中学英语作文精品课件课件.ppt

中考书面表达的类型及分析,中考作文常考类型一、看图作文二、话题作文三、应用文（书信）,基础写作四重奏:,1.信息划分:确定哪些相关的信息可用一句话表达,确保5个句子表达完所有的信息.建议可在题目上用铅笔做,的标志(完整性)2.列出关键词组和句型(准确性)3.串联句子:用正确的语法结构写出准确的句子,并形成篇章(连贯性)4.检查(准确性),句子的分类,简单句:只包含一个主谓结构的句子.并列句:主谓结构+连词(and,but,so,or)+主谓结构(或更多的主谓结构)复合句:引导词+主谓结构,主谓结构(从句)(主句),写一个完整的句子,这几句是正确的句子吗?如果你认为有误,该怎么改?,1.Themeetingwilluntil3:00.,2.Workhard,youwillsucceed.,3.Ihaveabrother,whoisadoctor.4.Thereareonly4studentstakepartintheclass.,last,and,who,taking/totake,五种基本的简单句,主语+不及物动词2.主语+及物动词+宾语,Birdsfly.Busesrunfromdawntillmidnight.Wearestudyinghard.,Wehavereadmanybooks.Theydoshoppingattheweekend.WearelearningEnglish.,3.主语+系动词+表语4.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语5.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语,Wearestudents.Hebecameascientist.Thatsoundsgood.,HegaveTomapresent.Heofferedmeajob.,Wemadehimourmonitor.Themanagerthinkstheplanpractical.Hewillhavehisbikerepaired.Iwonthaveyouspeakingtoyourmotherlikethat.,并列句,1.用连词/副词(and,but,so,for,or,notonlybutalso,eitheror,neithernor,while,bothand,however,therefore),1)LiMingis18yearsoldandheisastudentinNo.1MiddleSchool.2)Hurryuporyoullbelateforschool.,3)Imustgonow,formysisteriswaitingforme.,2.用“;”3.用“;+adv”,1)Wefishedallday;wedidntcatchanything.,Wefishedallday;however,wedidntcatchanything.2)Thecarwasalmostnew;besides,itwasinexcellentcondition.,butwe,soall,2)Lilydoeswellinstudy;alltheteachersthinkhighlyofher.,复合句,复合句里包含两个或更多的主谓结构,其中有一个主谓结构为句子的主体称为主句，另一个些主谓结构为从句，他（们）只能充当句子的某一（些）成分，,如:主语,宾语,表语,同位语,定语,状语等.根据他们在句子中的功能分别称为主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句,同位语从句,定语从句,状语从句等.,判断下面句子属于哪种复合句,1)Whenweshallhaveoursportsmeetingisstillaquestion.2)ThelettersaysthattheyareleavingonFriday.3)Thatswhattheyshoulddo.4)WeexpressedthehopethattheywouldcomeandvisitChinaagain.5)ThisistheverydictionarythatIamlookingfor.6)Astimewenton,Einsteinstheoryprovedtobecorrect.,主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句,同位语从句,定语从句,状语从句,连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应，有衔接，思想的表达应该有序，清楚句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾,Timeorder:First,Firstofall,Second,Third,Next,Afterthat,ThenFinally,SpaceorderOntheright,Ontheleft,Inthecenter,Inthemiddle,Nexttothe,Besidethe,Oppositethe_,Nearthe_,Underthe_,Abovethe_,Ononesideofthe_,Ontheothersideofthe_,Transitionsignals,1、递进：besides,inaddition,whatsmore2、转折和对比：but,however,ontheotherhand,3、总结：inshort,inbrief,forthesereasons4、因果和结论：asaresult,dueto,becauseof,thus,therefore5、强调：really,indeed,surely6、其它插入语：worsestill/whatsworse,afterall,ifpossible,培养英语思维-词的搭配,大雨大桥大楼大错大写大病大地震,heavyrain,longbridge,highrise/largebuilding,big/terrible/seriousmistake,capitalletter,seriousillness,majorearthquake,句的表达,注意汉英差异：一、状语e.g.她一周有三个下午在一家百货公司做兼职。Sheworksparttimeinadepartmentstorethreeafternoonsaweek.在我十岁那年我和家人经历了一次奇妙的旅行。