，修饰前面整个句子3Besides，I feel like making friends with different people，no matter where they come frombesides另外，给出另一个理由feel like doing sth 想要做某事，make friends with sb 与某人交朋友no matter where无论哪里，引导的让步状语从句come from 来自【解答】Dear sir，Im a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua SchoolId like to become one of your guidesIve learned English for 6 yearsI spend a lot of my free time listening to English news and watching English movies，so Im good at EnglishThat is to say，its not difficut for me to talk with people in English【高分句型】（擅长英语）I have been interested in science since I was a childMy favorite books are on scienceSome new ideas often come out of my mind，which has encouraged me a lot【高分句型】With these ideas，I have made some small inventions to make my life more comfortable（热爱科学）Besides，I feel like making friends with different people，no matter where they come from【高分句型】Im sure that I will get along well with them（乐于交友）I would be most thankful if you could give me the chanceThank you!Yours，Yuan Xin【点评】这是一篇应用文，注意信件的格式本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥要注意主谓一致等问题写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理七、（2016海南）假设你是李明上周日你班举行了一次毕业聚会请根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友 Robert 写一封邮件，向他描述聚会的情况及谈谈你当时的感受要求：1语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；3行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4词数 80左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Hi Robert，We had a graduation party last SundayLong before 3：00 pm，all the s tudents in my class couldnt wait to come to the hallOur teachers and parents were invited to the party，tooFirst，ourmonitor made a speechHe thanked our teachers and parents sincerelyNext，we gave presentsto each otherThe most exciting moment was the show timeWe sang，danced and played gamesOur English teacher told a story which made us all laughEveryone was so happyI think the wonderful party will always be in my mindDo you have such a party？Please write soonYours，Li Ming【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】这是一篇应用文，让我们根据图片内容写一描述毕业晚会的邮件，内容是开放的，需要我们发挥自己的想象力、创造力和思维力，把这些内容补充完整由题目可知，写作时要用第一、三人称，时态主要为一般过去时，内容要点包括：聚会情况以及当时的感受重要短语及高分句型：have a graduation party举行一次毕业聚会give presents to each other互送礼物tell a story讲故事 Long before 3：00 pm，all the students in my class couldnt wait to come to the hall下午三点前很久，我班所有的学生就迫不及待地来到大厅long before在前很久，cant wait to do sth迫不及待地做某事，两个短语用得好Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh我们的英语老师讲了一个让我们所有人发笑的故事tell a story讲故事，make sbdo使得某人做某事，make使动用法，后跟不带to的不定式which made us all laugh是定语从句，作story的定语First，our monitor made a speech首先，我们的班长做了一个演讲first这个连接词用得好，make a speech做演讲，是重要短语【解答】One possible version：Hi Robert， We had a graduation party last SundayLong before 3：00 pm，all the students in my class couldnt wait to come to the hall（高分句型）Our teachers and parents were invited to the party，tooFirst，our monitor made a speech（高分句型）He thanked our teachers and parents sincerelyNext，we gave presents to each otherThe most exciting moment was the show timeWe sang，danced and played gamesOur English teacher told a story which made us all laugh（高分句型）（聚会情况）Everyone was so happyI think the wonderful party will always be in my mind（当时的感受）Do you have such a party？Please write soon Yours，Li Ming【点评】写应用文时，首先要看懂图画所表达的内容，最好列一下提纲，然后根据提纲进行写作就不会造成离题或偏题，但要注意，文章必须要覆盖整个要点，行文要注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，要使用正确的句子，同时注意，要使用一定的连接词，比如：first，second，whats more，finally等再者，在作文完成时要注意检查、修改，如果有时间可以先写到草稿纸上，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分最后，注意使用一些句型和短语，使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅，方能成就一篇好的作文八、（2016山西）向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格当你向被人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时，你希望得到回报（repay）吗？