高考英语一轮写作综合训练14.doc

2014届高考英语一轮写作综合训练14第一节：完成句子阅读下列各小题，根据括号内的汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子。1. so _ (地震发生得如此突然) that no one managed to escape from their collapsing houses. (occur)2. _ (天气真好) it is! lets go for an outing today. (weather)3. it is said that the new model car _ (快两倍) than the old one. (run)4. it was not until the baby girl was sound asleep _ (父母才有时间) to deal with their personal affairs. (have)5. _ (无论我怎么努力), my parents never seem to be satisfied with my work. (try) 6. by the time the police conclude the investigation, the truth of the murder _ (会水落石出). (light)7. the point i want to make is _ (做一名志愿者) is rewarding, for it not only helps others, but also opens up opportunities for young people. (be)8. i am occupied now. id rather the meeting _ (明天开). (hold)9. _ (得知所发生的), the man fell in deep thought, staring vacantly into space. (inform)10. the plane may be several hours late, _ (那样的话) theres no point in our waiting. (case)2013高考英语（书面表达）开放式作文写作三要素（1）北京市春季高考和夏季高考英语试卷率先增加了开放式作文，占15分。开放式作文已经成为今后高考书面表达的一种趋势。开放式作文可以给学生提供更多自由发挥的空间，从而充分考查学生的语言表达能力，这就拉开了考生分数档次，便于高校分层次选拔人才。这种形式的书面表达代表着高考命题的发展方向，一定会极大地促进英语写作教学。一个全国性中学师生重视开放式作文写作训练的时期已经到来。 纵观全国及各省、市高考试卷，有很大程度上选用了开放式作文的模式，因此对高中学生进行开放式作文写作指导已显得非常重要，本文以北京卷拟谈开放式作文写作要素。 一、分析提供情景，落实开放之处 开放之处即放开之处，就是书面表达可放开来让考生发挥性写作的地方。要弄清书面表达的开放之处，必须认真分析材料提供情景，落实已知信息与所求信息。 请先看2003年北京市高考英语开放式作文： 根据下面提供的情景，写一段连续文字。词数不少于30。 you are talking with one of your close friends about your plans for the summer vacation. you say to him, im going to enjoy myself in the vacation. he asks, what exactly are you going to do to have fun? you tell him what you want to do to make your vacation great fun. be sure to use one or more examples to show what you mean. 参考范文： ill go to a beach to see the seabirds flying in the dark-blue sky and drive a motorboat, sailing through clear water toward the rising sun. then ill surf the website， play games on freee， or chat with friends online about hot movies like the lord of the rings and harry potter. 认真分析所提供的材料，我们可以弄清下表所示的信息。 参与人物i,- a certain person人物关系close friends人物关系意义相互关系融洽，表达自由随意事件主题how to have fun in the summer vacation.主题已知内容i can use one or more examples.可自由发挥内容the deatils of the examples由上表可清楚地看出，举一、二个例子来说明你将如何在暑假中获得乐趣，就是该书面表达的开放之处，也是作文的主要写作要点。 二、思考材料给定特点，确定写作人称、体裁和写作特点 认真分析所给材料，不难发现材料所提的几个you / you应表达为i，这样文章就有了准确的人称。由写作材料中的you tell him what you want to do to make your vacation great fun.可知，计划描绘性说明文是本文的写作体裁。显然，文章应说明将参与哪些活动，从而获得暑假乐趣，这样，文章一般将来时的时态特点和以时间为顺序的叙述特点就十分清晰了。 2003年北京高考英语试题参考范文清楚地说明了这一点，文章运用第一人称，以时间为线索清楚说明了我的暑期有趣的计划，全文显得条理清楚，层次清晰，脉络分明。 *结束第二节：写作 is this a good phenomenon?as thousands of high school students continue to search for university places, an increasing number of school leavers are choosing not to go to university and go straight into work. john is one of the many. he managed to get a job at a department store six months ago. he explains why he decided to give up the chance. when i left school i was thinking about going to university but i didnt really want to go, so ive been full-time for about six months, he said.这是英国泰晤士报的网站上一个名叫career and jobs的论坛里的一个话题。请你在论坛上就此现象发言，表明你的观点并陈述理由。 注意：字数100左右； 不用写标题。1. suddenly/ abruptly did the earthquake occur 2. what fine/ wonderful weather 3. runs/ can run twice/ two times faster/ more quickly 4. that her parents had （the）time 5. no matter how hard i try/ however hard i try 6. will have come to light/ will have been brought to light 7. that being a volunteer/ that to be a volunteer 8. was held tomorrow 9. (when he was) informed of/ about what/ the thing that (had) happened 10. in which case/and in this case sample writing i think this is a good phenomenon. firstly, university is not suitable for everyone. high intelligence is what it takes to study at university. if you are not lucky enough to be born smart, university is apparently not the place for you. however hard you try, working towards a career which you are not good at will not get you anywhere. secondly, interests and talents play a vital role in your success of career and happiness of life. having explored your talents and found out where your real inter