广东省张静中学高考英语一轮复习 书面表达训练题（10）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（10）附参考范文光明中学英语俱乐部最近在招聘英语角的组织者，假设你是李华，想申请成为英语角的组织者，请按下列要点写一封申请信：1擅长英语口语，参加过许多英语活动；2有信心做好这项工作；3申请成功后的打算。注意：1词数130左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear sir/madam，_yours，li hua参考范文：dear_sir/madam，i am li hua，a student in senior one.im writing to apply for the position of the organizer of the english corner.im good at spoken english and often take part in various english activities.i am sure that this job will bring me a lot of experience in organizing activities and communicating in english.i believe i can be a successful organizer.if i become the organizer，i will organize a series of activities，such as english song singing contest，english lecture，english movie week and so on.i would appreciate it if you could give me the chance.yours，li_hua*结束英语的书面表达题是高考的重要组成部分，是对英语学习综合运用能力进行考查的题目，在高考中占有相当大的比重，而许多学生，在此方面失分很多，以致影响了最后总分。但在平时训练与高考应试中如能掌握其解题要领与技巧，得分可能比前几道题型容易得多。那么，如何训练学生的书面表达？要领与技巧又是什么呢？ 一、加强词汇学习，夯实英语基础 英语词汇是英语最基本的单位，离开了单词，学英语就成了无本之木，无源之水。词汇是写作的基础，记忆和背诵是让学生扩大词汇量最传统、最简单的方法。首先要求学生背诵高考词汇表；其次，帮助学生将单词、词组归纳整理，进行比较，强化记忆。 二、从基本词汇的运用着手，强化五个基本句型的训练。 在掌握了基本词汇的基础上，反复训练，熟悉并掌握五个基本句型。 1 主语+系动词+表语 the farm looks like a large beautiful garden. 2 主语+谓语（不及物）（+状语）。 after visiting some places, we were singing and dancing in an open area. now great changes have taken place in our school. 3 主语+谓语（及物）+宾语（+其它） he likes english very much. i want to borrow some books from the library. i found (that) the driver was a woman. 4 主语+谓语（及物）+双宾语（+其它）。 my english teacher offered me some books on english study. yesterday i met the expert who once gave us a talk on the computer. 5 主语+谓语（及物）+宾语+宾补 the teacher let me have a try. he asked me to support him up. we made li ming our monitor. who had the windows broken? 另外，除以上五个简单的基本句型结构外，还应让学生特别注意it的常见句型。 如： (1) it was 7:15 on the morning of feb.8, 2000.（表时间） (2) its only half an hours walk from here to the picnic spot. （表距离） (3) its fine / clear / sunny / cloudy / raining / snowing. （表天气） (4) （形式主语或形式宾语） its necessary for us to learn english well. its my duty to clean the blackboard. i think it very important to learn by heart as many useful expressions as i can in learning english. 在写作的开始阶段，要狠抓基本功训练，培养学生良好的写作习惯。句子是文章的基本单位，在学生掌握五种基本句型，能写出正确的简单句之后，适当多做汉译英练习，发挥汉译英在高中英语写作教学中的作用，它是训练学生连词成句的必要手段。这样的练习，不但能使学生了解汉语和英语在表达方式上的异同，而且能提高他们学习英语的兴趣，提高用词的准确性。笔者每天坚持让学生做3-5句汉译英练习，由易到难，循序渐进，夯实学生连词成句的能力。 三、在句型训练过程中，打好语法基础。 句子和语法是分不开的，平时，要反复训练使用常见的英语句型，对常见的语法内容（如时态、被动语态、情态动词、非谓语动词、定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句等）要进行专题训练，力求达到熟练运用。例如：我在复习教学中每天运用一种时态和一种句式让学生进行造句训练，逐步达到句型结合时态熟练运用的效果。 四、注重写作形式，提高写作兴趣与能力。 在掌握了词汇、句子及语法的基础上，紧密结合课文，进行变式训练，让学生多做仿写、改写、缩写等形式的写作练习，这样才能逐渐掌握扎实的写作基础知识，综合所学知识，进行书面交际。如学习了madame curie, captain cook等有关人物介绍的文章后，我先把高中所有有关人物介绍的文章做个归纳，分析比较常用的三段式写作，总结比较常用的一些句型。然后以图表、文字说明或以话题的形式布置相关的人物介绍类的写作任务，如：bill gates, my teacher等。这类练习既可以使学生运用所学的语言知识，巩固所学内容，又可以学习所学文章如何组织材料，加深对课文的理解，提高学生的语篇能力，还能调动学生的积极性，使学生感到学有所用，从而引导学生学习初步的写作技巧，拓展学生的思维。 五、多背范文，重视表达或体会其中的表达方式。 高中学生尤其是高三学生如果没有充分的时间练习写作，多读多背一些英语范文，也是有帮助的。让学生熟读、熟背好文章、好句子、好段落、谚语、俗语，可以使他们熟悉英文的习惯用法、英美人的思维方式，使自己写出说出的英语地道、准确。 通过训练，学生有了一定的知识储备并形成了初步的应付较单纯书面表达的能力，但写作的应试技巧也是十分重要的。在平时的书面表达专项训练中可采取以下步骤： 1. 审题定位。定格式、人称及时态。仔细阅读要求，认真审题，明确情景含义，弄清文体和写作格式，确定人称、时态。 2. 确定内容要点。列出要表达的每一个信息。（一般为6-8个要点），并理顺要点，分清主次，写出重点词组。 3. 草稿。根据词、句、段、篇的要素顺序打出草稿。