高考英语大一轮复习 第三部分 写作增分攻略 八 吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式课件 牛津译林版.ppt

学案八吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式 写作运用探究 写作时 如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚这一层次 只选用一些普通的词 或一律使用简单句平铺直叙 那么习作就会显得呆板 单调 没有可读性 要想写出高分作文 不仅要把要求表述清楚 而且还要尝试使用高级词汇与复杂句式 如能运用恰当 哪怕只用上一 两处 也会为习作增添色彩 给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象 一 运用高级词汇三原则1 标新立异 恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高级词汇 会彰显自己的水平 高考佳句 i llthankyouifyouthinkaboutmysuggestion i llappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionintoconsi deration 福建高考满分作文 ireceivedyouremaillastweek butiambusypreparingformyfinalexam whichisimportantforme soididn treplytoyouwithoutdelay ireceivedyouremaillastweek butiambusypreparingformyfinalexam whichisvitalforme soididn treplytoyouwithoutdelay 山东高考满分作文 asaresulttheplanwasafailure theplanturnedouttobeafailure 辽宁高考标准范文 we lltryourbesttoimprovetheworkingconditions we llsparenoefforttopromotetheworkingconditions 山东高考标准范文 2 短语优先 写作中 要想写出 亮点 就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力 多使用词组 习语来代替一些单词 会使短文内容丰富 表达更有力度 增添文采 高考佳句 toachieveone sdream onemusttrytoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach toachieveone sdream onemustmakegreateffortstoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach 北京高考满分作文 what smore wecanpouroutthetroublesweface andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects what smore wecanpouroutthetroubleswearefacedwith andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects 重庆高考满分作文 totellyouthetruth idon treallylikeyournewnovel totellyouthetruth ireallyshownointerestinyournewnovel 湖南高考满分作文 3 手法多样 在表达相同或相近的意思时 要尽量避免过多地使用同一个单词 用其他相应的词或短语来代替 这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富 实在找不到 可以变更说法 曲径通幽 或许会有更好的效果 高考佳句 ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches 江西高考满分作文 itshowedmethatthewayofeducationincanadaisquitedifferentfromthewayofeducationofchina itshowedmethatthewayofeducationincanadaisquitedifferentfromthatofchina 湖北高考满分作文 即时演练 用较高级词汇代替黑体的单词或短语1 weallhavethesameopportunity 2 moreandmorevisitorshavebeenattractedtothisplace 3 theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses 4 we lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus 5 icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous 6 wouldyoupleasehelpmetoturndowntheradio 答案1 possess2 anincreasingnumberof3 challenging4 promote5 putupwith6 domeafavor 二 运用高级句式的七大策略1 运用被动语态 重点更鲜明 高考佳句 wewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstothemarsthroughouttheworldby2015 aboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtothemarsthroughouttheworldby2015 广东高考书面表达 i mdelightedtoknowthattheshanghaimuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectingthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas i mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheshanghaimuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectingthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas 上海高考满分作文 2 运用强调句 重点更突出 高考佳句 thepeoplewhoobeytherulesmatter itisthepeoplewhoobeytherulesthatmatter 2015 江苏 书面表达 withouthesitation idecidedtofollowthemandwehadlotsoffunthatday withouthesitation idecidedtofollowthemandwedidhavelotsoffunthatday 2015 浙江 标准范文 ourparentshavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward it sourparentswhohavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward 重庆高考满分作文 3 运用倒装句 语言更活泼 高考佳句 itnotonlyaffectsoureverydaylife butmayalsothreatenpeople slives notonlydoesitaffectoureverydaylife butmayalsothreatenpeople slives 2015 江苏 书面表达 iwassoexcitedthaticouldn twaittotrymyhandatridingit soexcitedwasithaticouldn twaittotrymyhandatridingit 2014 福建 满分作文 thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy 福建高考满分作文 4 运用省略句 行文更简洁 高考佳句 maybeitisabetterideatotakeoutdooractivitieswhenyoufeelbad maybeitisabetterideatotakeoutdooractivitieswhenfeelingbad 2014 安徽 满分作文 areyoulookingforwardtotheprize givingceremony sure it llbeheldfrom15 00to17 00 lookingforwardtotheprize givingceremony sure it llbeheldfrom15 00to17 00 2014 辽宁 满分作文 