ItookafantastictripwithmyfamilywhenIwastenyearsold.,二、谓语动词汉语：无动词或多动词英语：单动词e.g.我妈妈很漂亮。Mymotherispretty.我们又唱又跳。Wesanganddanced.我们邀请他们到上海来玩。WeinvitedthemtocometoShanghaiforavisit.你上课常常缺席所以我想要提醒你。YouareoftenabsentfromclasssoIwanttoremindyou.,三、主语e.g.活到老，学到老。Oneisnevertoooldtolearn.很难说谁对谁错。Itshardtotellwhoisrightandwhoiswrong.昨天找到了丢失的钢笔。Thelostpenwasfoundyesterday.上饭店吃饭很贵。Itsexpensivetoeatout.乘飞机旅行更舒适、便捷。Travellingbyplaneisfasterandmoreconvenient.,四、定语汉：常常是前置定语英：前置和后置定语e.g.我们学校的所有学生allthestudentsinourschool左边数第五个男孩thefifthboyfromtheleft英国人的日常生活everydaylivesoftheBritish在中国骑车的人数thenumberofcyclistsinChina几种气体的混合物amixtureofseveralgases,介词短语作后置定语,三到六岁的孩子Childrenfrom3to6yearsofage隔壁的音像店themusicstorenextdoor用英语写的信theletter(s)inEnglish晚上最晚一班返回的公交车thelastbusbackintheevening城市生活的嘈杂、脏乱thenoiseanddirtofcitylife,玩/放松的时间timetoplay/relax当一个音乐家的计划planstobeamusician出国学习的机会thechancetostudyabroad供人坐着休息的安静场所aquietplaceforpeopletositin/rest找到任何一个可以询问的人findanyonetoask,动词不定式作后置定语,城市用水waterusedbycities不乱扔垃圾的习惯thehabitofnotthrowingawayrubbish我曾经生活的村庄thevillagewhereIstayed/lived我昨晚吃的某样东西somethingIatelastnight到月球去的宇航员astronautswhotraveledtothemoon孩子们喜欢吃的食物food(which)childrenlike,分词、定语从句等作后置定语,检查,1.时态2.主谓一致3.名词单复数4.单词拼写5.动词的过去式,过去分词6.句子是否完整,Writingtips:,时态一致必须注意所用时态符合上下文。如果用过去时叙述一个故事，就要保证通篇都用过去时，不要在作文中间变成现在时。同样，如果是在谈论普遍问题、现状或日常习惯，就要用现在时，而不要用过去时。e.g.YesterdayIdidmyhomework.Ittakesmethreehours.Hisfatherthoughtheisgoodatmath.Shestartedhernewjoblastweek.Shelikedit.Wedidntgototheparty.Wearentinvited.,took,was,likes,werent,2019/12/14,25,可编辑,Writingtips:,2.主语一致应该保持全文人称一致，这样读者才能跟随一个逻辑思维顺序。否则读者会感到困惑。e.g.Althoughyoumayfailtheexam,hecanstillbeusefultothecountry.Itnotonlyprovidesyouwithlotsofknowledgebutalsodevelopshisinterests.,you,your,Writingtips:,4.词序/语序它能够帮助准确表达作者本意并并避免意义含糊不清。注意要让句子尽量保持英语的表达习惯。e.g.Ialreadyhavehadlunch.ShewithhermumtraveledtoItaly.Ialwaysbethewinnerofthepianocontest.InChina,heknewtherewerebigfloods.IjustwonderwhatdoesmyfuturelikeandwhatshouldIdo.,havealready,ShetraveledtoItalywithhermum.,amalways,HeknewtherewerebigfloodsinChina.,IjustwonderwhatmyfatherlikesandwhatIshoulddo.,Writingtips:,5.并列句用并列句能使文章更生动流畅，它包含两个独立分句和一个连词，如：and,but,or,so等。e.g.Theyknowwhatisbetterandtheyarealwaysright.Itwascrowded.Wewereabletoseehim.Itwascrowdedbutwewereabletoseehim.Sheisatopstudent.Sheisatalentedmusician.Sheisatopstudentandatalentedmusician.Thoughhedoesnthavemuchmoney,buthisheartisfulloflove.,两个分句不要重复同一个单词。每个分句都必须有一个动词；每两个分句组成的句子只能使用一个连词。,Writingtips:,6.复合句。它包含一个主句和一个从句，由when,after,if等连词或who,which等关系代词引导。e.g.Shewasveryold.Shecouldntstandonthebuseasily.Shewassooldthatshecouldntstandonthebuseasily.Theresultwasnotthemostimportantthingforme.Theresultwouldbeknownawholemonthlater.Theresult,whichwouldbeknownawholemonthlater,wasnotthemostimportantthingforme.,Writingtips:,7.