注意语言的规范性；多用常用词，不用生僻词；多用简单句，少用或精用复合句；尽量用学过的词组、句子；多用学过的规范、现成的句子，避免汉式英语；巧用关联词，过渡要自然，结构要合理。 4. 认真修改润色、誊写。文章写好后要进行认真复查和修改，注意：要点的完整；动词的时态、语态；主谓的一致；语句的通顺；段落的衔接、过渡；单词的拼写等等。最后工整地誊写，重视书写的规范、整洁以及标点符号和大小写的正确运用。力求美观大方，不失感情分，但应粗略注意词数范围，还要注意把握好时间。 总之，高考书面表达的最终完美体现既依赖于基础知识的扎实和语言的正确使用，同时还取决于写作的应试技巧。只要我们平时坚持定时、定量，按解题要领训练，一定会有所收获。*结束作文（*） 今年5月31日是第21个世界无烟日，英文21世纪报计划举办一次征艾比赛，主题是青少年吸烟问题。请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛： 1绝大部分青少年吸烟者认为暖姻蓝禧粳酷，氆禾套马上对身体产生危害，只要在危害到来之前戒掉就是了。 2请你驳斥这种观点，应包含以下信息：吸烟浪费金钱，浑身气味，牙齿肮脏，上瘾会致癌，患心、肺疾病；冒丧命之险追求时髦没有益处；戒烟要抓紧时间。 3提出一些帮助人们戒烟的建议(至少60词)。 注意：词数130150，文章标题已绘出，不计入总词数。smoking is not cool and quit now _one possible version：smoking is not cool and quit now most young smokers say smoking is cool and doesnt hurt us fight nowpeople can just stop before it gets dangerous but in my opinion，smoking is not cool at allin addition to the waste of money，smoking makes you smell bad and makes your teeth dirtybeing addicted to cigarettes will poison your bedy with cancer causing byproductsdying of lung and heart disease or cancer wont promote your popularitydont quit until its too late-smoking begins to damage your body the moment you start to quit you should first set a date and quit completely on that daythen find out the times you are most likely to smoke and make a plan about what youll do instead of smoking at those timesfor example，take a walk when feeling stressedtake exercise to resist the desire to smokelet your friends give you a help reminding you if necessary*结束作文（*） 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友peter想和家人来中国定居，请你帮他在city a和city b两座城市中做出选择。下面的图表是对这两座城市在就业、安全、娱乐和气候等方面的对比。图标左边的数字表明人们对这两座城市的喜爱程度。请根据图表提供的信息，给peter写一封信，提出你的建议并说明理由。 2可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。3信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear peter， im so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in china_ nevertheless，this is only my suggestion and its up to you to decidehope to hear from you again yours， li huaone possible version： may l7,20* dear peter, im so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in chinaafter a careful study of the information about the two cities，i suggest you choose to live in city afirst of all，the climate in city a is more pleasant than that in city bas we all know，good climate will benefit our healthbesidesthere are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourselves in your spare timeafter all，both cities are almost equally favorable in safetyas for the employment，though the job opportunities are not so good as those in city b，yet i dont think its a problem for you as a teacher of englishif i should choose，i would live in city a nevertheless,this is only my suggestion and its up to you to decidehope to hear from you again yours,li hua *结束3.下图描绘的是中国当前教育中存在的问题。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。 【参考范文】3. the two pictures look so similar at one glance, but they are totally different. in the first picture, a peasant boy, carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw hopes to have a school to attend. in the second picture, a student is on his way home from school, a heavy bag of books on his back. he wishes he didnt have to go to school any more.the two pictures show some problems in the present education system in china. in the poor c