高考英语短文改错抓分练习（1）.doc

2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习（1）及答案【甘肃省天水市一中2013模拟】 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） （请在答题纸上作答，否则无效）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 last saturday, mom and i went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. when we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. there were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. finally, under the help of the shop assistant, he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. immediately, we returned back home to show itto my grandpa. seeing it, he was very happy and couldnt wait to put on. but we were annoyingto find something was wrong with the zipper. hurriedly, i took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem .to my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smilingcontently. how delighted i was! 参考答案 may 18，2013短文改错：last saturday, mom and i went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. when we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. there were so many of them that it variousspent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. finally, under the help of the shop assistant, took withhe selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. immediately, we returned back home to show itweto my grandpa. seeing it, he was very happy and couldnt wait to put on. but we were annoying it annoyed to find something was wrong with the zipper. hurriedly, i took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem. to my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose to was another one patiently. stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, standingsmiling contently. how delighted i was! 【命题趋向】短文改错是一项主要测试考生的判断能力，观察能力、纠错能力语言基础知识及语言的综合运用能力。短文改错的趋势：1.改错短文以记叙文和说明文为主 。2.文章内容贴近学生生活，没有生僻词汇和复杂的结构，文章简单易懂，错误设置也很简单，多为学生平常作文中常出现的错误。3.短文一般100词左右，错误有9处。4.常见错有三种:错词、多词、 缺词。错词占60%左右【错误类型】 1. 错词 2. 多词 3. 缺词 4. 正错【考点透视】一错词的热点1 动词时态 语态 非谓语 ；主谓关系。2 联系词关系代词和关系副词；连词；连接词。3 名词可数名词 、不可数名词，可数名字的单复数变化。4 介词介词和动词的搭配错误。5 形容词/副词词类错用。6 冠词定冠词和不定冠词的错用。7 代词人称代词；物主代词；反身代词。8 惯用法固定句型，固定短语。二多词和缺词热点 1. 冠词2.介词3.副词4.代词5.关联词6.小品词 to【短文改错主要特点】1. 语言材料取自于学生的习作。 2. 短文为贴近学生生活的话题或学生身边事。 3. 短文难度符合学生水平。 4. 语言简单易懂。 5. 没有生僻的语言现象或繁难的语句结构。【例题解析】一 错词1.动词错误：（1） 时态和语态、主谓一致的错误。【1】整体时态： *then i ask him “grandma, how come you have so much lines on your hand”全文为故事，故ask改为asked。*high over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon.the hole became bigger and bigger.全篇使用过去时态，故改discover- -discovered【2】主谓一致*having fun with their friends make them happy.动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数形式makes。*but the most wonderful thing about jack were his musical ability。主语为the most wonderful thing 故此，系词为was*but not all information are good to society.主语不可数，所以动词用is。（2.）动词错误：*in american big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.(buy)根据句子意思，数千人买票去看比赛。故sell改为 buy。（3）非谓语动词【1】动名词错误*i am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future.(seeing)解析：to 为介词，故此see改为seeing* not only play football makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.解析：主语应为动名词，故play football改为playing football【2】现在分词*the air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming down.解析：分词做定语，故keeps 改为keeping*i found a small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.解析：with a light shone 改为with a light shining。a light和shining为主动关系。【3】不定式*i just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.(become)解析：help sb do sth 故改becoming为 become *he did not want share things with others.解析：want to share sth. want后可跟不定式做宾语。【4】过去分词*i have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.解析：have sth done, some records和give是被动关系，故改为given。2连词错误：*i came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.解析：根据句意，“我看到他们中的一个人走进厨房，并且打开灯。”两个分句子之间是并列关系。故改but为and*we would return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day.解析：考查宾语从句，pick up 缺宾语，故改that 为what*the classes helped me understand what the world works 解析：根据句子意思，“这些课程有助于我了解世界是怎么运转的”故改what 为how。*he was silent for a moment. so he answered slowly: “each of these lines stands for a trouble”解析：根据句子意思，so 改为 then/and3.形容词/副词错用：*you always gave me specially attention. 解析：名词应该被形容词special修饰。*it is real a good chance to have met all of you here.解析：副词really修饰系词，故改real为really。*my hometown has taken on a new look.how great it has changed !解析：great修饰动词，故改为：greatly 4.冠词错误：*this is my first visit to a american family.(an)解析：american 第一个音标的音素是元音，故用an.*each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team.解析：有定语修饰，the特指captain.*suddenly, i caught a sight of my english teacher in the crowd.解析：固定搭配catch sight of.故此去掉冠词a。5.代词错误：【1】反身代词*i just smiled to me and thought, 解析：主语和宾语相同，故此memyself 。【2】形容词性物主代词*besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interesting.(his -their)解析：主语是第三人称复数，因此try ones best 【3】it/that/them /us*i thought that was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball to each other.解析：that不可以做形式主语，故改为it。*it was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain.the three of them were very excited.前后人称错误。故此改them为us.6.名词单复数和名词的所有格的错误*she marked strictly on students performance.(students)解析：根据句意，学生们的表演，故改为students performance*physics is one of the most difficult subject for us (subjects )解析：one of说明后面为复数形式。*we practice three times every week and often watch football match on tv together.解析：常常看比赛，故此match改为matches.* i have no papers to write on.解析：纸不可数，所以改为paper7.介词错误*he left shanghai at a cold night.解析：一天的部分被修饰时，介词用on,*i am a new comer of a small town.解析：根据句子意思，来自一个小镇come from a small town.* i was caught by the rain last night 解析：固定短语be caught in the rain 遇上雨。8.语意错误*thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.解析：句子意思：数千人卖掉票去看足球或者篮球比赛。故此错误，sellbuy *not all people like to work and everyone like to play.解析：句子意思：并非所有的人都喜欢工作，并且所有的人喜欢玩。语意错误，应该为转折关系，andbut 。短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该词下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。 this morning i found red wallet on the campus. girls usual like red, so i believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student. i opened it, try to find out whose it was. therefore, i found nothing but 300 yuan in it. i was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates chen yang passed by. she suggested she put up a lost and found notice and i did so. i wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it. later, a girl came to claim it on 3 oclock this afternoon.【参考答案】短文改错：this morning i found red wallet on the campus. girls usual like red, so a usuallyi believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student. i opened it, try to find out tryingwhose it was. therefore, i found nothing but 300 yuan in it. i was wondering howeverwhat to do with it while suddenly my classmates chen yang passed by. she when classmatesuggested she put up a lost and found notice and i did so. i wrote down my itelephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it. later, a girl askedcame to claim it on 3 oclock this afternoon.短文改错（共10小题, 每小题1. 5分, 满分15分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（_）, 并在该词下面写出修改的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。li ming and wang ying are two students of senior three. they all work hard but they have different learning method. li ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. as a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. but he has to stay up late and doesnt get enough sleep. however, wang ying has quite the different way of learning.