高考英语二轮总复习 第27讲 (半)开放作文限时训练讲义 新课标（湖南专用）.doc

第二十七讲(半)开放作文(1)(25 min.)(2012长郡一模)在你的成长过程中，(家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、名人等)哪些因素对你的成长影响最大？请你以tracking my growth为题，按以下要求写篇不少于120词的英语短文： (1) 选择并陈述对你的成长起着很大影响的诸多因素中的两个或三个；(2) 谈谈你的看法和理由。_(2)(25 min.)(原创)生活中，我们总是有这样或那样的负担。怎样才能甩掉这些负担，轻松前进请就此写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括：(1)这些负担有什么影响；(2)用什么来对付这些负担；(3)具体怎样做。注意： (1) 词数不少于120个；(2) 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。_(3)(25 min.)(2012师大附中月考)正在念高三的你青春年少，有几许欢乐，亦有诸多茫然。假如你是萌萌，请你结合自身现状，写一封信给自己，针对一两个问题，提出改进意见。注意： (1)词数不少于120个；(2)称呼与署名已给你写好。dear meng meng, _love，meng meng(4)(25 min.)(2012蓝山二中月考)通过描述一件你亲身经历的事情来说明主题“honesty makes a difference”，要求120词以上。_答案第二十七讲(半)开放作文(1)one possible version：tracking my growththe process of growing up is complex for every person, for there are many influential factors in ones growth as well as the development of his personality. as for me, what have affected me most in my both growth and personality are family and friends, the two equally important factors.after one is born, what he is exposed to is the family in which he will grow up. family plays a significant role in shaping childrens characters because it is childrens most direct source of knowledge and experiences. those who are brought up in good families tend to possess many pleasant characters and vice versa.on the other hand, friends in some ways influence him more rapidly than families do. friends have many different opinions and personalities. discussing with them helps build up his personality. frankly speaking, i have learnt a lot of valuable things from my friends.family offers me warmth and care. friends give me strength and horizons. therefore, both of them are most influential in my growth.(2)one possible version：we all know the feeling of walking through life as if we are carrying the huge burden of our worries and stresses on our backs and shoulders. no matter how smart we are, how capable we are, or how hard we work, no one can cope with all the worries alone in the course of our lives. there is no real way to move freely in such a situation, and we are all longing to lay our burdens down.the human imagination is a powerful tool, and we can use it to take journeys to faraway places without leaving our home. because of this, we too can lay our burdens down at the feet of a mountain.to begin with, sit with your eyes closed and see yourself carrying a large box, imagining that all your worries are inside it. watch as you make your way to a mountain, and lay your bag down at its feet. feel the lightness and relief of this action and express your gratitude. you will be amazed by how this can liberate you from a burden you were never meant to carry.(3)one possible version：dear meng meng, you are in trouble all the time, i know. sometimes you are late with your homework and get punished in the morning at school. sometimes you are misunderstood by your parents and they are angry with you and even shout at you in the evening at home. most of the time, you feel frustrated with the poor test marks.i wish you could learn a little restraint. you might try saying “no, thanks. i cant go to the party with you, for i have homework to do.” and “mom and dad, please listen to me to explain.” so many terrible mornings and so much emotional awkwardness could have been avoided by being firm and patient.behind your blank stare, some thoughts are beginning to stir. you think you might go to your ideal university. its a good idea. dont panic about failure. life is full of trial and error. leave all your discouraging pessimism behind. everything happens for the best.i like you and i will never like you so much again.love，meng meng(4)one possible version：honesty makes a difference“who did this？” asked my teacher once more. she seldom became angry, but she was this time. she held up a piece of broken glass and asked, “who broke this window？”i was the one who broke the window. i had not meant to do it. it was caused by an inaccurate throw of a basketball. if i admitted it, i would be in a lot of trouble. how would i be able to pay for a big window like that? i didnt even get an allowance.“my father is going to have a fit，” i thought. i didnt want to raise my hand. but then a force much stronger than me changed my mind. i had to tell the truth.i couldnt believe what happened the next day! my teacher went to my desk with a book i was longing for and