江西省奉化市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错基础训练（5）.doc

浙江奉化市2016高考英语短文改错基础训练（5）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。 when i first learn to write in english, i ran into many difficulties. the main learnedproblem was in that i always thought in chinese and tried to translate anything into everythingenglish. my teacher advised me to keep my diary. i followed her advice and aputting down 100 words or so each day. soon i began to enjoy talk to myself put talkingon paper as i was learning to express me in simple english. one day i wrote a little myselfstory and showedto my teacher. she liked it very much and reads it to the class. it read all said the story was a good one. their word were a great encouragement to me. words下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。five years before my brother and i ended our friendship as a result of the quarrel. one day he visited the city that i was living in to see our mother. i thought for nights about what to react to his visit. since i had done no wrong, so it was he that needed to come to me. finally, i went to my friends for advice. he suggested i offered my apology. when i did it, i felt relieving. today i am so grateful to my friend. without his advice, we wouldnt enjoy the loving relationship with my brother. i have learned a truly life lesson from the whole experience. in short, i feel i have grown since.【参考答案】2.five years before my brother and i ended our friendship as a result of the quarrel. one day ago ahe visited the city that i was living in to see our mother. i thought for nights about what to react howto his visit. since i had done no wrong, so it was he that needed to come to me. finally, i went to 去掉somy friends for advice. he suggested i offered my apology. when i did it, i felt relieving. today i am friend offer relievedso grateful to my friend. without his advice, we wouldnt enjoy the loving relationship with my ibrother. i have learned a truly life lesson from the whole experience. in short, i feel i have truegrownsince. up短文改错。(2014荣成模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。 i traveled on the 8:00 a. m. train from glasgow to london kings gross on last thursday. i was quite angry with the service of your company. the train didnt come on time. it was forty minute late when it left glasgow. a man at the station minutesapologized to us, but he didnt give us some reasons for the delay. we then had anyfurther delays on the way. asresult, i missed my plane, which made me adisappointing. the service on the train was very poor. the trip spent more than disappointed tookfive hours or only soft drinks were sold. besides, something is wrong with the air but wasconditioner and it became extreme hot. because of your good service, i feel extremely poor/badyou should make up for my loss. 短文改错。there is public library in every town in britain. anyone 76 _can borrow books if he or she wishes. in some places you 77_ may borrow as more books as you need, but in others 78_you are limited in a certain number of books. you may 79_borrow the books for several weeks so that you can have 80_enough time to finish it. if the book you want is out, 81_you may ask for it to be kept for you. most public library 82_also have a reading-room, that you can sit at the desk 83_and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other 84_books, but you are not allow to take them out. 85_【参考答案】2.76public前加a 77正确 78more 改为many 79in改为to 80borrow 改为keep 81it改为them 82library改为libraries 83that改为where 84去掉第二个the 85allow改为allowed短文改错（共小题；每小题分，满分分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。upon our arrival, we gave a warm welcome to the american students, among them a boy named tim was to stay with my family for the weekend. i recognized tim compared him with photo he had sent to me. tim greeted me and expressed that how excited he felt. when school was over, we took the subway home. my parents prepared a rich family dinner that night and we had enjoyed ourselves so much, eating and chatting. the next day, i act as a guide, showing tim along the most famous scenic spots in beijing. wherever he went, he had some photos take to help him memorize this unforgettable trip to china. the time to say goo