针对这一话题，九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出2至3条理由来说服同学们（只需选择一方观点表达即可）要求：1词数不少于80词；2文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3文中不得出现真实的人名、校名When I show kindness and help others，I 【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】这是一篇图画作文，让我们根据图片内容写一篇关于帮助了别人要不要回报的作文，内容是开放的，需要我们发挥自己的想象力、创造力和思维力，把这些内容补充完整由题目可知，写作时要用第一人称，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时，内容要点包括：选择一方观点、说明理由、举例以及总结重要短语及句型：on the other hand另一方面get into trouble陷入困境 sothat如此以至于all in all总之Several days ago，while I was having a walk in the park，I found a little boy crying几天前，当我正在公园散步时，我发现一个小孩在哭ago用于一般过去时，while后跟过去进行时引导时间状语从句，find sbdoing看到某人正在做某事His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift，but I refused他的妈妈如此感谢以至于她想给我买个小礼物，但是我拒绝了sothat如此以至于，that引导结果状语从句If you wanted repay，aThankswould be enough如果你想要回报，一声谢谢就够了与现在事实相反的虚拟语气，从句用一般过去时，主句用过去将来时【解答】One possible version： When I show kindness and help others，I never expect them to repay me（选择一方观点） In my view，helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happynessOn the other hand，everyone may get into trouble and need help，too（说明理由） Several days ago，while I was having a walk in the park，I found a little boy crying（高分句型）Then I asked him what was the matter，and he told me he couldnt find his momLuckily，he remembered his mothers phone numberSo I called her immediatelyTen minutes later，the boy saw his mom and became excitedHis mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift，but I refused（高分句型）At that time，I felt quite happy because I did something really good（举例） All in all，the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repayIf you wanted repay，aThankswould be enough（高分句型）（总结）【点评】写图画作文时，首先要看懂图画所表达的内容，最好列一下提纲，然后根据提纲进行写作就不会造成离题或偏题，但要注意，文章必须要覆盖整个要点，行文要注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，要使用正确的句子，同时注意，要使用一定的连接词，比如：first，second，whats more，finally等再者，在作文完成时要注意检查、修改，如果有时间可以先写到草稿纸上，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分最后，注意使用一些句型和短语，使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅，方能成就一篇好的作文九、（2016北京）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作文中已给出内容不计入总词数所给提示词进行选用请不要写出你的校名和姓名题目假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办长跑接力赛，你打算邀请你们班交接生Peter参加请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他比赛的时间和地点，报名方式，以及需要做什么准备提示词语：sign up（报名），on the school website，sports shoes提示问题：When and where will you have the race？How can Peter sign up for the race？What do you advise Peter to prepare for the race？Dear Peter，How is it going？Im writing to invite you to take part in the longdistance relay race Im looking forward to your early replyYours，Li Hua题目假如你是李华，为了帮助洪灾地区的小朋友渡过难关，你们学校上周组织了以友爱、互助为主题的献爱心捐赠活动请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你在这次活动中捐赠了什么，为什么捐赠这些物品，以及你的感受提示词语：donate（捐赠），book，schoolbag，clothes，toy，help，proud提示问题：What did you donate？Why did you donate the things？How do you feel？At my school，we made donations to children in the flooded areas last week 【考点】提纲作文菁优网版权所有【分析】作文：本文为提纲作文，且为应用文书信体根据题目要求，可以判断文章时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称和第二人称你写作要点为：1，运动会的时间和地点；2，如何报名参加；3，应该如何准备字数为不少于50字重要短语及词汇：the school sports meeting 校运会sign up 注册，登记follow the guidance 遵从指引gym suit 运动服on time 准时高分句型：高分句型一：In order to improve our teamwork as well as our running speed，we are required to train every afternoon after our classes from this Monday to this Friday为了提高我们的团队以及跑步速度，我们要求从这个周一到周五每个下午都要训练in order to 为了，引导目的状语； as well as 和一样，以及；be required to do被要求做一般现在时的被动语态高分句型二：Youd better prepare your gym suit before the training训练前你最好准备好你的运动服had better do sth 最好做某事 before为时间状语，这里意为训练前作文：本文为记叙文，且为应用文投稿根据题目要求，可以判断文章时态主要为一般过去时及一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称写作要点为：1，在这次活动中捐赠了什么，；2，为什么捐赠这些物品，；3，个人的感受重要短语及词汇：make donations 捐赠活动as usual 像平常一样the flood disaster 洪灾donate sth捐赠某物parcel sth up 将某物打包keep on doing 继续做某事in time 及时be proud with 以为荣though/even though 即使高分句型：高分句型一：In order to help the children to get rid of hunger and keep on studying even though they are in the flood disaster，we donated clothes，food，school bags，books and toys为了帮助即使在洪灾中的孩子们远离饥饿和继续学习，我们捐赠了衣服、食物、校服、书以及玩具in order to 为了，引导目的状语； get rid of 摆脱；keep on doing sth 继续做某事； even though 即使，引导让步状语从句高分句型二：Though we cant help them to fight against floods，we should help them rebuild their homeland即使我们不能帮助他们对抗洪水，我们应该帮助他们重建家园though 即使，引导让步状语从句；fight against 对抗； rebuild 重建； help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事【解答】作文：Dear Peter，How is it going？Im writing to invite you to take part in the longdistance relay race The school sports meeting will be held on the school playground at 2：00 on next Sunday afternoon（运动会的时间和地点）We will meet at the school gate first at 1：30 pm.Please come there on timeTo sign up for the race，please op