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2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（16）及答案【2014高考英语湖北省荆州市一模试题】短文写作(共1题；满分30分)请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。itdoesntreallymatterwhetheryourglassishalfemptyorhalffull.bethankfulthatyouhaveaglassandthattheressomethinginit.注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。短文写作评分要求一、评分原则： 1本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2先根据文章内容和语言初步确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3词数少于100和多于200的，从总分中减去2分。4评分时主要关注：内容齐全、应用高级词汇、复杂语法结构及连贯性。5拼写与标点符号，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，但英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6如书写较差，以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求： 第五档（2530分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。有较强的语言运用能力。第四档（1924分）完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉1、2个次要点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯；达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（1318分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯；整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（712分）未基本完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（16分）未完成试题规定的任务。明显漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求；语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。0分 未能清楚地传达给读者信息：内容太少，无法评判；无关内容或所写内容无法看清。三、说明：1内容要点可用不同方式表达。2对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。3结尾与上文内容衔接紧密，合乎逻辑。【参考范文】短文写作（30分）one possible version: in our journey of life, its our great fortune to meet with something or someone. be grateful for what they bring us and cherish what we have, no matter they are rich or poor, happy or sad, good or bad. just like our drinking glass, whether half full or half empty, we are lucky to have such a glass and own what there is in it. take helen keller, a famous american writer as an example. deprived of sight and hearing by a disease, she became disabled when she was young. instead of feeling depressed and complaining “why me”, she chose a positive attitude to life and regarded what she encountered as the best gift god gave her. bearing gratitude for life within, she met with her lifelong teacher sullivan and finished her famous novel “three days to see”. it was the painful times of her life that made her stronger, wiser and more loving. though pain is inevitable, suffering is optional. when we are experiencing hard times, it becomes more challenging to be grateful. be grateful for our life with all its lessons and blessings, and success and happiness is just around the corner! (190词) 【2014中原名校联盟一模】书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是高三学生李华，看到同学们互赠纸质新年贺卡，认为这会造成浪费和污染。请你根据下列要点写一篇100词左右的英语短文向校英语报投稿，建议大家使用电子贺卡（e-cards）。1方便快捷：电子邮件传送： 2省钱：网站免费下载； 3内容非富：可增加音乐动画： 4环保：不会造成污染浪费。 参考词汇： 动画animation_【参考范文】one possible version new years day is drawing near and as usual many of my classmates begin to send paper cards to each other, friends and family. i think it is really a waste of money and it can also cause pollution. so i suggest using e-cards instead of paper-cards. first, it is very convenient to send e-cards. it just takes a click and our friends will receive them in one or two seconds. second, free e-cards can help us save money. third, with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. last but not least, e-cards are environmentally friendly as no real materials are used. since they have so many advantages, why not have a try?【2012届湖北省孝感市高中三年级第一次统一考试】短文写作（共1题；满分25分 请根据下面提示，结合你的校园生活中的一个事例，就英语格言（failure is the mother of success）这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。in fact, there arent always bright sunshine and gentle breeze, birds singing and flowers fragrant in our daily life. we have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success, but life is what you make it.注意：1无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；2除诗歌外，文体不限；3词数为120左右。【参考范文】 【2012届宁夏银川一中高三第四次月考】书面表达：（满分25）假如你是李华，是个集邮迷，在别人的帮助下，现已经收集到120 多个国家和地区的近万张邮票。你有一个大胆的想法，想申请“收集邮票最多的人”的吉尼斯世界纪录。 请你用英语给吉尼斯总部写一封信，咨询一下问题：1. 是否可以申请2. 目前这个纪录的详细情况和相关的规则3. 交费问题注意： 词数：100左右（开头和结尾已经写好，但不计入总词汇） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 参考词汇： 吉尼斯世界纪录：the guinness world recorddear sir/madam, my name is li hua and i am from china._ yours, li hua【参考范文】dear sir/madam, my name is li hua and i am from china. i like collecting stamps very much and i began collecting them ten years ago. and at present, i have collected nearly 10,000 stamps from more than 120 countries and areas. i would like to apply for the guinness world record as the person who has collected the most stamps in the world, but i dont know whether you can accept my application. if you do, would you please tell me about the present record details and the relevant rules ( related rules) about it so that i can prepare? besides, i also want to know how much i should pay to make this record attempt. i am looking forward to your early reply. yours, li hua 【2012届兰州一中12月月考】书面表达 （满分30分）在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师上课时只用英语，还是英语汉语兼用？某英语杂志就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕“how do you prefer your english classes to be taught? in english only, or in both english and chinese?”这个话题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。注意：1只选择一种授课形式；2词数120个左右授课形式一： 只用英语 授课形式二： 英语汉语兼用优点： 有助于提高听说能力等 优点：易于理解等缺憾： 不易听懂等 缺憾：英语氛围不浓等结论： 结论： 【参考范文】书面表达范文（ 1 ）i prefer my english classes to be taught in english onlyas we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study english wellclasses taught in english provide students with such an environmentwhen english is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportunities listening and speakingtherefore, they will be able to learn more quicklyhowever, there are some problems with this teaching methodas we havent mastered enough english words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacherslow learners may even lose interest in englishpractice makes perfectto learn english well requires a lot of practicetherefore, i like my english classes to be taught completely in english （ 2 ）i prefer my english classes to be taught in both chinese and englishin my opinion, learning english is a step-by-step processas middle school students, we only have a small vocabularyif the teacher can use some chinese in an english class, we will understand the lesson betterof course, an english class taught in two languages has its shortcomingssuch a class cannot create a good atmosphere for english learningsome students will speak chinese all the time and cannot learn english wellif you want to learn a lesson well, you have to understand it firstto help students understand the lesson better, the teacher should use chinese from time to timetherefore, i like my teacher to use both english and chinese in teaching【2012届潍坊市第一中学高三阶段测试】写作（满分30分） 假如你叫李华，你的加拿大笔友james想了解一下你要参加的2012年全国中学生英语夏令营的有关情况，请根据以下信息给他写一封回信，并邀请他参加你们的活动。营址大连活动时间2012年7月底，共4天参加人员1.全国中学生英语能力竞赛获奖者2.中国，美国和澳大利亚的英语老师活动内容1.举行英语演讲比赛2.观看学生表演3.游览大连风景名胜4.交流英语学习经验注意：1.信须包括以上提供的内容要点，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯； 2.词数：1201