asitisscheduled englishtalentshowwillbeheldtoday asscheduled englishtalentshowwillbeheldtoday 2014 陕西 满分作文 althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart althoughfacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart 山东高考满分作文 5 运用感叹句 感情更强烈 高考佳句 fromtheexpressionontheface iknewmymathteacherwassurprised whatasurprisedexpressionwasonmymathteacher sface 2015 湖南 满分作文 itisaverysplendidmoment howsplendidamomentitis 辽宁高考满分作文 6 运用with复合结构 分词 短语 等 结构更简明 高考佳句 ourschoolliesatthefootofamountain thereisariverflowinginfrontofit atthefootofamountainliesourschool withariverflowinginfrontofit 北京高考满分作文 theteachercameintothelecturehall manystudentsfollowedhim theteachercameintothelecturehall followedbymanystudents 广东高考满分作文 ipickedupthecase ishoutedatthemanloudly buthedidn thearmeandrodeaway afterpickingupthecase ishoutedatthemanloudly butherodetoofasttohearme 湖南高考满分作文 7 运用虚拟语气 表达更传神 高考佳句 imissedbeinghitbythecarwithyourhelp withoutyourhelp iwouldhavebeenhitbythecar 安徽高考满分作文 itishightimeforbothlocalgovernmentandresidentstotakeeffectivemeasures itishightimethatbothlocalgovernmentandresidentstookeffectivemeasures 福建高考满分作文 8 运用复合句 句式更多变 高考佳句 tooursurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings whatsurprisedusmostisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings 重庆高考满分作文 itwasquiteanexperienceforbothofus andiwillneverforgetitfortherestofmylife itwasquiteanexperienceforbothofus whichi llneverforgetfortherestofmylife 陕西高考满分作文 9 运用it句式 表达更丰富 高考佳句 personally drinkingplentyofboiledwatereverydayisnecessary ithinkitnecessarythatweshoulddrinkplentyofboiledwatereveryday 陕西高考满分作文 我认为我们每天喝大量的开水是必要的 what sworse somedrivers cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkobeyingtrafficrulesisvital what sworse somedrivers cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules 2015 江苏 满分作文 更糟糕的是 一些司机 骑自行车者和行人没有认识到交通规则的重要性 youshouldprovidesomemoneytofundourprogram aswellasofferussomepracticalsuggestions that sourdesire it sourdesirethatyoushouldprovidesomemoneytofundourprogram aswellasofferussomepracticalsuggestions 重庆高考满分作文 我们渴望你能为我们的项目提供一些资金 还能提供一些实用的建议 即时演练 按要求转换下列句子7 aboveall wemustdosomethingtostoppollution 用被动语态 8 irealizedtheimportanceofenglishwhenienteredseniorhighschool 用强调句 9 wedon tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth 用倒装句 10 ifitisn twellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 用省略句 11 wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday 用感叹句 12 becausetherewastoomuchnoise icouldn tgoonstudying 用with复合结构 答案7 aboveall somethingmustbedonetostoppollution 8 itwaswhenienteredseniorhighschoolthatirealizedtheimportanceofenglish 9 notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue 10 ifnotwellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 11 whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday 12 withthenoisegoingon icouldn tgoonstudying 单句跟踪演练 请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的画线部分1 hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup 2 developingveryquickly theinternetcausesthebreakdownofface to facecommunication 3 whenyouareboredwiththepeoplesometimes you dbetterfindaquietplace listeningtosomeclassicalmusic 4 hedidn tlistentowhatisaidintheclass 5 suddenlyithoughtofanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse 6 assoonashearrived hebeganhisresearch 答案1 determined madeuphismind2 givesriseto3 fedupwith4 turnedadeafearto5 icameupwithanidea anideaoccurredtome6 on uponhisarrival 按要求转换下列句子1 ididn ttakehisadvice soifailedintheexam 用虚拟语气 2 ifitisso ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime 用省略句 3 wecanachieveourgoalinthisway 用倒装句 4 muchtooursurprise maryfailedinthefinalexam 用名词性从句 5 becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable 用短语代替从句 6 ifyougothroughthegate you llfindtheentrancetobearcountry 用并列句 答案1 ifihadtakenhisadvice iwouldn thavefailedintheexam 2 ifso ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime 3 onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal 4 whatsurprisedusmostisthatmaryfailedinthefinalexam 5 thankstothegoodweather ourjourneywasc