高考英语二轮限时高效训练 短文改错5.doc

2014高考英语二轮限时高效训练：短文改错51.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该词下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。today i was having a pe lesson while i fell down and hurt my foot. i was in greatly pain at that moment, but i tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. though i had difficulty walk back to my classroom, i still didnt tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. as result, the hurt in my foot became worse. now i know i was wrong. we can tell others our need for help and accept his help. some day we can not help others in return. in this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.2.此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。looking at the map of the world, and we can see that three quarters of the earth are covered by water. however, we are short of water, it sounds strange to you. but it is true. you see, 97% of the total water in the world is sea water, which is so salt that man can drink it. so only 3% of the water can be drunk or used for man. and the drinkable water comes from rivers, lakes and underground. man even cant use them completely, because the water contains icebergs and glaciers. all what is the worst is that water in some parts has been polluted or is being polluted. how can we drink? so something must be done to protect water from polluted. 3.短文改错one day a child was playing with a vase in great value. he careless put his hand into it. hard as he tried, he could not pull it out. his father tried his best, too, but their efforts were in a vain. they were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said,“now , my son, why have one more try? open your hand or hold your fingers straight as you saw i doing, and then pull.”to his surprise, the child says, “i cant hold my fingers straight like that, because i dont want to drop my penny.” thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the worlds worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberation.4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。health is more important than wealthgood health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our lifeand achieve what we hope in our careerto keep fit, firstly, it is much important for us to take morefruits and vegetable because they provide vitaminsand we should keep a balancing diet and avoidfood what is rich in sugar and fatsecondly, wed better exercise every day to make our bodies asstrongly as possiblebeside, we should avoid too much work pressurefinally, we should get rid ofbad habits that damaged our health, such as drinking and smokingif we stick to the advice givenup, we will lead a healthy life5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误和修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。steve was ten years old. he was a very good pupil, nor did he like doing his homework. when he did his homework, he always made a lot of mistake. one day, his maths teacher went over steves homework, see all his answers were right. he was very surprised instead being pleased. he asked steve to explain what has happened, “ you have got all your answers correctly this time, steve. did anyone help you?” as the matter of fact, steves mother often helped him with her lessons. and that evening, she was not able to because she wasnt in. so steve answered, “ no, sir, my mother was busy last night, so i had to do the homework all for myself.”6.英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。3必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。it was snowing heavily monday morning. li hua was at the bus stop, waited for bus no.601 to go to school. after the while, the bus came and she got on it. there are many passengers in the bus. some were talking but some were looking out of the windows. suddenly the bus stopped. the driver turned around and said, “sorry. the bus has been broken down. please get off and help push the bus.” when we heard this, li hua and the other passenger got off the bus. they worked hardly together, pushing the bus slowly backward. soon the bus was running again. all the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.试卷答案1.today i was having a pe lesson while i fell down and hurt my foot. i was in whengreatly pain at that moment, but i tried to act as if nothing has happened until great hadthe class was over. though i had difficulty walk back to my classroom, i walkingstill didnt tell 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