避免词的重复。e.g.Allinall,wehadawonderfultrip.WetravelledacrossSydney,CanberraandMelbourne.WesawthebeautifulcoastofQueensland.WetouredallofPerth.WehadagreatvisitwithDan.Perhapswewillgoagainnextwinter.,Writingtips:,3.主谓一致/人称一致确保语法正确。e.g.ThingsIhatetodoisdoinghomework.WhatIhatetodoisEverypeoplestarttolearnEnglish.EverypersonstartstolearnEnglish.Theactivitiescanrelaxourselves.Theactivitiescanhelpusrelaxourselves./Wecanrelaxourselvesbytakingpartintheactivities.,看图作文,LookAndwrite,看图作文难度稍大，在写作时它要根据图画呈现的内容与所给的中英文提示相结合来表达其内在涵义，描述图画内容，使短文达意、正确、连贯。,看图作文可采用以下几个步骤：1、理解图意，确立情景2、注意所给的中英文提示3、明确时态，理顺思路4、连词成句，然后再连句成文5、反复审核，修改错误,假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。,英文日记的格式,英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。中、英文的日记格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。,今天下午我去看电影.,gotoamoviegotothecinemaseeafilm,Itsafinedaytoday.,thisafternoon,Iwenttoamoviehappilythisafternoon.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offamansbike.,onthewayfalldownfrom/falloffsee/find+复合宾语,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了.,Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtotheman,buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.,pickupshouttorideaway,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,Istoppedataxitotocatchupwiththeman.,stopataxicatchupwith,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim.,Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.,giveback/returnrefuse,May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtothemantostop.Buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.,Usefulsentences:,Sayingsandproverbs:Onself-help:Pridegoesbeforeafall骄者必败.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功的第一步。Custommakesallthingseasy.有个好习惯，事事皆不难。Greathopesmakegreatman.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。,Usefulsentences:,Honestyisthebestpolicy.做人诚信为本。Hopeforthebest,butpreparefortheworst.抱最好的愿望，做最坏的打算。Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事，只要肯登攀。Ifathingisworthdoing,itsworthdoingwell.值得做的是就值得做好。Wherethereislife,thereishope.生活充满了希望。/留得青山在，不怕没柴烧,Usefulsentences:,Onhealth:Aclosemouthcatchesnoflies.病从口入。Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果，不用请医生。Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身体好。Onmotherhood:Amothersloveneverchanges.母爱永恒。,Usefulsentences:,Onfriendship:Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.得朋友难，失朋友易。Afriendisneverknowntillamanhasneed.需要之时方知友。Onreading:Agoodbookisthebestoffriends,thesametodayandforever.一本好书，相伴一生。Byreadingweenrichthemind,byconversationwepolishit.读书使人充实，交谈使人精明。Chooseanauthorasyouchooseafriend.择书如择友。,Usefulsentences:,Onentertainment:AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。Onlife:Weknownotwhatisgooduntilwehavelostit.好东西，失去了才明白。Varietyist